[Eternal life flow (plan before taking action)] [Mortal] [Not brainless] [Kill decisively]
A century-old dynasty, a thousand-year sect
Demons are rampant here, ghosts are rampant
The dynasty collapsed, and the war was fierce
Xu Fan, who has lived in Blue Star for many years, woke up and found that he was already in another world.
In this troubled world, Xu Fan couldn't help but ask himself: "What do I know and what do I have?"
When he had been thinking for a long time, a female voice whispered in his ear: "Brother Fan, it's time to eat."
After a night of fun, Xu Fan was surprised to find that the golden finger had finally arrived.
[The host and the destined person spent a harmonious night, and the reward is free points: 5]
The first time the host binds to the system, the reward will be once every ten draws in a row (guaranteed withdrawal)
Free points 3
[Free extra points 2]
[Free extra points 4]
……
[Free extra points 4]
The ninth draw [Fierce Bow (1/10) + Ninth Grade Magical Power]
[Guaranteed Withdrawal: Immortality (Dzogchen) First-Rank Divine Power]
Xu Fan, who had gained immortality, hesitated for a moment and made a goal in his heart. In this era where dogs are everywhere, I must fight my way out so that I can have an infinite life and have infinite thickness at the same time!
(The protagonist is brave and resourceful, and his IQ is online)
Reader comments
TMD there are so many pitfalls and there are so many comments in the book that the author never reads and there are no changes. The author calls for reminders at the end of each chapter. He clicks reminders every day but there are no updates every day. The book shows that he wants to write a single female protagonist but is entangled with so many women. How do we read it? No wonder there are no ratings. If I had known, I wouldn't have wasted so much time. It doesn't make any difference whether this system exists or not. If you don't know how to write, don't write these time-travel articles. Learn how other people write. I hope the author can change and stop acting like SB.
How do you expect us to see this? There are less than 100, and the cultivation is slow. The Glazed Heart is like a decoration. Are they all practicing so slowly? And it only reaches the ninth level in chapter 40 or 50. If it reaches the first level or even higher, it will have to be 700 or 800 chapters. Moreover, the update is slow, has many pitfalls, and is watery.
The protagonist's golden finger is basically useless and has not been used properly. After the Yuanshi mine incident is over, if you don't leave quickly and wait for a while, there won't be any force that won't send more manpower after learning that there are training resources and hard currency. No, the protagonist won't think that it's over after those few people die. No, the skill (30/100) has a pre-storage of over 70. If you don't upgrade, will you keep laying eggs?
There are a lot of pitfalls.
Forcing conflicts
It won't work if you see the raw stone veins. Give me some money so that my aunt won't tell anyone. Isn't it better to take advantage of it yourself? It's not like I don't have money.
The protagonist's wife has nothing to do when she goes to the county town. The protagonist has to take a 10-coin bus to go to the city and has to worry about bandits. So why does her wife have nothing to do when she goes there? The difference in writing is too big
Let's take a look at what's written in Chapter 6, and then look at what's written in Chapter 13. Compare it. It's not well written, and it makes people confused. Especially in terms of realm cultivation, it makes people confused.
What is this novel about? Those realms and supernatural powers no longer match. I looked confused. [Vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit]
Wonderful and wonderful, not enough to watch [adoration][adoration][adoration]
There are a lot of pitfalls, but it's good-looking and needs to be read carefully. It's not brainless, but it's also fun. I hope the author will update it soon!
Samsung, please encourage me.
I think this book is really good among books of the same type. The details and characters are pretty good and quite delicate. I'm just afraid that not many people will read it. I hope I can recommend it to others.
Yes, the protagonist is not the Virgin Mary
How should I put it, not bad
Come on! Five stars
Nice,,,,
Not bad, not bad...
It's just so-so, the plot is not compact. The transition between plots is very abrupt
TMD there are so many pitfalls and there are so many comments in the book that the author never reads and there are no changes. The author calls for reminders at the end of each chapter. He clicks reminders every day but there are no updates every day. The book shows that he wants to write a single female protagonist but is entangled with so many women. How do we read it? No wonder there are no ratings. If I had known, I wouldn't have wasted so much time. It doesn't make any difference whether this system exists or not. If you don't know how to write, don't write these time-travel articles. Learn how other people write. I hope the author can change and stop acting like SB. How do you expect us to see this? There are less than 100, and the cultivation is slow. The Glazed Heart is like a decoration. Are they all practicing so slowly? And it only reaches the ninth level in chapter 40 or 50. If it reaches the first level or even higher, it will have to be 700 or 800 chapters. Moreover, the update is slow, has many pitfalls, and is watery.
The protagonist's golden finger is basically useless and has not been used properly. After the Yuanshi mine incident is over, if you don't leave quickly and wait for a while, there won't be any force that won't send more manpower after learning that there are training resources and hard currency. No, the protagonist won't think that it's over after those few people die. No, the skill (30/100) has a pre-storage of over 70. If you don't upgrade, will you keep laying eggs?
There are a lot of pitfalls.
Forcing conflicts
It won't work if you see the raw stone veins. Give me some money so that my aunt won't tell anyone. Isn't it better to take advantage of it yourself? It's not like I don't have money.
The protagonist's wife has nothing to do when she goes to the county town. The protagonist has to take a 10-coin bus to go to the city and has to worry about bandits. So why does her wife have nothing to do when she goes there? The difference in writing is too big Let's take a look at what's written in Chapter 6, and then look at what's written in Chapter 13. Compare it. It's not well written, and it makes people confused. Especially in terms of realm cultivation, it makes people confused.
What is this novel about? Those realms and supernatural powers no longer match. I looked confused. [Vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit]
Wonderful and wonderful, not enough to watch [adoration][adoration][adoration] There are a lot of pitfalls, but it's good-looking and needs to be read carefully. It's not brainless, but it's also fun. I hope the author will update it soon!
Samsung, please encourage me.
I think this book is really good among books of the same type. The details and characters are pretty good and quite delicate. I'm just afraid that not many people will read it. I hope I can recommend it to others.
Yes, the protagonist is not the Virgin Mary
How should I put it, not bad
Come on! Five stars
Nice,,,,
Not bad, not bad... It's just so-so, the plot is not compact. The transition between plots is very abrupt