Moe Academy: Micro Heartbeat

It's pretty good among Moe Academy fanfics, but I feel that one thing that wasn't handled well is the family line, with Ou Pa and Ou's parents, which felt a bit cumbersome because I didn't feel their dedication to the heroine. On this point, everything else is okay, there is no big OOC, and the adapted plot is not too outrageous. The writing is also pretty good and deserves five stars. Another point is that although many plots replace Titina, I feel that the heroine written by the author is more powerful. It's not that Titina is bad, but Jiang Wei is more active. I don't know how to describe it. Anyway, she is not as passive as Titina, so like a vase (I don't mean to say that Titina is bad)

It's not bad, it's pretty good to watch, but in the later part, because the heroine replaced the identity of Princess Didina Naia, Didina didn't appear, so the part of Didina in the original plot was placed on the heroine. The ending chapters 6 and 70 were like watching a Moe Academy TV series. It's basically the original plot, but the final ending is not procrastinating. The system only exists in the first ten chapters. The relationship between the two is relatively smooth. And for Ouba, the brother, there is not much family drama. It feels like ordinary friends except for the different names.

It's quite good to watch, it's very close to the original plot, and you can immediately think of the scene. The characters of the main characters are not broken, and you can immediately think of them as they were in the show. I really liked watching the interaction between Jiang Jiang and Mi Yaxing, but in the end, I didn't even get to kiss each other [Thinking], but it's still a pity that Piao Ya Piao and the others left. Otherwise, this fanfic would indeed be one of the best I've ever read.

It's very interesting. There's no OOC, but there are a lot of plots where Didina was directly replaced by Jiang Wei. It felt a bit awkward... I changed the heroine to continue the plot, but overall it was interesting.

I've finished watching it, and it's okay, but I don't really feel that Ukenana is back. Mystery is a bit ooc. The plot behind the heroine is still very similar to the original drama Titina. It feels like watching an old friend. The extra parallel time and space is quite interesting. Generally speaking, it can be supported.

It's very interesting, the logic is clear, Ukenana, Urala, Kendouji, Feist are all back, Harry Bobo is also living well in Moe Academy, but why there is no title [crazy]

It can be said to be one of the best written in fan fiction (this is my personal opinion) Plot line: It runs through the whole text, from beginning to end, and there is no unreasonable part. From the season of Guinea Lambo to the season of Soleil's Holy Sword, the whole story is integrated and developed. The simultaneous development of daily life and the main plot is eye-catching. OOC and emotions: There's really no choice in terms of character design. The character design in the TV series has delicate and rich emotions and fits the character itself. Writing style: Having watched the TV series and related fan fiction, the author's writing style is still very good. The whole article is easy to read and the description is outstanding. (I actually didn't have any expectations for it at first because I was already tired of reading fanfics. But while reading, I found that this article was really well written. I saw the progress and growth of the heroine. It didn't happen overnight, but developed slowly. It wasn't mindless cheating. It developed slowly. It really touched my heart.) CP is a mystery star. There are real traces in terms of relationships. Characters and emotions develop mutually. The heroine's character is very attractive, and there are various ways to make up for regrets (there are no brainless ways to make up for regrets, they are designed to fit the plot development and are reasonably designed). I really recommend everyone to read this book.

Barbie looked at the doll with disgust, "A big disaster? A bloody disaster? How can it be that serious?" Ruirui: "Don't believe it, it's very effective." Then Ruirui's experience confirmed this sentence. Cholesterol hits Ruirui, the doll is thrown out, and Ruirui falls; the doll is stepped on, and Ruirui is hit by a ball. Jiang Wei hurriedly picked up the doll, while Ruirui held the baby, covering her head and crying.

I like it so much that I have been following it from the beginning of the serialization to the end of the story. I still feel the same as before. The heroine is not Mary Sue who knows many kinds of magic, nor is she powerful enough to be omnipotent and save all regrets. But it is because of this that I feel that Jiang Wei is like the original character of Moe Academy, instead of always feeling separated! ! ! Ps: The emotional line between Jiang Wei and Mi Yaxing is so well written, I like it! ! I especially like the extras (it would be nice if they were written down, but the blank space like this is also good) and the mysterious monologues

So pretty! ! ! I really like this heroine! ! ! I hope there will be more chapters every day! ! ! One chapter is not enough!

I like this kind of writing. It doesn't interfere too much with the plot, but the protagonist has his own ideas. The most important thing is that the writing doesn't spoil a lot! When reading a book, you really can't read the text or the comment section. Just keep reading if you like, and retreat when you see the minefields. I quite like this book so far. Without spoilers, I can be curious about what the future development will be like [laughing] I declare that this is one of the best cute school novels I have ever read. It is a true and non-exaggerated novel, and it is written seriously and the plot is continued. The last two books that I thought were good-looking were Dian Po and Trying to Survive.

It's very interesting. In fact, I really want to read the story of Mi Yaxing and Jiang Wei in the parallel world.

It's so well written, why doesn't anyone read it? [What]

Like it, highly recommend [blowing kiss]

I like this book very much [laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's very beautiful and makes up for a lot of regrets [shy]

The content is very good, the plot is also good, I like the heroine in it very much

Would you like to see the teachers' extras? [Love]

This is one of the few books I haven't skipped after reading it.

The heroine's character and character are more to my liking, and everyone's descriptions are pretty good.

It's really well written, much better than other cute schools.

Great, you are my favorite Moe Academy fanfic.

Big head big head, the top of this book

Very good! Very nice!

It's a very complete plot

Very beautiful, very attractive to me

Good-looking, really, very good

A very nice book! [Sending Hearts]

Very interesting, worth reading

It looks good, it's really good