One Piece: Darkness Gives Birth to Light

It's okay, it's a cool article, you can rest assured that it's edible. The low rating is probably due to the small number of people and the malicious negative reviews from many staunch Pirates supporters. Many racists stand on the moral high ground and point fingers in the comment area, which is really annoying, they are both naive and fun-loving [laughter]

It's okay so far, but it's not very popular. Is it because there are still too few of them?

I feel like this is the best One Piece fanfic I've ever read! 1: The explanation of Armed Color Haki is the clearest, and the effect is achieved by training to the extreme (the reason why Garp is powerful). 2: Let me explain some of the reasons for Im's strength: the powerful overlord color, the ultimate armed color, and the bug's fruit ability. 3: To change the world, we must rely on the navy. Otherwise, what if you overthrow the Celestial Dragon Queen? There are more than 100 participating countries, hundreds of naval bases, and countless pirates. Without grassroots organizations, it may not be stable for decades. In the original world, Garp, Ryu, Luffy, and Red Hair might have united all classes to overthrow the Celestial Dragons and establish a new order... Many books only emphasize the overlord color and the internal destruction of the armed color. But Garp goes a little further.

I don't understand why the score is so low. I read 100 chapters. Although there are some small details that I didn't handle well, it's not a big problem. Overall it's very good. The main line is clear, the organization is clear, and the characters are three-dimensional. It deserves a five-star rating! It's rare to find a good naval book, just don't enter the palace!

It's a pretty good naval article. I don't know why it got such a low score. I originally wanted to give it four stars. After all, the pace was a bit fast and the ending was a bit too fast. The description and foreshadowing felt that it could have had more sub-plots and richer plots. The Flaws Are Not Concealed is an enjoyable story that tells a good story, so I give it five stars.

Very good. In the world of pirates, absolute justice is good. Very well written. The navy should be so firm and fearless. The benevolent justice of Garp during the Warring States Period is not suitable for the current era of great pirates. What the navy needs now is iron-blooded warriors. What it needs is killing to stop killing and fighting to stop war!

[Smile][Smile]🥰[Admiration] Let the Celestial Dragons help the protagonist give birth to more than a dozen babies, 20 years, what kind of god, those are my children

Come on, the author is very good-looking

Although the overall plot is relatively smooth and there is not much writing, it is somewhat too short, and the later plot is a bit short. In fact, a little more content about the protagonist becoming stronger can be revealed. But it's really a good fanfic [thoughts]

In the world of pirates, if you are taken as a hostage, you are already dead. Just kill him. If he is not dead, be the first to kill the hostage. See what else you can threaten me with. If I am a hostage, please kill me first.