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Come on! You are the new heir to the wedding ceremony

Author, I love your books very much. I rushed to the top of the list in one breath. I won't give you a gift until next month. Now I'm number one.

That's what I like. I also fantasize about becoming a woman and marrying a man, but I'm not gay.

The ten stars will be accurate after storing the brain. I think this is the most enjoyable marriage change I have ever seen [laughs evilly]. The protagonist didn't become completely like a girl later on. She also had a bit of a boy's stubbornness, making her feel like my girlfriend was my brother [laughing evilly] (the protagonist was still relatively "lively" and didn't become completely coquettish), and it really captured my sweet spot [laughing evilly].

The pace is too fast and a bit rushed. During your first three years, you could actually write a few chapters to continue telling the story of the school. For example, what happened in the past three years? (How was the female protagonist selected by the talent scout?) What important festivals are there in the school (school anniversary, etc.), And then interspersed with daily life, and you can also intersperse things between the male and female protagonists appropriately to show the heroine's heartbreak. Personally, I think it will not look rushed. As for the second three years, there is nothing much to say. You can also write more, you can write about the sweet daily life of the male and female protagonists (there are so many knives, a little more sugar is not too much) and so on. As for the following story about the little mascot, it may be necessary to change the protagonist slightly. It is best to start a new book. Of course, it doesn't matter if you don't open it, but please don't forget what is the main selling point of your book? Finally, please slow down the pace, it's a bit too fast. I would like to give you some suggestions for the following plot. Now that we are all married, the knife has passed. It's not too much to give out some sweets, my dear author.

Very pretty [Like] I admit it, I'm obsessed with it

It's quite interesting, but I didn't expect it to end so quickly, just 185,000 words long... But in my opinion it's pretty good. Although some parts of the article are a bit sloppy, why is the score only over 8 points?

If you are not my friend, you should delete this person. I am fine, but I have a friend who is a brother and sister to me, and I am afraid that he may accidentally look at me and break my guard. I have nothing to fear, hahahaha. This issue should be deleted because it is similar to my friend's experience. However, I have no intentions, no feelings, and I am not one who easily breaks my defenses. However, a friend of mine may be sweating profusely and is not very comfortable and wants to sleep. Of course it's not me. I keep doing it and look at it with the perspective of a bystander, but I won't break my guard. I just want to take care of my friend's feelings. He may be in a state of breaking his guard. Therefore, it is recommended to delete it, but it is up to you whether to delete it or not, because I have no feelings about it, only because I feel unfair to my friends.

It's so beautiful, but there are two that I didn't pick up in the review, alas.

I read the second book first, and the day after tomorrow I found out that it was linked to this one. But after reading this book, I found that the second book was removed from the shelves (it happened so suddenly). If I had not ordered Tomato a few days later, I would have felt guilty for the rest of my life. Also, I love reading.

Author I want to read Sweet Love!

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Come on, author. This book is very beautiful. Can I write more than 100 chapters?

I didn't expect the second book to be taken off the shelves. It's such a pity.

My favorite in the book is Driver Sun. Without Driver Sun, the family would have been broken up a long time ago. Overall, the plot is very good, but sometimes I feel that the description is not detailed enough, and it will appear to be sadistic, which affects the continuity of the book. And the most important thing is that you don't need to use your brain to read this kind of book. If you read it with your brain, you will feel very strange. Overall, it is very good. I give it a five-star praise!

This is the third marriage-changing novel that I have read in one go. The content is very exciting and the ending is a happy ending. I am looking forward to the author's other novels, so keep up the good work! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's very interesting, but did they get married in the end? The author of the plot is revealed

Author: Why are you reviewing 61-62? What about the critical moment? [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying]

Is there a fan base? I want the missing two chapters.

I really enjoyed reading this book, but the two breakups were so sad.

The book is good. The only drawback is that it is a bit short. Just like the author (or the author's husband)

I was so confused that it was suddenly over. But it's still pretty.

This book is not bad, the plot is clear and the plot is good

I loved watching it, yes, but the first break was a bit forced; the sudden jump in time later was a bit too fast; and the other thing was that the heroine had just sold out the male lead, and they quickly reconciled, which was a bit too fast.

It's very sweet and beautiful, but I couldn't stand it when I first started watching it, but then I lost my mind and got over it. It looks good, especially that one time when Jue split caught me, but the progress was not suitable for me, and it was still too explosive. It seems that I still don't want to give it a try. If you don't like it, please don't comment.

Super pretty! ! ! [Laughs] I really like the story about male-to-female marriage! But I danced a little bit, because I am a lover of sweet stories [laughing and crying] It was too cruel and I couldn't stand it, but it was very good-looking!

It looks good, but the author is too stupid. Chapters 61 and 62 are stupid. Please save me!

It's quite interesting, and it could be a side story, with the heroine's best friend raising a child, and a side story in which the heroine's best friend gives birth to a baby and gets married. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's good-looking, but it's a bit lacking. Just try to make it look like it has more than 700 pictures and 800 chapters.

Dian within a Dian, one of the ceilings of the Married Tomato