1980: Reborn Before My Wife and Daughter Are Killed

It's really a mess, there are too many wrong words, I can't tell what I'm talking about. I don't change the sentences. I won't leave any negative comments. The author should take a look at the chapters he wrote. You, you, you have no idea who he is talking about after the character's name.

Rubbish to the extreme

I really can't understand this book. I feel like the writing is messy. I just started reading it and I can't read it clearly. The writing is also messy. Can such a writer be considered a writer?