Qi Neng**

After reading the preface and the first chapter, it is generally very good. It can be seen that the author has done some research on "martial arts" and has put in a certain amount of effort. "Martial arts is a correct way of exercise that conforms to the way of heaven, follows the laws of nature, and conforms to medical principles." This sentence is the original sentence in the author's preface. I personally agree with this sentence. I hope the author can combine "martial arts" with medical principles (whether it is traditional Chinese medicine or Western medicine) to write a different martial arts. At present, I have nearly 160,000 words, so I will put it on the bookshelf first. Not many people have read it yet, so I hope the author can stick with it. Also give some suggestions: 1. Some sentences need to be carefully considered. I have mentioned some in the preface and the first chapter. I hope the author can correct them. Of course, it may be that I did not understand what the author wanted to express; 2. You need to pay attention to the use of some punctuation marks, such as the difference between "," and "," and which one should be used more reasonably to connect two sentences; 3. I hope the author can think carefully about the usage of the three "de" sounds of "", "" and ""; 4. Although there are not many typos in the preface and the first chapter, there are still some. I hope the author can re-read and revise it after writing a chapter. Of course, my four suggestions may seem a bit "fault-finding" in the eyes of some people, as if they are nitpicking, but this is my attitude towards a work, whether it is a literary work or an online novel, it is inevitable to be picky. I believe there are people like me, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to watch. According to my evaluation standards, this book is at least 4 stars, but not 5 stars. The author seems to be a newcomer, and this book seems to be a debut work. It needs the support and encouragement of readers, so I give it 5 stars. Moreover, it is difficult to disagree with the book's sentence "Martial arts is a correct way of exercise that conforms to the way of heaven, follows the laws of nature, and is in line with medical principles." I look forward to a masterpiece!