Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Disciple

The author's writing is very good. I hope there will be no heroine and Snape will be the only one. Thank you. How can I put it this way? I really like the way the author wrote about Snape in the early days. He has a sense of sanity and madness. Now I feel that Snape is a bit weird. I can't say I hate Cassandra, but I don't really like it. I feel that Cassandra has too many roles... Which makes me feel that she is a female character. I still prefer Snape's unique beauty 🙂 🙂 🙂

I don't really like HP fans who have elements of cultivating immortals or too many Chinese elements.

Although the "truth is revealed" in Chapter 66 and the loss is "stopped in time" in Chapter 68, you, the author, know how many readers you have read before that. You think that all the readers you read were careless readers, but who told you to create the character of a common woman with dangerous abilities for the heroine in the early stage? This is how good feelings can be lost, all I can say is keep going

I was shocked by this specious heroine. To the protagonist, she can be a friend, a subordinate, or a helper, but she should never be a terrible snoop into the protagonist's privacy. In fact, the author's writing style and ideas are quite good, but the setting of the characters really needs more consideration. 🧐

Everything is fine up front 🙂 Until I found out that that annoying and arrogant woman would not only not go offline, but would also follow the protagonist and be inseparable [awkward laugh] This is probably the only poisonous point in this book, and to me, this poisonous point is very, very poisonous 🤮[petrified] Overall, it's worth reading before that scumbag woman shows up. After all, the writing is pretty good 🥺 Ever since that naughty woman's special skills were revealed, the whole book fell apart for me anyway [awkward laugh]

I don't know if the author has studied it. In fact, if it is not a novel like Zhutianliu, there are two time travelers in a world who know the plot. This is a poisonous point that a large number of people cannot accept. In addition to the protagonist, the other person can be a reborn, aboriginal, or a visitor from another world. However, he is also a time traveler who knows the plot, which makes people It's unpleasant to watch. After all, the protagonist doesn't have a golden finger like the system. It seems that there is only one benefit like strong luck, but the benefit is not the only one (the woman's eyes). This makes people even more uncomfortable. There are few people watching it now, so I don't feel anything. When more people watch it, a large number of people will probably comment that this woman is not good. . No matter what, this will also dissuade some people who don't hate this book but are affected by the comments. The above points are purely just some opinions, and they are not asking the author to make corrections. The author's writing is okay and looks quite fresh. Of course, if the author just writes it to make himself happy and does not intend to make money from this book, just think of it as a fart! Finally, I hope the author will become more and more popular!

Listen, I love it.

Everything else I'm satisfied with. But there are two things I don't like very much. The first is to do double penetration. Second, time travel to Snape. I'm not saying it's not good to time travel to this identity. It's just that I don't like it very much. I was still okay with it the next day. Only the first point I can't accept. Stop looking and leave.

It took me half a day to see the updated part. I don't know what will happen next, so I'll talk about my impressions after reading it. It's worth watching, but it's just to look at the author's imaginative potions and some settings. As for the emotional description, it's a bit jarring. It feels like the protagonist is licking others and then giving away the girl. At least I only saw the protagonist giving and other characters treating him... Some settings in the book are very novel and well described, such as the werewolf vampire potion that Hunter drank. However, the emotional description is still flawed. The relationship between Penny and Deshri is a bit awkward. How can they fall in love with each other after meeting each other once and end up traveling from a remote town to London every time? Even if it's love at first sight, that's not true😓, and Penny actually doesn't think there's anything wrong with it yet, so why should she give her as a gift? I felt a little uncomfortable with the emotional handling of Si Jiao and Lily, it felt like giving away a daughter. [Working on manuscript]😫 My evaluation of this book is that you can keep it for now and look at the author's subsequent emotional descriptions and the protagonist's previous life descriptions. The emotional descriptions can polish this book. Overall it's worth a look👀

Miss Black doesn't feel very good. It's okay to be gay, but not the heroine. Also, I hope there will be a single male protagonist who is engaged in career, or the female protagonist will be smarter, have two strong characters, etc. It will be comfortable to watch.