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In the Beginning, the Hero's Wife Betrays Him, and the Second Hero Takes Revenge.
In the beginning, the hero's wife betrays him, and the second hero takes revenge.
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The Wife Made a Mistake and Left, but Now She Seeks Forgiveness from the Hero
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Go Through It Quickly, the Original Owner Is Bai Yueguang
I want a novel where the original protagonist of Quick Travel is Bai Yueguang. I don't want the heroine to become Bai Yueguang. What I want is that the original protagonist is Bai Yueguang.
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Flaws do not cover up strengths. Think more carefully about the character dialogue. For example, when you are sarcastic to your wife, the wife should not say a word. After all, it has not been made clear yet. Silence means acquiescence, and the wife should pretend to say a few words to argue or be angry. In terms of characterization, don't always emphasize who and what kind of person. It would be better to let readers judge the character by themselves through detailed descriptions. Nonsense, just for reference [face covering]
Objectively speaking, the author's writing is pretty good, but subjectively speaking, the author can make the language more tactful, especially when cooperating with He Wan, he does not have to always treat himself as an uncle. In fact, there is no He Wan and there is no male protagonist today. To avenge yourself, you have to help others.
It's okay. It's rare for a male protagonist in a cuckold novel to be timid and have the intelligence to take revenge.
I hope the male protagonist won't be a bitch and don't be soft-hearted In the end it sucked