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It's very interesting, the male protagonist is also well written, he has a good personality, I like this kind of person who is hot on the outside but cold on the inside, it feels very cool hahahaha, of course it's just a personal opinion. The author's writing of the plot is also good, unlike some fan fiction where the male protagonist is unable to walk when he sees the beautiful character in the original work. The female character is also well written and does not have too many scenes, but it still plays a role. I didn't say that I wrote the plot to draw out the characters, but I wrote the characters for the sake of the plot. I hope the author will continue to innovate, it is still very interesting. If possible, please don't write a female protagonist. Of course, this depends on the author's own ideas. The last thing is, it's really beautiful, cheers for the author! ! ! Recommended! ! !

It's over. Goodbye hybrids, goodbye Dragon King, goodbye Su Ran. Thank you to the author for writing the ending, which is a heartwarming ending for our youth [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It took me a few days to finally read it. The overall feeling is really good. It was quite satisfying to read it in one go. Some settings and character designs in the book are also settings that have been discussed a lot by the public. Of course, apart from the fact that the sisters received a little too much (it would have been even better if it was Eri Yi's pure love), I don't mind this, and it is still a book worth reading. Five-star praise sent~ Finally, I still have to say something He knows nothing about the Dragon Clan in Jiangnan! !

It's pretty good. At least the current plot development is not off track. It's quite good to read. Although there is a system, at least it's not so bad yet. I just want to improve my strength faster and speed up the progress of the plot. I hope you can play it steadily, brother, and don't write it down. I hope the system can slowly fade away in the later stage. I hope that the Word Spirit can be upgraded instead of acquiring other Word Spirits. Watching people keep getting Word Spirits is really a bit embarrassing and distracting. I can't continue to comment. I'm the first commenter on this article. It's still too short. I finished reading it in less than half an hour. Come on.

I can only say that for a little dragon man, this book is really a dream come true [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]. The writing style of the article and the quality of the plot are completely acceptable [punch out][punch out][punch out]

Five-star praise. As long as Dragon Clan fans can finish it, regardless of starting point or tomato, it can be worthy of real five-star praise. In terms of the choice of the heroine, in my opinion, not accepting Nuonuo is the best setting. Many fan fictions are robbed by the sister-in-law and feel uncomfortable, but this one is good. The time point of accepting Xia Mi is also good, and it doesn't feel like senior brother NTR at all. Lu Mingfei also thoughtfully left a Xiaoqiang. Ye Shengyaji's Dzogchen, Fengo Eva's Dzogchen, the little devil has a physical body and follows Mingfei every day, Anger unties the knot in his heart, and he has a happy ending. Let me give you a final ranking. Personally, I think Dragon Clan is in the top 5 or 4 of all the fandoms on the Internet.

The first few chapters may be a little bit more poisonous [smile], but it does not affect consumption. Around the 30th chapter, the author's writing style has improved greatly, and it feels like a different person. [Laughing evilly] The portrayal of each character is very good, especially Concubine Ming. In the latest chapter, I am with the little goddess. Personally, I feel that she is the most modified concubine in the fanfics I have ever read. She has the characteristics of a childish child, and does not hesitate on important matters. She is already a real S-level [blowing kiss] Finally, let's talk about the general plot. The heroine Mai and Enxi, Lao Chu and Su Xi are together, Xiami Tang and Constantine are not dead, Eryi is raised as a daughter, and Ye Sheng and Aki are also fine! [Shy] Finally, I hope everyone will do better and better, so that more people can see such high-quality fan fiction. One more thing: the author updates three times a day is too few, please work hard [send heart] [angry] [angry] I feel like I have been reading the longest in the entire comment section. Finally, I would like to add that the protagonist of this article will not steal other people's highlight moments, but he also has his own handsome side. It's not that the more heroines the better, the author will describe everyone's growth. I hope the author can write the dragon in my heart [top post] [please update]

Very good. The previous writing was not very good. If there are any flaws, I suggest you revise it. When it comes to Chapter 30, that is, when the protagonist goes on a mission for the first time, the writing suddenly becomes much better? It's like it was written by someone else. Simply put, this novel is worth reading, and it can be read with your mind. You can just take a rough look at the beginning, unless the author takes the time to revise it carefully.

The writing style is very close to Jiangnan, but not as obscure as the original version. After reading the original version, I won't feel hindered when reading this one, but I feel very comfortable reading it. The plot arrangement is also reasonable and it is very enjoyable to read [Cool]

It's super cool, but the protagonist's weapons and swordsmanship skills could be updated.

It's a very satisfying Dragon Clan fanfic. I'm very satisfied with the plot and characters, and the plug-ins are not particularly strong. Overall, everything is quite logical. The harem is pretty good, and the explanation about the broken body is also very good. You are also very reasonable. Everything else is pretty good.

It's very comfortable to read. The male protagonist should be active and restrained, and he doesn't always revolve around the concubine. It's completely different from those stories about nannies. I'm looking forward to the plot, can you please also accept it? I feel like it's really not worthy. It would be better if there were more, it's not enough! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

This is really the best dragon I've ever seen. To be honest, Jiang Nan knows nothing about the Dragon Clan, he is just a writer of bad fan fiction. And the story line of this book can be said to be perfectly integrated. The writing style will not feel abrupt. It seems like this is how it should be. And they didn't break up the other couples. When I first read the comics, I thought the wet nurse group was really great, but if it was forcibly given to Lu Mingfei, I felt that the loser was a bit unworthy. There is a happy ending for everyone. I really enjoyed reading it. If it weren't for the purpose of deliberately lowering the score, in my mind this novel would have deserved the perfect score. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

In simple terms, the writing style needs to be improved, and there are some areas where it is too much, but as a fan adaptation, the storyline is good, and it is more suitable for readers who are not too old. Because older readers will pay more attention to the description of the writing, similar to the fact that the principal and vice-principal are mentioned many times in the article as a perverted side. The principal in the original work is a character who behaves very elegantly and has a very charming personality. This article describes too many scenes of his two lustful characters, which also leads to a bad impression. I hope the author can continue to work hard and improve himself in the future [blowing kiss]

The writing style is between the upper and middle reaches. It does not suffer from the problem of many dragon fandom authors who want to restore the old dog's writing style but use too much force to make it look dramatic and awkward. It should be descriptive and lyrical. The hooking is very ruthless, the protagonist is also very good at using hooking, and it is also very outrageous. It is a cool story that makes you have an intracranial orgasm, but I still respect the setting. The rhythm is also very good, and the logic is self-consistent, so there will be no problem of swallowing up the original settings (although the Jiangnan setting is originally messy... But everyone in the Dragon Clan fandom originally came here with the mentality of making dumplings and having a good time) But it's really a lot of fun. Basically, the original CP has been dismantled, including Chumi, the Monster Group, and Rei Ze, and basically all of them have been accepted into the male protagonist's harem. This can be said to be quite shocking to some readers. The overall review is that as long as Ledo is the heroine and the CP is broken, it is a fanfic worth reading.

A semi-invincible story written by a Dragon Clan fan. It's well written. The only flaw is that there are too many girls. Of course, whether single or harem, different readers have different preferences. The writing and plot of this book are worthy of five stars. It is one of the very few novels on Tomato that I can finish reading.

It is a pretty good Dragon Clan novel that I have seen. It is neither poisonous nor cruel, and the protagonist does not start as a diaosi, nor does he start in Binhai City. His growth rate is fast, his character is dark and powerful, his plot advancement and connection are clever, and he also explains the origins of various characters, especially the Dragon King, which sets him apart from other Dragon Clan fans. The author is still a tentacle monster. With 1w2 updates per day, won't he get stuck? In the early stage, the heroine Mai was quite rare. She had a harem instead of a stud, and she just collected potato chips. Now it seems that both the little dragon girl and the little monster will accept it. The relationship with Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze is very good. The nanny group has been poached, and there is only one mother left, who doesn't seem to reject the protagonist. If there is any flaw, it is that the origin of the system has not been explained yet. This book has rigorous logic and writing flow. It mainly focuses on a person with brains. If the origin of the system becomes a mystery in the end, there will still be some minor flaws. Furthermore, I feel that the protagonist's growth rate has obviously accelerated after defeating Odin. He grew up rapidly during the fight with the White King, and finally tore the White King and Odin apart. The White King has been laying the groundwork for so long, and it is gone once it is gone. But Odin, as one of the best Lao Yinbi in the world of dragons, is so despicable, which is still unacceptable. No matter how you think about it, it seems reasonable that after Odin took Li Wuyue's egg, he was beaten away by Su Ran, and then Su Ran led a group of people to clear the large dungeon of Gattuso's family and the boss of Odin. At present, it seems that this book is coming to an end. I also watched the book go from 7:00 to more than 9:00. I am also writing a Dragon Clan fanfic, but how to unfold my personal ending is a big problem. I hope the author can give me a satisfying ending~

I have read the whole book, and it was still very interesting when I was not strong enough in the beginning. The part from the beginning to the confirmation of the relationship with Mai is very exciting, especially the original plot is very good, but it is not good from the beginning of Dragon 3. It is not a bad writing, but the writing is bland and I have no desire to read it. The part where the male protagonist accepts Emi Elizabeth and Eri in one breath is the most unbearable. Emi and Eri are easy to understand. What the hell is Elizabeth? I have only seen it a few times in total. Chun Chun is a tool in the harem because of his status as a school director. The above is a complaint about the bad aspects of the full text, but overall it is undoubtedly a good work, especially the heroine Mai, who has given a lot of writing, and the original plot with the protagonist is also very interesting. I highly recommend it to readers who like the heroine Mai.

The writing is very good. Even if you have not watched Dragon Clan, you can still know how humble the Jiangnan Green Faced Beast is when facing its senior sister. Everyone, please stop giving me likes. When I see a red dot, I click on it [shy]

In other words, among Tomato's dragon fanfics, it is definitely at the ceiling level, and there is no problem with five stars. The biggest problem is that the previous plot gives people the feeling of a deceptive introduction, tricking people into "killing". It clearly contains multiple female protagonists, but after reading more than 70 chapters, it gives people a strong feeling of sending a female eunuch to pimp a nanny. I originally wanted to abandon the book, but I saw in the book review that the later part is very good, and two female protagonists have been confirmed, so I thought to continue reading a few chapters to test the water. Then for this book, I personally felt that from the time Lu Mingfei appeared, the whole book felt like it was written by a different person. The plot became more interesting and less boring than before. It may be that Lu Mingfei's character made his plots more relaxed and humorous, which could arouse the readers' emotions. Then he got out of hand and stayed up late to catch up on this book, waiting for the author to update it every day. It's almost finished now. For me, this is a multi-female Dragon Clan fanfic with a mid-range, high-speed, and smooth landing. The heroine is Lu Mingze's nanny team of three, Eli Yi, Xia Mi, and Elizabeth. As mentioned at the beginning, it makes up for the regrets in the original work. Lu Mingfei, Chu Zihang, Caesar, the principal, Old Tang, etc., Almost every regret point in the original work has been made up for. I like this kind of happy ending plot! ! ! The ending is too abrupt, I hope the author can write some extras to tell the rest of the story [Like][Like][Like]

The plot is not boring, Mai Shutoku, Su Enxi have been won, Eri Yi has almost confirmed their relationship, Xia Mi, Zero, Elizabeth are not sure yet, overall it is very good, don't worry if you don't have a sword, Chu Zihang and Susie, Caesar and Nono, Lu Mingfei and Xiaotiannu, it is not against the law, it is very interesting to go and see.

It's the best among the Dragon Clan fanfics I've ever read.

I have read many Dragon Clan fanfics, and this book can be said to be the best. This fanfic not only respects the original work and does not tamper with the main outline of the original work, but also has the characteristics of the original work in terms of character and language habits. Unlike some other fans who wrote some characters whose personalities are very different from the original work, and did not make major changes to the main line of the original work, unlike some fans who wrote whatever they wanted without taking into account the logic of the article and the characteristics of the characters. All in all, this fan novel is very well written, with beautiful writing, distinctive character traits, and witty and humorous writing style. It not only makes up for some of the regrets of the original work, but also respects the original work.

I feel that the writing and the plot are both very good [Adoration], but I feel like there are too many plots involving Mai. Why do they have to be there every time they fight? It may be my personal problem, but this book is still very good [Sending Hearts]

Nice looking, love watching The author has finally opened up his own path and made up for the shortcomings of the original work. The plot is quite compact, the expression is quite tense, and there is not too much elaboration. It is a good work in fan fiction. The early plot may be a bit confusing. The author is eager to get into Long Yi's plot, which results in a bit of a lack of connection. But after the protagonist took away Norton's Dragon Cross, he completely let go of himself. Many plots made my eyes light up, and I felt that it should be like this, not Mounan's knife. I think Lu Mingfei in this book is everyone's ideal. From being weak to now daring to swing a knife at King Bai, he is not a coward hiding in a tavern. He has grown up step by step along with the plot. I feel very pleased. Although some of the author's expressions are slightly awkward and confusing, he still works hard on plot control, which satisfies our expectations very well. At the end, three chapters are enough for anyone to read. Even the production team members don't dare to relax so much, so they will update it quickly. [Smile]

It's good to read, and it broke all the knives in Jiangnan's fan book. I have no regrets. Moreover, the writing of this book is very good, the plot is not sluggish, and I don't see any poisonous points.

This is the real original work. The green-faced beast knows nothing about the dragon clan. I suggest that the author publish a physical book privately. I will definitely support it.

It's humorous and interesting. Reading the original work made me feel distressed. Watching this one made me feel a lot better, and I didn't feel like I couldn't stand it. Friends who have complaints about the original work can come and read it. It's quite good [Adoration]

The characters are well described, but I don't like this kind of harem story very much, but compared to other harem stories, it's acceptable. Maybe it's because the dragons were so badly beaten that I can't accept it. I don't know why I can keep reading, so I'll give it four stars!

The best dragon fanfic I've ever seen