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The book review area is very harmonious. I wonder if some of them have been deleted. First of all, the protagonist has a very good character, has a very upright outlook on life, and is upright and successful; Secondly, the protagonist is a strong ordinary person, very motivated, and he relies on his obsession with his hometown to live hard in the world of immortality. As a result, he has not grown crooked under the tragic experience of the world of immortality. Instead, he has transformed from a clear and inexperienced child into a smooth and upright person. However, no matter how long she has been in the world of immortality, the child cannot identify with it. The cruel reality she has experienced in the world of immortality makes her have to miss the good things of her hometown all the time to support her cultivation. The reality of six years has made the child unable to survive, and psychological problems have emerged. After practicing for so many years, her cultivation level has not improved, she has doubted all her efforts, and cannot see any hope. She is despair, despair, despair... Hopeless. When the child gave up, the culprits who made her despair appeared. In the author's writing, they all described what they did, how they made the child fall into despair step by step, and then they wanted to continue to use the child's righteousness... But the child doesn't understand... The child thinks that they are her hope to return home. However, the child is just the fattest fish in their pond. As long as the fish still wants to live, they can live.

Good-looking, good-looking, patriotic, time-traveling world of cultivating immortals. According to my guess, the spiritual power absorbed by Yun Duo can be fed back to Earth Star in a certain proportion, and then Yun Duo's popularity on Earth Star will also be fed back to Yun Duo to increase the speed at which Yun Duo absorbs spiritual power. The cultivation speed of Earth Star people is linked to Yun Duo's cultivation speed. According to the current plot, it should be like this. It's relatively new and I haven't seen anything of this type before, but the author is a bit short and weak and not enough to read [crying]

Haha, it feels like a very novel book. The author mentioned that cultivating immortals is not against heaven but in compliance with heaven's way. I feel that the explanation is quite reasonable. It's nice to read. I love reading it [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

Sometimes the country feels very irritating to people, as if the protagonist does what they do for granted, knowing clearly that if the protagonist no longer has the country in their heart, they will have nothing, and they are still justified. All the spiritual energy absorbed by the protagonist at the beginning was used by them, and only 50% was left behind later. They blamed him for his slow cultivation. It's also well written in other aspects.

At present, the plot, the heroine and the characters that have appeared are quite satisfactory. However, Huo Chaonan's character is really collapsed [crying]. The story needs excessive and contradictory points, but when it is obvious that this character's attitude towards the heroine and the heroine's affected mood are already known, why not solve this person? As far as this is concerned I'm quite estranged from the character (it's just my personal opinion). I'm just afraid that this character will be whitewashed and become the male protagonist in the end. (I went to read the introduction and read it again. It's not without cp. Moreover, the name + background + position + description are so scary that the male protagonist [cries] is incompetent. The author is great. I will cry to death. This is my first book review. I just want to beg you~

This book is the most novel one I have ever read, a time-traveling novel about cultivating immortality. He not only includes the elements of time travel, but also adds the cultivation of immortality and the national destiny. You allow us to not only see the cultivation of immortality, but also to empathize with the feelings of the country. And I particularly like the way those cultivators have never seen the world when it comes to our modern objects. It's very refreshing and a bit refreshing.

As soon as I entered the pit, it disappeared after a while. Dear author, can you post more pictures? Please [shy][shy]

Tao Te Ching, Huang Di Nei Jing, Tai Chi, and those animal forms of boxing, swordsmanship... Especially the first three are simply masterpieces, they are fundamental! ! ! Why didn't you mention it disappeared? ? ? Bring it up and send it to the world of immortal cultivation to try! Maybe it will be directly above the level of the Gods😬

The author's idea is good. This is also a question I had when I read the fairy tales before. The author wrote down his own questions, which is very good!

The whole book is quite beautiful. Very novel. The writing is also good, it's not cookie-cutter, it's really good to read, but the ending is a bit rushed and I feel like I didn't read enough.

Is this book's low rating because the ending is too rushed? Even if we write about the life of the heroine after everyone is resurrected later? Suddenly it was gone...[Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical] The story is very novel, it is the first time I see this kind of subject matter, it is very interesting.

A very good book, the plot is reasonable, not vulgar, and attractive, and the characters are well-developed.

The ending ended too hastily. This is a case of single-handedly driving the development of an entire country. Thanks to the heroine's perseverance that exceeds that of ordinary people and her strongest obsession with returning home, she was finally contacted by her motherland. Then on this basis, the country's development was driven, spiritual energy was revived, and all the people cultivated immortality. Only when I finally returned to my own plane did I realize that I had been plotted by the Earth Star's heaven. The heroine is not a human being on the Earth Star at all. It is the Heavenly Way of the Earth Star that imposes these consciousnesses on the heroine and makes her think that she is a person from the Earth Star. This is why it drives the all-round development of Earth Star China. Although at the end, the heroine knew that she was not a human from the Earth Star, she still gave her only wish for this time traveling mission to the Earth Star. After all, no matter which plane China is in, it is our eternal pursuit as Chinese people to be able to develop. Personally, I think I still need to write some extra stories. I can't just slap my butt and leave, right? For example, the follow-up of Earth Star China, the resurrected humans, Master Mo Li, etc.

Wen Wen is so beautiful, the heroine is really patriotic, but later I found out that it was just God who had tampered with her memory, but because she was patriotic, she saved the motherland, which is really heartwarming. Her wish is to resurrect the people who sacrificed for her. She is a really kind and beautiful heroine [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Very good, five-star praise. It was a bit depressing at the beginning, but gradually got better later. It took into account both "scientific nature [laughing]" and rationality. It was perfect for the time being. Come on, keep up the creative momentum! 🎉🎉🎉

Help, this kind of patriotic submission article really touches my heart. The setting is very novel. The heroine's patriotic feedback gives the Chinese spiritual energy practice various exercises and submits. The country feels sorry for the heroine, and the heroine has all kinds of friendship and concern, and the emotion of running in both directions [blowing kiss]

This is my first time watching this type of genre, and I like it very much (ps: Qing Mimi urges me)

Character IQ, Three Views Online. The world of the whole book is also very novel and grand. There is a collision between the world of immortality and science and technology. There is also a little collision with Douluo and other small worlds (although it is almost mentioned in one stroke). If the author is willing to write more about these contents, it will not be a problem to write a thousand and eight hundred chapters. However, the author is not wordy, not procrastinating, not sensational, and it is concise and clear. Kakaka just finished it [face covering] It is not enough to read. There is almost no heartache in the whole book. There are excellent characters and plots. It is not a noob. A red heart is always shining, showing unity and friendship. Cultivation and the end of the world are generally about grabbing, killing, killing, destroying, returning to primitive plunder, but the world of this book is about constant creation, production, the collision of modern civilization and cultivating, striving to burst out a truly bright and dazzling life. The main theme is a story that as long as I create fast enough and enough destruction and collapse, they can't catch up with me. 👍It kind of means developing towards the world of Datong. It's great, the intention is quite lofty, this is the real great novel. Whether it's the cheating method or the structure of the world, characters, and plot in the book, it's all 100% perfect (except for the fact that it's too little written and not enough to read, there are no shortcomings)

The writing is good, and I just saw a comment. In fact, it's not that she didn't think about her master and senior brothers, but that they have not sacrificed yet. There were only a few Chinese warriors who died for her, so she asked to resurrect them

It was very interesting, but I felt a little bit regretful at the end. It felt like it started with deception. Although it is good that everyone has special abilities, the story of Douluo Dalu in the second half does not seem to be particularly necessary. Patriotism is true and deserves praise. It is the only book I have read in this period, and it is still worth recommending.

I give it five points because nine times out of ten it looks good! It's just that the ending was too rushed! Feeling hasty!

It's quite interesting. I hope it's CP-free. Just like in the world of immortality where Yun Duo lives, there are very few monks who choose to have Taoist companions.

It's really good to watch. It may be really frustrating at the beginning, but it's exciting at the end. It directly creates a Chinese nation in the world of cultivating immortals. Later, a world of martial arts is also slowly being created. This is a cultural invasion, right?

This is the first time I have received a five-star review before I have finished reading it. It is very novel. It does not have the plot of a gossipy parent, but there is also a villain with a dark heart. It has the setting of immortality, fantasy and Western magic, but it does not feel abrupt at all. The integration is very reasonable. It has the feelings of family and country but lacks a little affection for the daughter. I hope the author will arrange a male protagonist for the heroine who can stand shoulder to shoulder with the heroine, but don't be love-minded. Finally, can the author update a few more pictures a day...

The ending feels a bit rushed, but the rest is pretty good. However, I think I can write a full-length novel if I have an idea. This ID is really good. It's the first time I've seen this kind of setting. The author is great. I hope that one day I can write a work with a more grand world view.

It's very interesting, the content is exciting, but the ending is a bit...

It's a very good book, but the author is too old to be updated. Please update more every day!

It is a very interesting book. The patriotism of the heroine is worthy of praise. There is no intrigue, bloodshed, competition for favor, frame-up, etc. I like books with positive energy. When I read them, my blood boils and I feel good. I must give it a five-star rating. Great support for the author. I look forward to your next book!

I have read two books, the first two are very exciting! Unlike other time travel books, it's very interesting! But I don't know why, but the ending is very confusing😮

This book has unique ideas about cultivating immortals, is uniquely interesting and non-boring, has correct views on three things, and can be read healthily.