[Revival of spiritual energy + 7 protagonists in the main group, 4 men and 3 women + may have knives + outrageous skills] Ten years ago, the spiritual energy of the earth revived, the earth's multi-dimensional barrier was broken, monsters, secret realms, and even other races appeared one after another. With the help of major races, humans gained the ability to awaken supernatural powers and began to counterattack the monsters... And today, many years later, a new generation of strange boy Xia Se turned out and brought with him a large number of outrageous skills...
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Come on, Sister Susu! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Overall, it's okay, but it's a bit verbose. It's Chapter 49 now, I don't know what will happen in the future (*'▽'*)♪
The most important thing is that for those "ten points", you can say "ten points" or something and then put them together with "ten points", but you have a few paragraphs where they are all ten points (although I can't find it, but I remember that one very deeply)
If you are a novice, don't add emotional scenes in the early stage, or add less, and you can slowly add more later, or find an experienced person to help you change it.
Come on, Sister Susu! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Overall, it's okay, but it's a bit verbose. It's Chapter 49 now, I don't know what will happen in the future (*'▽'*)♪ The most important thing is that for those "ten points", you can say "ten points" or something and then put them together with "ten points", but you have a few paragraphs where they are all ten points (although I can't find it, but I remember that one very deeply) If you are a novice, don't add emotional scenes in the early stage, or add less, and you can slowly add more later, or find an experienced person to help you change it.