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This book will definitely be completed and will not be abandoned.

Like narrating history, component subdivision is reduced. The main thing in a novel is the protagonist Don't waste too much text on history, otherwise it will feel like you are only talking about history and ignoring the protagonist himself. The writing is OK, and the settings are also OK. It can appropriately add atmosphere to the protagonist. Otherwise, it will be very uncomfortable to take it all away.

I have been following this book for a long time. When I saw this book for the first time, I immediately thought of Zhongli as the god of Liyue, who has witnessed the history of Liyue for thousands of years. Zhongli traveled to China and witnessed the history of China. As a recorder of history, the stories of the past may be buried by time, forgotten and distorted. I think there are similarities between the two. The author's inspiration for writing this book may also come from this, but the author's writing style is still a bit immature, and some of the words used are not accurate. But the author is still a student, which is understandable. I hope that the author can hone his writing skills in the future and continue to create [Sending Hearts]

The fan fiction is very beautiful. The author is tall and mighty, handsome, wise and courageous, has an extraordinary voice, is romantic, has a beautiful tree in the wind, is mature and steady, is humorous, is unparalleled in the world, unprecedented, and smart people must not stop updating, and keep the quality. Thank you [almost crying] [asking for attention] [asking for updates] [top post]

Nice! (Loud) (Flying around) (Singing) (Throwing flowers for the wife) (Twisting with joy) (Praising the wife) Madam, you are so productive and I love you so much😭😭😭

I personally feel that the author's writing style is good. The content is probably about recreating the history of China from the perspective of the god whom the people believe in (Zhongli). The author has said that this is an imaginary world, so deviations in the history or the personalities of historical figures can be basically ignored (but I still hope to restore it). The protagonist Zhongli's personality is also relatively consistent, and it is worth reading.

Very interesting, good luck to the author!

May I ask when can I write about modern times? Or during the Anti-Japanese War, uh, do you think you would intervene in Yuchi? The writing is quite good, but I feel like it should speed up a little faster. This history is meant to be faster.

The author writes very well and has a clear purpose. To be honest, I really want to see Zhongli's feat of destroying the sun. What a pity. After all, I am not suitable for reading this kind of novel.

It's so awesome. It's so awesome. I personally think it's very beautiful.

Very good. I hope the author can at least maintain the quality of his future articles, otherwise it will be a pity [laughs]

The writing is very good, but isn't it a little short, author? It's short, author, you're too short, but your writing style is okay. Please update it for me!

It's super good-looking. Why is no one reading it? Woohoo, good books are buried. Brothers, you must read it and give it a try. It's really good-looking. Zhongli is not OOC at all! !

Come on, author, I think it's still very interesting.

Big cheers for the author!

If you dare to break the chapter...

Wow wow wow, it's so beautiful, it's really amazing

I have read a lot of Zhongli's articles. This author is the best I have ever seen. Come on, author [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Attention]

This book is well written and looks at it from the perspective of witnessing history without interfering too much.

Are there any forces, guardians and others who follow Lord Yan?

It's good to read, and the most important thing is that the author said he would never abandon the book.

Very good, very Zhongli

Very well written history

See it as a spectator of history

The character design is well written. I personally recommend intervening in history. After all, there is no way to avoid interference without observation.

It's well written, and the characters are vivid and vivid. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Not bad. It fits the character of the old man very well. It is the most consistent among all the Zhongli I have watched.

It's my favorite type. Zhongli's character design is almost not broken. It's well written and I like it. However, the content is more daily, there is no pretentiousness or tampering with history.

Already pushing the book shortage

He gave it a 9-star rating, but unfortunately he could only give it a 5-star rating.