Teacher Xianyu from Fushu Academy

I really like the author's writing, and I also like the characters Wang Ren and Yan Xiaoliu written by the author. I have written more than 600 chapters and I really admire the author's imagination. I was immersed in it as I watched it, as if I had entered their world as a bystander. It gave me a different feeling from the novels I usually read. I can feel the author's intention. Each character has their shining points. I especially like the character of the protagonist! This is the first time I have written so much. This book really moved me (although I don't have time to read it slowly... I like it very much, and I express my gratitude to the author! !

In fact, the story line is quite good, but there are flaws in some aspects. However, for the first book you write, you should listen to more excellent experiences. You should be able to write a masterpiece in the subsequent books. I feel that your writing level is quite good.

The book is good, but unfortunately I don't really want to read about development right now. I'll come back when I want to.

It looks pretty good. There is nothing too embarrassing in the first few pictures and the rhythm is very stable.

I quite like this relaxed approach

Although I don't like it very much, I give it five stars.