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The overall concept is okay, but when writing this kind of book, you need to pay attention to the combat power system, otherwise it may collapse if you don't pay attention. You need to write it as realistically as possible. Also, the reward options provided by the system should not be too biased towards one side, otherwise it is easy to be criticized if the rewards are good while the rewards are good at the same time. (Many people in articles about choosing a system stumble upon this, because the large reward gap may make people feel that his choice is not necessarily his true idea)

It can be worth a look.

Not bad. So-so

Really good, just a little bit lacking