[Immortality (Careful Planning)] [A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality] [Not Mindless] [Decisive and Ruthless]
Dynasties last a hundred years; sects endure for a thousand.
Here, demons run rampant and ghosts wreak havoc.
The dynasty crumbles, and armies clash.
Xu Fan, who had spent many years living on Blue Star, wakes up to find himself in another world.
Amid this chaotic era, Xu Fan cannot help asking himself, “What can I do? What do I have?”
As he ponders for a long while, a gentle woman’s voice drifts into his ear: “Brother Fan, it’s time to eat.”
After a night of passion, Xu Fan is delighted to discover that his golden finger has finally arrived.
[The Host spent a harmonious night with their destined one. Reward: 5 free attribute points]
[The Host has bound to the System for the first time. Reward: one ten-pull, guaranteed top-tier reward]
[3 free attribute points]
[2 free attribute points]
[4 free attribute points]
…
[4 free attribute points]
Ninth draw: [Mighty Bow (1/10) + Ninth-Rank Divine Ability]
[Guaranteed top-tier reward: Immortality (Grand Completion), First-Rank Divine Ability]
After gaining immortality, Xu Fan hesitates for a moment before setting his sights on a goal. In an age when everyone is playing it safe, he will carve a bloody path of his own, giving his infinite life infinite depth!
(The protagonist is brave and resourceful, with his wits intact.)
TMD there are so many pitfalls and there are so many comments in the book that the author never reads and there are no changes. The author calls for reminders at the end of each chapter. He clicks reminders every day but there are no updates every day. The book shows that he wants to write a single female protagonist but is entangled with so many women. How do we read it? No wonder there are no ratings. If I had known, I wouldn't have wasted so much time. It doesn't make any difference whether this system exists or not. If you don't know how to write, don't write these time-travel articles. Learn how other people write. I hope the author can change and stop acting like SB. How do you expect us to see this? There are less than 100, and the cultivation is slow. The Glazed Heart is like a decoration. Are they all practicing so slowly? And it only reaches the ninth level in chapter 40 or 50. If it reaches the first level or even higher, it will have to be 700 or 800 chapters. Moreover, the update is slow, has many pitfalls, and is watery.
The protagonist's golden finger is basically useless and has not been used properly. After the Yuanshi mine incident is over, if you don't leave quickly and wait for a while, there won't be any force that won't send more manpower after learning that there are training resources and hard currency. No, the protagonist won't think that it's over after those few people die. No, the skill (30/100) has a pre-storage of over 70. If you don't upgrade, will you keep laying eggs?
There are a lot of pitfalls.
Forcing conflicts
It won't work if you see the raw stone veins. Give me some money so that my aunt won't tell anyone. Isn't it better to take advantage of it yourself? It's not like I don't have money.
The protagonist's wife has nothing to do when she goes to the county town. The protagonist has to take a 10-coin bus to go to the city and has to worry about bandits. So why does her wife have nothing to do when she goes there? The difference in writing is too big Let's take a look at what's written in Chapter 6, and then look at what's written in Chapter 13. Compare it. It's not well written, and it makes people confused. Especially in terms of realm cultivation, it makes people confused.
What is this novel about? Those realms and supernatural powers no longer match. I looked confused. 🤮 🤮 🤮 🤮
Wonderful and wonderful, not enough to watch 🥰🥰🥰 There are a lot of pitfalls, but it's good-looking and needs to be read carefully. It's not brainless, but it's also fun. I hope the author will update it soon!
Samsung, please encourage me.
I think this book is really good among books of the same type. The details and characters are pretty good and quite delicate. I'm just afraid that not many people will read it. I hope I can recommend it to others.