The System Gives Me a Progress Bar, and I Use Martial Arts to Achieve Immortality

It turns out that this is a decisive and decisive killing. The Holy Mother is really beautiful, I like it, but I still want Genshin Impact to activate [Like][Like][Like]

A divine book is wonderful at birth.

The writing of this book is good, the number of words is enough to destroy the enemy, and the killing is extremely decisive. It writes a very ordinary person to perfection. There is no absolute right or wrong in the world. As long as he survives, everything is right. The protagonist is brought to life.

The author has created a flesh-and-blood protagonist. Readers may not like the way he behaves, but he is indeed a realistic character, and the other characters also have their own characteristics. Looking forward to the follow-up content

I have to say that this book in Tomato is a book that suits my taste. The protagonist has always been fun. The golden finger that seemed to be cool at first was actually to build up the status of the character so as not to collapse. Gradually, it started to get better. Not to mention changing the map in 2 chapters, the most important thing is the color! Sexy! The color is very direct [shy] not a eunuch [shy] and the title of the book, if it weren't for the plot behind it, I would have almost forgotten what it was called. The protagonist does not suffer (our perspective)

A slow start is already better than most novels, and the plot is also okay. Overall, it's perfect. Don't rush and write it slowly, and then it will be longer.

The writing is great and the story is good. It's a bit vulgar, yet elegant, so it can be said to be appreciated by both elegance and vulgarity. People around the protagonist will also die, and the protagonist's woman will also leave. This is all human nature, and the author handles it well. The future is promising, please update quickly Deducted two stars for bad ending

Excellent short novel. The text is clean, the plot is compact, and the theme is clear; the characters are clearly depicted, and the violence, insidiousness, treachery, warmth, etc. Are well displayed. The overall balance is suitable for reading by intermediate and obsessed Taoists who are obsessed with fantasy and immortality. It is not enough to stimulate me. I need extreme violence, extreme sinisterness, extreme reversal, the worse the better. But the text must be clean, the whole text is so although but after all, if, for example, primary school students make sentence-level text, initially browse it and once you see it, shoot the negative review immediately without considering the plot. Completely reject lengthy narrations, inner dramas, and dialogues, as well as slow pace and procrastination.

What should I do if I want to give you a 10-star review? The writing is so good. I hope there will be reincarnation and the protagonist's first two wives can return to the protagonist, is that okay? Update soon, update soon, it's so beautiful, author

It was a bit dull at first but gradually got better. Maybe the author got into the mood and made the protagonist dare to love, hate and take on the responsibility! The character of a clean and tidy man who is brave and resourceful in doing things without being sloppy is vividly written! Wonderful! Nice! Nice!

The writing is very real and very realistic. Although it seems uncomfortable in some places, this is the reality. Really, nothing is smooth sailing, whether it is relationships or work. There are a few people who dare to say that their lives are not bumpy. The reason for the low rating of this book is that some people cannot accept reality and escape from reality. To put it bluntly, it is naive. It is impossible for everything to go well. Tragedy is always the theme song of social life. Beautiful relationships are good and rare.

Thanks to the female author [Like] [Like] The description is spot on.

I enjoyed reading it. The quality is good. It is the best book I have read recently. Basically the plot arrangement is very good all the way. It's also okay to ask about the writing style. Two minor nitpicks. One is that the plug-in settings are not described clearly. It seems that it should be practiced independently, which is the upper limit of the level. That is to say, the experience points plus other exercises cannot exceed the level of the exercises you practice. Otherwise, just add all the skill points to a kung fu, and it will be level 9 or 10. It's definitely not good-looking to have such rampant combat power. It's good like this now, but this setting doesn't seem to be clearly stated in the text. Also, although the author is all C. But I like to explore wildly on the edge of green. Actually, I don't care if it's all C or not. I can accept it if the protagonist is a wife lover. But I don't think it's necessary to test on the edge. Overall it's excellent. As for the plot, the early trends unfolding now are relatively clear. It doesn't have a big imaginative twist, but it is steady and steady enough, which is the basic trend of old-school cool writing. He should be an experienced author with solid basic skills.

The writing is very good, the small things make the big picture appear, and the characters are very well-drawn! Decisive in killing and selfish, this is the real person. In that society where it is difficult to survive, where there is no tomorrow today, there is not so much selflessness, there is not so much justice, we can only struggle to survive!

It's very beautiful and highly recommended. Most people think it's a bit sloppy, but I think it's very good and perfect. This way it looks more real and not too sloppy. It's better than a boring word count. With children and grandchildren in the house, invincible in the world, and all the loved ones gone, what else is there to write about? The world of mortals has been fulfilled [almost crying] Come on, please update the author soon [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's great, it looks very cool, it doesn't drag a lot, and it's not really invincible. However, I feel that the mortal side is about the same, and the latter one is not so good, and can basically be passed over in one stroke. But overall it's still great, at least I've finished watching it.

It's pretty good. I haven't watched traditional martial arts in a long time. Why not give it to you 5⭐

It's so well written, it's like watching a martial arts drama. When you first look at the author, you feel like he's an old author. But having a system is definitely different from ordinary martial arts. Write slowly, it's really good. Everyone has different souls and ideas. Really good. Pig's trotter martial arts have also risen a lot, they are decisive in killing, extremely ruthless, and carry their desires with them. After being invincible for a while, I hope it can still be as exciting as now. Stay at 03:25 on August 1, 2023

After reading the comment section, I realized that I felt aggrieved when I saw that the heroine Mo Hongzhu was getting married to another Mo family member. I don't dare to watch it anymore, [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]. The writing is good, the plot is pretty good, everything is good, but I am too weak.

This book can be called Tomato's first martial arts novel! It combines fun points and plot into one! [Like][Like][Like]

It looks pretty good, keep up the hard work. Keep writing, don't finish it. Don't be ridiculous.

This plot is full of suspense and ups and downs. I can't bear to put it down. [Like] Like

Putting aside logic and talking about emotions, it has been quite exciting so far. Although many routines are already existing, old wine in a new bottle is still good wine. Under the protection of Hidden One Star, I hope Yu Wen remains the same! As of now, I would like to call it Tomato No. 2!

The story and writing style are all very well written. I feel pretty good. But there is something wrong with your name. I thought it was a pornographic book. When I entered it, I couldn't see anything right. It's quite nice.

Not bad. The first part is about playing the harem, and the second part is about practicing. The training speed is getting faster and faster, and the first part is very focused on the content and fun points [laughter]

It feels good. The author has described all the key characters with flesh and blood. It seems enjoyable, but it is too short and weak. More to come.

Not bad, I've finished reading it and will update it soon! The plot is detailed, reasonable, and good-looking. Come on

Not bad, not bad, it has a novel feeling, straight to the point, much better than those dumb and lazy ones [Like][Like]

The emotions of the characters are more in line with reality and are not the same. There may be some parts that are not in line with the readers' wishes and may make people uncomfortable and uncomfortable, but they are more in line with the logic of the characters. So far it seems to be a good book.

Very well written. Is a veteran. It's just that the hang-up is a bit small. I'm really speechless, the ending actually kills the progress bar. Moreover, the protagonist is still a native, not a time traveler. I really didn't expect it. I didn't expect it. The imagination is big enough.