Star Dome************

With such a short time, my sister-in-law must not be happy [Wronged][Wronged][Wronged] Ah ha it has to be the heroine! ! !

Oops, [learned] and look what I discovered? Found a book by Good. Returning to Yaliluo, I think the character creation of the protagonist who has gradually evolved from 3 to zero (recovering emotions) is okay, so I think it's good [OK]. Yeah, a little short and weak, you know? My friend [snickering]. Being short and weak will not do. You have to learn to eat something and take a supplement. Make him stronger [laughing evilly]

It's too short and spicy, please give me more. The fate of the protagonist is a bit abnormal, but I can still accept it when I think of being a star god before. Let's quickly open a group so that we can communicate face-to-face and friendly (reply for updates). It's really too short and I can't stand you anymore [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] What is the basis of the Tomato scoring mechanism? Is it because you, the author, are so slow to publish new novels that you get a low score?

The protagonist is very strong because the plot requires the protagonist's emotions in the first chapter, which was a little hard for me to accept. However, the second chapter about Xianzhou is much better to read, but because the plot is somewhat original, I worry that the author will be stabbed in the back [eating melon]

Damn it, it's rare to read the latest chapter of a book in one go

Very good Can I add someone @yiidiangongde? Character: Observer from a foreign land - "Zero" Pseudonym: Li Changkong Skills: Void (itself turns into emptiness, and all things are not added to its body) Observation (sublimating oneself into the observer's sight to explore the fate of all things) Knowledge (possessing all the knowledge of foreign civilizations) Trade (exchange knowledge, power, items, etc. For some price) To be added… Life experience: 1. The first and last hope of civilization in a foreign land 2. The God of Beginning/Ending Yan 3. Observer Image: White hair and red eyes, wearing Hanfu, young man Personality: Gentle to one's own side; Hate towards the enemy. Ps: A young man (god) from a foreign land volunteered to become an observer in this world, just to protect the safety of the fairy boat. Ps: The foreign civilization is a parallel version of the Xianzhou. After Li Changkong (Zero) discovered it, he regarded the Xianzhou as his spiritual sustenance. Ps: Foreign civilization has been lost

It seems that the writing is quite good so far, and there is no complete collapse of the harem or the character. However, it has the same problem as the nine reincarnations. It feels that the writing is too fragmented. As a result, one paragraph suddenly disappears and the character changes to continue. I personally don't like this style very much. But among the current Bengtie fanfics, they are really good. Currently, including this one, there are only two Bengtie fanfics that I think are pretty good. The other one is Kama's. The other fanfics are more or less bad at character design. For example, one book is about falling in love with Fu Xuan, but Fu Xuan is completely broken. There is also a book that I forgot what it was called. It is unclear about three women in a few chapters, biting other people's ears before they even recognize them. I hope the author can pay attention to this kind of problem. Give it a five-star review. There are some problems (I don't like this style personally) but it basically doesn't affect the viewing. I hope the author will keep up the good work. It's weird, I feel that it's weird that this kind of Bengtie fandom is being suppressed by a bunch of stallion stories about Bengtie characters.

The writing is very good, could the author consider adding a character? Name: Caesar Kaslana Gender: Male Identity: 1. The envoy of the wisdom star god Bo Shi Zun 2. Kevin and Mei's second son 3. The one who opens the way to save the world Skills: 1. Karma Demon 2. The beast that manifests this world 3. Salvation 4. Heavenly Fire Holy Judgment 5. Brahma 6. Ether Edit Image: White hair, blue eyes, short ponytail, often wearing combat uniforms of mainly black and white, supplemented by cyan. A necklace hangs around his neck. The pendant of the necklace is the Q version of the Black Tower. There is a ring on the finger of his right hand with a purple diamond on it. Personality: Willing to sacrifice everything for the one he loves, even if he can never hug the one he loves. He knows how to choose, and his emotions are almost poured into Heita. Supplementary status: Genius Club 85th seat

I simply want to ask the author about the world. First of all, in the MiHoYo universe, trees and seas are unobservable existences. Their status is particularly high. Then in the Star Iron World, his status is very close to the trees and the sea. The protagonist has now climbed to the top of the tree and discovered the truth of the world. Then Rebuilding, if he rebuilt, he threw all the seven emotions and six desires into different branches. In other words, the world and time point where the protagonist is located, this belongs to the eigenworld. Walter, who traveled from Bengsan's eigenworld, can use it as a reference. The protagonist's world belongs to the tree, and his status is still very high. Bishop Beng San came to the tree for reference. The tree does not exist in the world. The protagonist is now at the top of the tree. So the world that the incarnation of love goes to belongs to the world where the protagonist has not climbed the tree? The timeline of the subsequent Immortal Boat Chapter is different from that of Xi'er. The author's setting is a parallel world, right? In the Immortal Boat Chapter, the other Star Gods seem to know that the protagonist is the Star God of Truth. What I think about the parallel world is that the development of the two worlds cannot be exactly the same, that is, the two parallel worlds are independent. People in the parallel world should be able to go out of the world to observe other worlds, and they will see people exactly like themselves. So here comes my question: The seven incarnations of the protagonist represent different worlds, but now they appear in the same type of world with different timelines. The timeline of the protagonist Xianzhou is hundreds of years before Xi'er, which divides Xi'er's side and Xianzhou into two parallel worlds, but the Star God in the other world knows the truth and is resurrected. So is it true that the protagonists of both worlds have climbed to the top of the tree and made the decision to rebuild? And even in a parallel world, in a world of trees and sea, the trees of imaginary numbers are not repeated, so the two protagonists didn't meet at the top of the tree? This is my problem with parallel worlds. The second problem is that if it is not a parallel world but a timeline, the protagonist is equivalent to traveling to a timeline hundreds of years ago. All his actions in the timeline a hundred years ago should have a butterfly effect and affect future generations. And he traveled through time in an incarnation, and his body is still on the top of the tree, so Xier's world is the main world. In other words, his actions should have an impact on people at the time of Xianzhou. If the impact is greater, it means that originally there was no such thing in the main world, but because the protagonist traveled to the timeline a hundred years ago, it affected later generations and made the main world have something. He didn't do it in the main world, but he did it in his incarnation, and he did it when he became the main world. I hope to clarify my doubts about parallel worlds and timelines. I want to know which one it is, or is it like Otto, who finds the past nodes from the tree, enters the nodes, and directly creates a world (that is, letting the tree re-extend a timeline, a new world) [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

(Hua Xiaolou—He Luo Hui) The sunset sings and the birds sing, The journey is quite long. When I first arrived at the city gate, I looked down at the bustling alleys. Ask about the palace wall through clouds. I smell the fragrance of peonies. Bring some dust from east to west, Peonies in spring and Guilin in autumn. The wind blows from the east to the west, I am so far away from this place in the world that I can easily draw my pen and ink. Seeing the thousands of flowers step by step, I can see the willows twisting and turning. Looking again and again, the wind rises on the banks of the river and Luo, Tourists come and go in the bustling city. Please come out and let the moonlight spread all over the ground. Take advantage of the flowers on the high platform inside the building and outside the wall, I want to paint my brush here, The most beautiful thing in heaven and earth is the fireworks of Heluo. Gradually the wind blows and waves of flowers are charming, The painting in my eyes is getting thicker and richer, Paint the prosperity of this world forever. Peonies in spring and Guilin in autumn, The wind blows from the east to the west. I am so far away from this place in the human world that I can easily draw my pen and ink, Look at the colorful flowers step by step. I can see the willows twisting and turning, Look again and again for the wind blowing on the banks of the river and Luo. Tourists come and go, wandering left and right in the bustling city, Please show me the moonlight and sprinkle the flowers all over the floor. Take advantage of the flowers on the high platform inside the building and outside the wall, I want to paint my brush here. The most beautiful thing in heaven and earth is Heluo's fireworks Gradually the wind blows and waves of flowers are charming. How rich and intense is the painting in your eyes? Paint the prosperity of this world forever. Tourists come and go, wandering left and right in the bustling city, Please show me the moonlight and sprinkle the flowers all over the floor. Borrowing the flowers from the high platform inside the building, I want to paint my brush here. The most beautiful thing in heaven and earth is the smoke and fire of Heluo. Gradually the wind blows and waves of flowers are charming. How rich and rich is the painting in your eyes? Paint the prosperity of this world forever. (No cover or use without permission)

This is truly the most satisfying Bengtie fanfic I have ever read. The idea of ​​the article is very unique and interesting (but also painful), and the character creation is also quite good. The stories encountered by the protagonist Qiqing all have the author's own ideas, and his actions are very consistent with the corresponding emotions. And it can be seen that the author really carefully understood the plot and timeline of the original world (although he wrote it a little early, which caused MiHoYo to stab him in the back). But from my personal point of view, I hope that the emotional line between Lin Huan and Xi'er can be a little richer (of course, it doesn't matter if it doesn't). All in all, it is a very good novel. (Not a sailor!!! I'm here to have fun!) Aha is so shameless! Aha is so shameless! Alas, it's just a bit short. I finished reading it in one go. Can the author update it quickly? I'm really looking forward to liking this book. Don't let it be unfinished!

The timeline is a bit messy at the beginning, but it gets better later. This small flaw does not affect the overall quality of the book. It is also an excellent work among the fanfics I have read. I also like the fact that there is no random harem. The emotional line is also well written. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

There are five fans, and there are three more for explosions. The author is you can be one of them [please update for explosions][sneer laugh] @

It's so sad (sorrow) that those who still want to be nourished will be nourished to death, which is uncomfortable. [Cover face]

Come on, author... Well, I don't seem to have much to say.

It's so short. Is the author imaginary? Listen to me. 10,000 Words a day is enough.

It's okay, but I feel like Belloberg's timeline is a bit unclear.

The characters and everything are very good. That's it I have a suggestion. Regardless of whether you, the author, can open a harem or not, I hope that the heroine Aha will be [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I really like it, not only the arrangement of the plot, but also the description of the characters. Among the many fanfics, this is one of the few that surprised me. Due to reality and the criticized book recommendation system, the author had to cut off some plots, which I feel regretful about. Thank you author, your book has brought me joy in my busy life. I will do my best [send heartfelt]

Why is it only 7.1 Points? Hurry up and leave a five-star review, so that the author can update the whole day [Thinking] To be honest, reading this book step by step, from 7.1 To 8.5, Is really gratifying. The book I have been chasing for a long time has become more and more popular. Okay, let's get down to business\^O^/. Currently, there are still four of the seven emotions that have not been written, and there is still a lot of room for development. In addition, among the three emotions that have been written so far, I personally have not found any good points. Speaking of emotions, the relationship with Xi'er during the love chapter is not very unforgettable but the description is still quite good; the end is the joy chapter, which is mainly funny but has some true feelings. When it comes to the fear chapter, I don't know why, but I feel that the plot jumps a bit fast, maybe because there is no foreshadowing like the previous two chapters, but all in all, it is also very good. I feel that although the author's literary talent is not as good as some particularly good people, the author's literary level, I personally think, is higher than mine. I believe that if the author continues to follow it, it will become more and more popular. Here's wishing the author's book a 9.0 Rating as soon as possible~(￣▽￣~)~ Private goods: I am Bengtie UID113551659

Fifth update [laughing evilly] The author's writing is very good and interesting. As long as you don't care about the possible backstabbing of the Mi family, you can definitely read this book.

I think this book is okay. After reading many other Star Iron books, I can memorize the plot. This one is really good. Why is the rating so low?

Aha, we are very happy that the author is so diligent, so we will give it five stars.

This book is the best Star Rail article I have ever read. Good luck to the author.

Phobos' CP is Aha, and Lin Huan's CP is Xi'er. It makes sense, right? [Laughing]

If the timeline is different, then Xier wouldn't know the protagonist (ㆁωㆁ)

If you like this book as much as I do, then it's really ( )

Absolutely beautiful I'm going to start my second year of middle school "What I do and what I think is the truth." "Do you think you can touch the truth?"

The writing is very good, but does the author still plan to finish this book? Looks like it's about to be discontinued?

To be honest, things are really beautiful.