⚠️The writing is rubbish, don't waste your time reading it.
This is the first time I have written a novel seriously, and it is still a long one. I am addicted to piling up rhetoric without realizing it, and the reasoning process is a mess. The author himself was confused when writing it, and because of the tricky entry point, he could not find a breakthrough, so it is not even interesting...
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On the moonlit night of the Mid-Autumn Festival, both parents died of poisoning, but the government closed the case as a bandit and committed the murder. Was it to cover up the real murderer, or was there something else hidden?
Zheng Yi luckily escaped, but was caught by gangsters on the way to escape, and was thrown into a bloody dark pavilion where he and Zongzi killed each other.
As the only female royal guard in history, she has been a slave for several years in anonymity, just to find out the truth of the matter and give her parents justice.
At the end of the day, I discovered that there was more than one culprit, and it took more than one person to succeed...
Reader comments
This is the first time I write a novel formally, and it is still a long novel. It is really full of ambition but not enough energy.
Before starting the story, I hesitated whether to start writing from the night when the heroine's parents were killed. In the end, I felt that the timeline was too long and the pace would be slow, so I chose to start writing from the Zhenwu Camp.
But after writing it, I realized that this pace was still too slow. The process of solving the puzzles in the first volume was not only difficult for me to write, but also probably difficult for the readers to follow.
After all, most of the time I read online articles to relax, and I not only have obsessive-compulsive disorder in choosing words and sentences, but also am too "retro", and the heroine cannot show off her skills. It's mostly boring to read.
In short, this book made me see myself countless times, hesitating between giving up and persevering. But towards the end of the first volume, I regained a little bit of confidence, because now that the heroine is free, there will be more things to write about.
Then when the word count reached the recommendation level, the data could be said to have dropped to freezing point, and the amount given was only single digits or even zero. Sorry, I really didn't have the motivation to persist.
It is of course hypocritical to say that you don't want to make money. But if I really can't make money, at least I can get three or two readers. Even one comment a day is the meaning of perseverance.
Unfortunately, there is nothing.
The system has given up on it. I guess there's no reason for me to continue.
Then I applied for completion, but the review failed and the completion request was rejected.
If you want to end it successfully, you probably need to give the heroine an explanation. For example, they can directly attack the enemy, kill the enemy with their own hands, or even die together.
So I hesitated again. After all, this is a character I wrote. I worked hard in the early stage, but I couldn't bear it when I suddenly died due to impulse.
In addition, in the past two days, the backend showed that a reader had been continuing to read, and I suddenly had delusional thoughts again.
But it's just a thought.
Writing takes too much effort. And in my current situation, there is really no way to waste time. Therefore, this book probably cannot escape the fate of premature death.
That being the case, gentlemen, we will meet again if we are destined.
It took two hours to give the heroine an ending. Don't pursue whether the logic is rigorous.
I hope that one day I can present Zheng Yi's story again. By then, I hope more people can see it.
This is the first time I write a novel formally, and it is still a long novel. It is really full of ambition but not enough energy. Before starting the story, I hesitated whether to start writing from the night when the heroine's parents were killed. In the end, I felt that the timeline was too long and the pace would be slow, so I chose to start writing from the Zhenwu Camp. But after writing it, I realized that this pace was still too slow. The process of solving the puzzles in the first volume was not only difficult for me to write, but also probably difficult for the readers to follow. After all, most of the time I read online articles to relax, and I not only have obsessive-compulsive disorder in choosing words and sentences, but also am too "retro", and the heroine cannot show off her skills. It's mostly boring to read. In short, this book made me see myself countless times, hesitating between giving up and persevering. But towards the end of the first volume, I regained a little bit of confidence, because now that the heroine is free, there will be more things to write about. Then when the word count reached the recommendation level, the data could be said to have dropped to freezing point, and the amount given was only single digits or even zero. Sorry, I really didn't have the motivation to persist. It is of course hypocritical to say that you don't want to make money. But if I really can't make money, at least I can get three or two readers. Even one comment a day is the meaning of perseverance. Unfortunately, there is nothing. The system has given up on it. I guess there's no reason for me to continue. Then I applied for completion, but the review failed and the completion request was rejected. If you want to end it successfully, you probably need to give the heroine an explanation. For example, they can directly attack the enemy, kill the enemy with their own hands, or even die together. So I hesitated again. After all, this is a character I wrote. I worked hard in the early stage, but I couldn't bear it when I suddenly died due to impulse. In addition, in the past two days, the backend showed that a reader had been continuing to read, and I suddenly had delusional thoughts again. But it's just a thought. Writing takes too much effort. And in my current situation, there is really no way to waste time. Therefore, this book probably cannot escape the fate of premature death. That being the case, gentlemen, we will meet again if we are destined. It took two hours to give the heroine an ending. Don't pursue whether the logic is rigorous. I hope that one day I can present Zheng Yi's story again. By then, I hope more people can see it.