I Became a God After Transmigrating Into a Book

May I ask the author, have your punctuation marks been eaten by you?

The overall outline of the novel is good, but the description of the scenes is not detailed enough, and the dialogue between the characters is very stiff and lacks punctuation. I think the description of the dialogue between the characters can be a separate line. It feels a bit messy to read, and there are many typos. It is like watching a movie and clicking fast forward without any sense of immersion! From the beginning to the end, there is a feeling that the heroine is talking to herself!

There are a lot of typos. Please correct them.

The content of the frame is relatively good, but the punctuation marks are not typed, and there are many typos, which makes the reading difficult. I hope it can be improved in the future 👍 👍.

There is no sense of substitution.

Your writing is pretty good, but you can't divide it into paragraphs?

Lots of typos, looks awkward and laborious

Why doesn't Mao have any symbols? It's so uncomfortable to look at.

It's so good, why do you need to write an emotional drama? And the man was so rogue. I always feel that it's better not to write emotional scenes.