A newcomer to writing, and this is my first male-oriented novel. Please be kind!
This book is terrible. The author has given up on it...
There’s a lot of setup in the earlier chapters. If that’s not your thing, feel free to start at Chapter Ten.
Have you ever seen a casino awash in neon lights?
Have you ever seen a compound where greed runs rampant?
Have you ever seen a torture room splattered with blood and flesh?
Have you ever seen a mountain of graves strewn with corpses?
That’s right! This is northern Myanmar!
Some people lose themselves here and sink into depravity; others break down and despair!
Some dream of getting rich overnight, while others become the object of someone’s longing!
Leng Ning, an orphan who had just finished the college entrance exams, fainted from heatstroke while handing out flyers. When he woke up, he was in a scam compound in northern Myanmar!
Unwilling to deceive people, he endured two months of torture. At the very end of his life, he took down the compound’s leader by himself!
When he woke again, he had transmigrated into a parallel world five years in the past and unexpectedly obtained the legacy of a prehistoric human civilization!
Watch as he becomes an agent of justice and tears through his enemies!
Resentment, hatred, and the pain of parting: wherever the tribunal goes, corpses litter the ground!
With a cheat at my side, the world is mine!
Justice may be late, but it will never be absent!
What would an eighteen-year-old do if he had armor like Black Panther’s, Yondu’s Yaka arrow, and the combined abilities of Nightcrawler, Cyborg, and Professor X? What earth-shattering things would he accomplish?
Stay tuned!
Let me first explain the setting issue. Since the author did not want to write a systematic article, he created a prehistoric civilization. The issue of combat power is explained very clearly in the article. The protagonist's current physique is only five times that of ordinary people. The stone he punched in the cave was the result of energy overflow. This book must have many flaws, and the author's writing style must be unacceptable to many readers, but it is boring for some people to be embarrassed.
Climbed over from next door!! Five stars first! Encouragement 😳
This is the worst novel I have ever read. When the protagonist first gained superpowers, he punched a boulder into pieces. Later he met an enemy. Good guy, he was wearing a battle armor and punched with all his strength for only 600 pounds. He was so happy that he knocked him down. Stop writing.
I can only make do with it. Some of the chapters are so long-winded that even those who are interested in reading them are not interested 🤭
I can only say that it feels very watery. It feels a bit foggy when I look at it from the front, and the writing is not intuitive enough.