The Barbarian Bandit King's Consort

The content of the story is actually quite good, but the shortcoming is that the author's writing style is not very mature, and the preface and follow-up are often inconsistent. For example, the male protagonist rescued the female protagonist at the beginning, but while still rescuing the heroine, the scene suddenly changed to the heroine eight years later. And it didn't tell the readers that the second natural paragraph was eight years later. I thought I had missed it, but it turned out to be a true story. Another point is that it is a bit too verbose. Although the story content is good, the verbose description makes the reader easily tired. The summary is that it's okay and I can read it, but for me I can only read it bit by bit and I can't read it all at once.