Starry Sky Railway: the Dragon Girl, the Bright-Dwelling Dragon Girl, Has Abundant Faith

Author, Lily Harem, I am optimistic about you~ This book is quite good, but it has one flaw, that is, the protagonist is not very good at flirting... As for who to flirt with, I can't explain... [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] I feel that the author should highlight his core selling points. For example, the protagonist spends three days to kill Estan... Personally, I think the author should drive here and rub the edges... Ahem...

Five-star praise is given, and I only ask the author not to update more [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Personal evaluation is that the setting is very good, but there is a problem. The problem is that the plot is too dependent on the plot of the game, or it is too tied to the plot. The plot interpretation in the game is through the superposition of various processes, such as running pictures, formal plots, and puzzle solving. The play time will be very long, but this summary in words alone is not much at all. In other words, the character design of the protagonist not only needs to rely on the improvement of the original plot of the game, but also needs more original plots and more variables, so that it can be used in large quantities. The plot in Terra is a very good attempt, it can be said to be the ecstasy of two chefs. But the biggest problem now is that we know too little about the protagonist. As for me, I really want to know more about the Demon Alliance, and I also want to know what happened to the protagonist before meeting the protagonist's group, the intertwined relationship with other forces, and in-depth understanding of the protagonist's plans for the future and views on the past in various senses. And tell me what I think about Terra. Compared to the fact that the protagonist does not appear as the planner, I prefer the protagonist's unrestrained reactions with his partners as an entrant into the game, and his insights, opinions and solutions to various things. But I don't know what everyone will think. This is how I feel. Although I can see it clearly and my writing skills are still very green, I support the author.

The ideas are clear, the organization is clear, and the characters are well handled. It is a rare and good book.

Family members, I am so blue, thin, and sad. I originally read this book when the main character was still in Belloberg, and then I forgot to rate it until I went to school. I didn't remember it until I went to school. I've been there for nearly a month, and it doesn't prove that I am a veteran anymore.

It's okay😄very good😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

The writing is very good, the plot is exciting, and I'll keep up with the new content soon! ! ! !

The plot of Xianzhou has come to an end, author, come on! [Laughing] Did Yinyue get it? [Laughing]

Author, I give you a five-star review for no other reason than you. Can you give us two updates a day?

Hehehe, get five stars directly.

I beg the author to finish writing this book and just keep updating it [Like]

A pretty good short story, just too short, but it can be read as an over-the-top novel

Good looking(○｀ε´○) Just a little more would be nice(ง •̀_•́)ง

Lily Harem, I really enjoyed it.

Alas╯╰The author's evolution failed

It's time to eat, it's time to see, okay

Very good, don't give up, I really like it [shy]

No comment, I can only say that I am happy [laughing evilly]

Come on, author, come on!

Very exciting, worthy of storage

Come visit the grave, brothers.

Good book, but it's a pity that the author seems to have no inspiration for this part.

It's nice, but it's too short, and the number of words is very small.