Internet cafe small boss vs. Business district boss
[Marriage first, love later + redemption + secret love and pursuit of wife]
When they first met, Pei Zhi, who was fighting, threw the person casually and fell at Shen Huan's feet.
The girl lazily raised her eyelids and raised her feet to step across indifferently.
When they met again, Shen Huan got drunk and forced Pei Zhi to kiss him in the corridor of the bar.
The unruly man bowed his head to her and said softly: "This mole... Do you still want it?"
Ps: In one sentence, a shady man tricked the lost treasure into the household registration book by deliberately making lipstick marks.
Reader comments
First of all, the story center of this book seems to be "Mole". The author's writing style is okay and the characters are okay.
Secondly, the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is too slow! It's been several chapters and I haven't even said a single sentence yet! It was so frustrating to watch. Moreover, during the first live broadcast of the heroine, she said that she was not short of money. After the broadcast, the heroine's best friend said, "Tell me, I don't have enough money." I was completely speechless. She was not short of money. Why did she say this! The number of words in each chapter is also a bit small and the first few chapters have almost no focus! The first few chapters seem to be talking nonsense. I feel that the author wants to arouse readers' interest in reading through the heroine kissing the mole + the previous memories, but no! Written by the author... It feels a bit like a stencil but not like it! My brain couldn't keep up with the story. I didn't find anything outstanding or attractive about the male and female protagonists. The characters were all pretty average. "Mole" seems to be one of the protagonists in eight out of ten romance novels. There's nothing new about it.
Finally, I was lucky enough to meet Shen Huan & Pei Zhi, but we have no fate, so we can only meet again by fate! It's an honor to be the first to review this book!
I love reading all the books written by the author, and I also like this book😍, regardless of whether he has a mole on his face~^ As long as the male protagonist is abusive, I will love it to death.
First of all, the story center of this book seems to be "Mole". The author's writing style is okay and the characters are okay. Secondly, the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is too slow! It's been several chapters and I haven't even said a single sentence yet! It was so frustrating to watch. Moreover, during the first live broadcast of the heroine, she said that she was not short of money. After the broadcast, the heroine's best friend said, "Tell me, I don't have enough money." I was completely speechless. She was not short of money. Why did she say this! The number of words in each chapter is also a bit small and the first few chapters have almost no focus! The first few chapters seem to be talking nonsense. I feel that the author wants to arouse readers' interest in reading through the heroine kissing the mole + the previous memories, but no! Written by the author... It feels a bit like a stencil but not like it! My brain couldn't keep up with the story. I didn't find anything outstanding or attractive about the male and female protagonists. The characters were all pretty average. "Mole" seems to be one of the protagonists in eight out of ten romance novels. There's nothing new about it. Finally, I was lucky enough to meet Shen Huan & Pei Zhi, but we have no fate, so we can only meet again by fate! It's an honor to be the first to review this book!
I love reading all the books written by the author, and I also like this book😍, regardless of whether he has a mole on his face~^ As long as the male protagonist is abusive, I will love it to death.
So pretty! ! !