Azur Lane: There's Something Very Wrong with This Commander

It's a very good novel. Although the description of the protagonist's state of mind in the early stage and his fear of becoming the main commander conflict with the setting that the protagonist has a magnificent past life, it doesn't matter. The setting is meant to collapse. The author's great writing style makes up for this. The author writes more carefully, but some readers who are accustomed to reading cool articles on Tomato may feel a little uncomfortable with some of the strategies (laughs). Overall, it is good-looking. The author should work hard!

The logic is clear, the protagonist is rational, the story is high, the writing is good enough, and the character core of each ship girl is well understood, and it will not fall into the single side of ship girls who only want to overthrow the commander. There are fewer blue fanfics these days than the Mongolian navy. I have to treat this kind of treasure like a god. I see more and less every day and I am afraid that the author will no longer produce food. There is no reason to rate it so low.

Only now do I understand why the rating of this book is so low. It turns out to be because people like to write about ship girls that involve politics and camp opposition, and there is very little interaction between the protagonist and the ship girls. I like that the author can interact as much as possible between the male protagonist and the ship girl without affecting the plot. Come on😊

How can I put it? I gave it one less star because of human nature. I imagined that living with the shipgirl would be at least happy. This book tends to be cold. I don't know how to describe it. There is friendship and affection between the shipgirl and the shipgirl, but the description doesn't show it at all. It's just a lackluster kind of emotion. But using the ship girl to take revenge was very emotionally written, and some of the details were spot on. In the final analysis, the book is very good, with some problems but not too many, and less poisonous (the reaction of the top management is a bit too simple, and the aliens are deliberately exposed in advance...). It's just a pity that the world view is too different from what I imagined.

I stayed up late for a few days to finish reading it, and it was quite satisfactory. The rare thing is that the protagonist is not just a loser who only relies on the ship girl. The outstanding advantage is that it is long enough and enjoyable to watch. The author has carefully watched the plot of Azur Lane, and there is no cheat. The abilities are all the protagonist's own experience and knowledge. I'm still shocked that the Azur Lane fanfic has written four million copies.

It's okay. The writing is good. Except for the protagonist who is a little too frustrated at the beginning, everything else is okay.

First of all, the progress of the growth-type protagonist is slow. If you don't like the slow start, don't try it. Secondly, I hope it won't collapse. The protagonist's design is quite to your liking, so don't be powerless, dear author Yo Xidi [laughing] [laughing]

The reason why not many people read it may be that it is too serious and does not require mindless intimacy with ship girls or anything like that. However, I still hope that there will be more content about daily life and daily life, so please ask the author. And I also admire the author's perseverance, it's really amazing 👍 It gets much better after chapter 600. I like it very much. New readers must stick with it.

The writing is pretty good 🤭, but some people who don't like the alien world feel that it's a bit of a drama 🥺

God! Really God! I have read Chapter 1578 so far. I have never had the habit of writing book reviews before. This is the first time I want to write one. ૮ﻌა From a plot point of view, it may be a bit frustrating in the early stage (probably before Sakura Sakura), but it really slowly becomes stronger and begins to influence the world. It is rare to see such realistic and reasonable but delicate writing. It is an absolute masterpiece among Bilan fandoms! Love watching ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა One of the more abrupt designs is probably that of people from another world, but it only appears in a few plots and does not affect the later viewing experience at all. The writing style of the book is very good, the setting respects the official setting, and the plot advancement is also very reasonable. Overall, there are no poisonous points. The author's skills are really good, and the description is balanced and excellent in both combat and daily life. The most important thing is that he is a commander with brains and strength! This description really makes me think that the protagonist has the strength to lead hundreds of ship girls and command an important force in Blue Star. As well as the daily emotions between the protagonist and the ship girl, from dull to warm, it really gives people a sense of reality that would be the same in reality. The author must not stop updating 😢 I saw it relatively late, so I enjoyed reading 3.8 Million words in one go. I strongly support it. Come on, the author @halfwakebanjiechun ( ˃̶͈ ꇴ ˂̶͈ )