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After reading it for a while, there are still many problems. Swordsmen should be from China in everyone's perception, but you seem to be writing about Europe. I really don't think there is any chivalrous swordsman in Europe. You seem to be writing about martial arts, but it doesn't stand out. Even if it does, there is a sense of dissonance. You are writing about Europe from China, so you might as well just write about China. I think your writing style is quite good, but it is a bit childish.
After reading it for a while, there are still many problems. Swordsmen should be from China in everyone's perception, but you seem to be writing about Europe. I really don't think there is any chivalrous swordsman in Europe. You seem to be writing about martial arts, but it doesn't stand out. Even if it does, there is a sense of dissonance. You are writing about Europe from China, so you might as well just write about China. I think your writing style is quite good, but it is a bit childish.