Damn, My System Is Pretty Easy to Fool

Man, it's awesome, especially the final reflection and summary. It really makes sense. The question I feel is whether the substitute messenger and the immortal cultivator are compatible, and how to balance the combat power between the two. When I watch it, I always feel that it is very vain and unimaginable. I don't know if it is because the scene is not described well or because the JOJO painting style and the immortal cultivator painting style are too conflicting. The substitute messenger suddenly thinks of JOJO. This style of painting is difficult to be compatible with. It's true that I didn't see the foreshadowing as you said, but the protagonist's character is changeable (high EQ: changeable. Low EQ: conflict). In the past, he was a person who would be angry with the mortals in Zuihua Qiongge. Later, he suddenly killed his fellow disciples as a sign of submission. It felt too abnormal. There was less psychological description. Maybe it was because the outline later said that it was unrealistic to have two protagonists. It was a good idea.

The setting is quite thoughtful, with a substitute messenger and immortal cultivator, which is suitable for leisure time during the book shortage. It's finished, it's guaranteed.

It's pretty good. The author also analyzed his own shortcomings and problems very well. The writing is at least in line with my taste. Even if it's a mess, he has roughly written the ending. Unlike some authors who don't have anything.

Five-star support. Although the author has done a lot of self-reflection, I think the overall viewing experience is very good, and there is no bad writing. After all, it has been proven after reading it. I don't know what to say, I wish you the best [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The protagonist has intelligence and structure, this is what a time traveler should look like!

Not bad. From the end, we can see that the author put a lot of thought into the concept and the center of the novel, but due to various reasons, it was not written well. The author also summarized it. I hope the author's subsequent works will get better and better

It's so short and it ends so unexpectedly

The general outline is still okay, but the text is a bit bloated. Come on...

It's good, but it's too short. It's the first time I've seen such a short article.

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