[Fanfiction] + [Naruto] + [Cultivation] + [Overpowered Protagonist]
Dongfang Lan transmigrates into the Naruto world and unexpectedly discovers that he has brought along a legendary Daoist scripture. He comes up with a plan: win over Uzuki Yugao!
On the eve of the end-of-term exams at the Ninja Academy, Uchiha Sasuke steps up to challenge him. Dongfang Lan, who has been pretending to be a nice guy all along, says he’s done pretending, then smacks Sasuke flying with a single slap.
Defeated, Sasuke stares at him in confusion. “How are you this strong?”
When the old fox Hiruzen Sarutobi voices his doubts, Dongfang Lan turns the table on him. “You old geezer, if you make my wife take another dangerous mission, I’ll send you into retirement early!”
Hiruzen Sarutobi: “???”
Uzuki Yugao looks blissfully happy. “He said I’m his wife!”
When the Ōtsutsuki army descends upon the shinobi world, they are astonished to discover...
“Who is that kid...? Isn’t that Kaguya? Why is she standing beside a lowly human?”
“She even looks happy?”
The Ōtsutsuki Clan’s Grand Elder says, “You... Join us. Our clan has always valued talent!”
“If you join, you can take your pick of women at Kaguya’s level!”
Dongfang Lan has this to say: “That’s so Ōtsutsuki!”
It looks good. The boss is cultivating immortality. He should write about weapon refining and magic weapons. For example, those magic weapons in the world of mortals cultivating immortals are very good. Magic weapons and natal laws can also be written down. Those ninjutsu are weird, right? I practice a magic weapon that is specially designed to trap people's body and soul, such as the Linglong Pagoda. I trap you in it, and I think you are weird [laughter] If you don't have enough magic weapons to gather together, which immortal cultivator have you seen who is tough? It belongs to a reckless man. As long as he is a cultivator, he has all kinds of trump cards, a lot of magic weapons, and a lot of shady things. Don't just use your imagination [laughter]
It's very good. Although it has flaws, I think the flaws do not outweigh the flaws. Among books with many cool articles, it is already very good to be able to write a book that is at least logical. The only flaw is the issue of realm. I have been reading fantasy for more than ten years and have collected many Taoist books on inner and outer elixirs. So in my opinion, there is something wrong with the author's understanding of realm. The first is Qi training. What is Qi training? Refining Qi into essence. What is this essence? In a broad sense, this essence can be anything that represents energy, but in a narrow sense, essence is the essence of the body and the essence of the outside world, that is, aura. Chakra, on the other hand, is power obtained at the cost of squeezing one's own potential. Between one plus and one minus, in the ninja world, the higher the level of ninja, the easier it is to be defeated. Even in the middle stage of Qi training, it should be equivalent to the shadow level, and in the later stage, it will be the super shadow level, because in terms of life level, the gap is no longer a little bit. Then there is the foundation building. There are many theories about foundation building. Some say it compresses spiritual energy and turns it into spiritual liquid, and some say it casts a spiritual platform in the Dantian. But in fact, foundation building, whether it is spiritual liquid or spiritual platform, is laying a foundation. Therefore, the foundation building period is not such a big leap. The foundation building period is not enough to fight against Otsutsuki. This is a fact, because foundation building is consolidation, but the improvement in strength is not obvious, because foundation building is to prepare for the golden elixir. I think the golden elixir is the leap in strength of the immortal cultivator. The spiritual energy is transformed into the Dantian to form a nine-turn golden elixir. At this time, the immortal cultivator can be said to be overwhelming. It is not a problem to move mountains and fill the sea. Otsutsuki is sent as soon as he comes. As for crossing the void, some secret skills are needed, but it is not a big deal. Starting from the golden elixir, the immortal cultivator has completely separated from the identity of human beings, and the entire life level has begun to move toward gods.
Not bad, keep up the good work
It's a very good book. Why don't many people read it? I highly recommend it. Don't be discouraged, author. We will always support you. Come on.
I hope I can accept Xiyan as soon as possible
I've been writing for a long time and still haven't gotten to the topic 🙂
The timeline is okay, after all, this is a comic, come on