I Was a Rich Young Master, but I Reincarnated as a Beautiful Heiress

Come on! You are the new heir to the wedding ceremony

Author, I love your books very much. I rushed to the top of the list in one breath. I won't give you a gift until next month. Now I'm number one.

That's what I like. I also fantasize about becoming a woman and marrying a man, but I'm not gay.

The ten stars will be accurate after storing the brain. I think this is the most enjoyable marriage change I have ever seen [laughs evilly]. The protagonist didn't become completely like a girl later on. She also had a bit of a boy's stubbornness, making her feel like my girlfriend was my brother [laughing evilly] (the protagonist was still relatively "lively" and didn't become completely coquettish), and it really captured my sweet spot [laughing evilly].

The pace is too fast and a bit rushed. During your first three years, you could actually write a few chapters to continue telling the story of the school. For example, what happened in the past three years? (How was the female protagonist selected by the talent scout?) What important festivals are there in the school (school anniversary, etc.), And then interspersed with daily life, and you can also intersperse things between the male and female protagonists appropriately to show the heroine's heartbreak. Personally, I think it will not look rushed. As for the second three years, there is nothing much to say. You can also write more, you can write about the sweet daily life of the male and female protagonists (there are so many knives, a little more sugar is not too much) and so on. As for the following story about the little mascot, it may be necessary to change the protagonist slightly. It is best to start a new book. Of course, it doesn't matter if you don't open it, but please don't forget what is the main selling point of your book? Finally, please slow down the pace, it's a bit too fast. I would like to give you some suggestions for the following plot. Now that we are all married, the knife has passed. It's not too much to give out some sweets, my dear author.

It's quite interesting, but I didn't expect it to end so quickly, just 185,000 words long... But in my opinion it's pretty good. Although some parts of the article are a bit sloppy, why is the score only over 8 points?

Very pretty [Like] I admit it, I'm obsessed with it

It's so beautiful, but there are two that I didn't pick up in the review, alas.

I read the second book first, and the day after tomorrow I found out that it was linked to this one. But after reading this book, I found that the second book was removed from the shelves (it happened so suddenly). If I had not ordered Tomato a few days later, I would have felt guilty for the rest of my life. Also, I love reading.

If you are not my friend, you should delete this person. I am fine, but I have a friend who is a brother and sister to me, and I am afraid that he may accidentally look at me and break my guard. I have nothing to fear, hahahaha. This issue should be deleted because it is similar to my friend's experience. However, I have no intentions, no feelings, and I am not one who easily breaks my defenses. However, a friend of mine may be sweating profusely and is not very comfortable and wants to sleep. Of course it's not me. I keep doing it and look at it with the perspective of a bystander, but I won't break my guard. I just want to take care of my friend's feelings. He may be in a state of breaking his guard. Therefore, it is recommended to delete it, but it is up to you whether to delete it or not, because I have no feelings about it, only because I feel unfair to my friends.