Mine*********

Everything is fine, but the ending is too hasty, I hope it can be improved a lot~ Also, Da Kuo Kuo can design it so that the baby who is the best in the world can stay, please Da Da~ ヽ(｡◕o◕｡)ﾉ.

Who knows! ! ! ! I just love reading fast-paced novels like this! ! ! This novel really stepped on my xp every point! ! ! It's not easy to come across this novel that I like [crying] I love you so much, author! ! ! [Top post][top post][top post]

The writing is very good, and the content is quite novel. I just want to give the author a little suggestion. Hey, can you make the ending of each small world a little more complete? Now every ending looks so abrupt, as if it ended suddenly. Finally, I would like to praise the author. He wrote it really well [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

Good-looking and good-looking (○｀ε´○) I really like Bai Bai's character! Come on, the author, go ahead! ٩( 'ω' )و

Big love ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Maybe I have seen too much of the kind-hearted protagonist, and suddenly I saw this kind of self-interested one. I felt a little uncomfortable at first, but later, when I looked at it, I realized that this kind of three-dimensional view is actually very normal. I have worked for the Quick Travel Bureau for so long, uh, and I have to complete a set of tasks after retirement. I was forced to do something I didn't want to do, and I resisted, and to be honest, in that situation, I couldn't guarantee that I would be kind-hearted~ While reading, every time I saw the comments at the end of the chapter, they all said they hated the shitty yellow button, and I laughed so hard, but when it came to me, I really broke down. Anyway, my wife wrote so well, I applaud you, please accept my admiration_(:з∠)_

The author feels that every world is rushed. I want to see the life after completing the mission, which can also be understood as a side story. PS: I am listening to novels, so I may have very little reading time. [Sending my heart to you] The author writes very well! Come on!

When I saw this, the title first attracted me. Secondly, the content in it is amazing. However, when jumping from one world to another, there is not much buffering. Later, it got much better. Then I really like the characters of the two protagonists. Anyway, I am looking forward to the author's update every day. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Every plot really pokes me, Oh my god! ! I love it so much! ! ! Family members, come on! ! ! Pass by, don't miss it!

All I can say is that it's very explosive. I can probably understand it, but it's a bit confusing. It feels like it should be yellow. The author's writing is very shocking. Sure enough, Inhuman is the best medical beauty in the novel [Adoration]

Super invincible and beautiful! It was so beautiful that I rotated 720 degrees in the air, flew away from the earth, went to the little prince's planet, picked the rose, held it in my mouth, flew back, landed quickly and made a big pit of love, climbed up, and gave the flower to the author! (ʃƪ ˘ ³˘)❣｡･ﾟ♡

The author would like to provide more updates. It's really beautiful, but I hope to maintain the quality and avoid unfinished work and discontinued updates.

Looks good, come on! ! I really like the tentacle monster in the first world, so innocent.

? No, I finished reading it all at once. Please don't push me, author, please read more. I love c-hands and stuff the most. I can't resist. It's so exciting!

In my opinion, it's quite nice [laughing], highly recommended, but I feel that each world is a bit short, not enough for me to watch [almost crying] (but I have another problem, if a world is too long, I don't have the patience [face covering], but if it's this book, I should be patient [send heart])

Who knows? To me, the tentacle monster in the first world is equivalent to Bai Yueguang. It's well written [shy][shy][shy]

I really like tentacle monsters, but the author is too slow to update, and the following words don't feel so novel. I hope there can be some interesting creatures in the subsequent world. Please support the author with five stars.

When I first started reading this book, it was mainly because of its novelty. The author's emotional descriptions were actually a bit naive, but now the author's writing is getting better and better, the articles seem smoother, and the plot is designed with ups and downs and is more reasonable. However, there is one biggest problem! ! ! The author will update more every day! ! ! I can't get enough! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

I really love reading this kind of [Adoration]. The author's writing is very good, and he also gives us some small benefits from time to time. You can read more in the comments... (I understand everything) [smile][smile][smile]

The author's creativity and setting are very good, novel and unique. I wanted to read this book after seeing the introduction. However, each world written is too homogeneous, the pace is too fast, the description is too clear-cut, and some connections are too stiff. I hope the author can practice his writing skills and rewrite these settings

Alas~ It's the second time to refresh, it looks very good, but it's a pity that it has been changed a lot~ I really feel that the first world looked good before it was changed or deleted [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

Hehe (ºº ) It's so beautiful, so perverted, I like it so much, I can't get enough of it

This is my first time reading this kind of article, hehe, I like it😍😍

It's so exciting. It's the first time I read this type of article on Tomato. It feels like I'm reading an article in a flower market [laughing]

It's really beautiful, I can't describe it, just watch it yourself [smile][smile]

It's super, super good-looking, but it's missing 100 million points. The author will try his best to update it!

Just came back, it's great to watch, the characters are distinctive, the plot is mind-blowing, the characters are perfectly created, the style is unique and charming, I like it, keep going! Looking forward to better content! The content I like is made up of the work and the author, so the author should work hard to produce it ~ I will work hard to read it!

It's really good, written in big letters! ! The tentacles and stuff are really fun! It's also very astringent! ! I really like it, but the word count is really short! Just look at the exclamation points I used to tell you how much I love this book! But, dear, can you give me more? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this! ! ! This is my first time writing a review! !

Well, when I first started watching it, I actually thought it was just average, but if I stick with it, it's really good! Originally, the most attractive thing about it was that it was inhuman. At first, I was not used to it because it was too short, but it really became more and more interesting as it went on! Highly recommended!

Ah ah ah, it really pokes my xp. I like the tentacles so much, it's not enough to watch.

I think it's very beautiful. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง!

Very, very good! ! Non-human beings are the best xp[cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]