Good Grief! Every One of My Disciples Is an Empress

Your typos and garbled characters have affected normal reading. Can you write it carefully?

The dogs shook their heads after seeing this

I feel like there are a lot of typos

Let me tell you, first of all, I like the content and overall story structure of this book, and the story direction is not bad. The character of this book is also one of my XPs. However, the author was not attentive enough when coding. There are a lot of typos that particularly affect the viewing. I hope this can be corrected.

I gave you five stars because this kind of book is my favorite type (recruiting disciples), but what you wrote is really messy. When I read the first few chapters, I replied to his first disciple saying that he had broken through the Nascent Soul, but a few pages later, he said that he was only in the early stage of foundation building! (Half a day later, Su Chen had already broken through to the Nascent Soul realm) (Su Chen himself was in the early stage of foundation building) contradictory!

I don't care about the plot, I can make do with it, but your sentences are a bit messy and need to be condensed. There are also many typos. After reading a few chapters, the most impressive thing is that he and she are not distinguished. After writing the manuscript, I also proofread it. The readers will feel comfortable, and the score of the book will go up.

The options are normal, but the reason for the choice is really inexplicable. It seems like a multiple-choice question deliberately asked for this option and the reasons given casually, which makes no sense. And I feel that the relationship between master and apprentice is so cold. Disciple is always called apprentice, and disciple is called disciple.

To be honest, no matter how good the plot is, you have a lot of typos, the word order is wrong, and some parts are very strange. For example, the master uses "two" instead of "you" when talking to his disciples. Wouldn't you find it strange when you read it yourself? Anyway, I couldn't stand it after watching it for a while.

It feels almost the same as having a book 🤦🤦🤦

There are many typos, some sentences are confusing, and the characters and plots are not clearly explained. It is invincible and awkward.