**

The author's writing is very beautiful, I like it very much. But I don't want Gu Hongyu to be overly pampered. Big cheers for the author

Be sure to believe that my writing is very good. Read this book with two male protagonists. I will say the important things a thousand times: Very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good. Very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice Looks very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good Very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice Very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice Very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice Looks very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good Very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Ahhhh! ! ! Not enough [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] The author is very hungry [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, Gong always felt that he was not good to Shou in his previous life, but the bad thing about him was that he had a cold face, hahaha. When Shou was bullied, he took revenge and when he came back, he softly coaxed her ahhhhhhhhhh. The previous life was sweet, but the ending was a tragedy, but fortunately, everything can be done over again. They can all start over [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] The most important thing is the last extra episode, ah ah ah ah, they can be together for the rest of their lives, two phoenixes [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss]

It's really beautiful. I like this setting. Although this book is finished and can't be seen anymore, their happiness continues, but it's only visible to them. I wish them peace and joy in their lives, and their children will also grow up healthily [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][laughing][laughing]

The writing is smooth and logical, but occasionally when I read it, I feel that the author's writing is a bit verbose. You can try to reduce part of the psychological description or action description that follows the language description, because these are likely to have been expressed through actions. Or try changing the word order and inserting actions into the middle of the language, which will emphasize the simultaneity of language and action and reduce redundancy. In addition, you can also change the narrative method to reduce the repeated use of the word "self", which will be much better (seriously making suggestions, please refer to the author)

✨🌷💗Gu Hongyu🌷💗🌷Su Congyuan/Brother💗🌷 ❤️Recommended stars: ✨✨✨✨✨ 🌳"Ancient times, Shuangnan Lord, Gu rebirth, New Year, ↑qiang, Shuangjie, overhead, private setting, ambiguous pull, past and present life, ↑pet↓, super infinite pet, two-day long-lasting love❤️ྀིtwo-way heartbeat, two-way rush, healing system, daily life, sweet pet article, pregnancy/birth", (the two are three years apart in age, 21/18) 🌳Although the setting is not very novel, the writing is delicate and smooth (although some plots are a bit immature, but it does not affect the viewing), the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the pace is fast, the characters are vivid and full, the content is exciting, and there is a little bit of blood🩸🩸🩸The plot and sincere feelings, Full sugar🍬🍬🍬No cruelty, (except for physical injuries and illness, of course). There are occasional misunderstandings in the early stage, but they will be clarified quickly. The characters of the two protagonists are also very touching. They are super sweet, super doting, and easy to love, but they are a little watery. The ending is HE, and the lovers finally get married. 🌸((☀️⥎☀️))🌸 🌳And it may be because Shou is a brother. I feel that the description of him in the article is occasionally a little too feminine, but otherwise there is no big problem. 🌳❤️Deputy CP: Gu Hongyi❤️Song Liqing 🌳It's a short story, but I didn't finish it (the content behind it felt too boring, so I just read it briefly, hahaha), but overall it's still very good. It's a must-have sweet story before going to bed. I'll just give it a five-star review (*≧∪≦)👍🏻, brothers and sisters who like this type of writing can check it out! Recommended duck! 🌹🌹🌹

It's so sweet, let alone little Yuan Yuan, she's really cute

It's very good-looking, and very sweet. The three couples are also very happy, and they all have their own children. And the last picture of the extra chapter is the previous life of the protagonists, which is quite regrettable. Overall, it's good and worth watching.

The overall feeling is pretty good, except for the author's modal particles, which are too many.

I have such a good book, why is the rating so low [crazy] Family members of Shuhuang, just close your eyes and rush.

Five stars for Da Da, Yuan Yuan, Lao Gu [laughing] and Xiao Tuanzi [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

The author's writing style is very good, and the plot arrangement is also very reasonable. Although sometimes there are typos, which makes it a bit awkward to read, but overall it is still great. Give the author a big shout out [like] [like]

The plot is relatively full and the pace is slow, but it makes people feel comfortable reading. The character portrayal is a bit abrupt, especially for Shou. The psychological changes are not sufficiently paved and delicate, making the changes seem very abrupt. The author has a very good attitude [blowing kisses], four stars.

The novel is exciting and has its ups and downs. The author is modest and polite. It is worth reading. I hope the author can get better and better.

I'm very confused. What kind of person is the guy in the book? He looks like a man but can have children like a woman? Is it the third kind of person beyond men and women? Who knows? Tell me about it.

Although I haven't watched it for a long time, I still remember that when I first started watching it, Ayuan's cold look really confused me [Send Heart] DaDa finally updated it, and I found that I haven't given it five stars yet. It's simply my fault [Love]

It's good to watch, it's my favorite plot

Rebirth Cookie is said to be an ancient proverb, but in fact, many parts are written in vernacular, modern terms, and there are too many inner descriptions. It is a bit stuck and uncomfortable to watch. If you have nothing to do, you can read below, and the relationship progress is a bit fast...

The protagonist with a long mouth is also rare. He is very sweet, not depressed, spends the night due to misunderstandings, etc. It is very interesting to watch.

The direction of the story is very good. This is one of the few times in this article that I can see a male protagonist with a long mouth. I won't say that there are any clichés. Mouth is a good thing. I hope more novels with male protagonists with long mouths in the future will explain it without delay. The balance is also quite good. It doesn't mean to force the right match, but towards the feeling of getting along with each other in daily life.

How can I put it this way? The more I read this book, the more exciting it becomes. The more I like it, the more I like it. I haven't finished it yet but I have read most of it. The only thing I can say is that once the men in this book become enlightened, it will be like an old house on fire. They really dote on their husbands. Very good. I looked at the time. I opened it on July 14th and finished it on July 24th, which took ten days. Anyway, I think this book is very good and interesting. It can also be regarded as a sweet book. At least the good people are all be.

I feel that this ancient style is too modern, and sometimes it contains information and sometimes it seems that the wording is strange. However, the author is very humble and is willing to listen to readers' suggestions. I give the author a thumbs up [send heartfelt] . . ? ! [Awkward laugh][Stunned][Shocked] I can only say that the author still needs to polish it. I look forward to the author's next work.

Su Congyuan, Gu Hongyu, the novel is very good. It can be said that Gu Hongyu died miserably in his previous life. Fortunately, he can be reborn to take revenge on those who bullied them.

The plot is still okay, but there is a small flaw: sometimes there are typographical errors and details are a bit messy. Everything else is okay. Is Shou's name "Cong" or "Cong"?

Nice! I just like to see rough guys on the outside and loyal dogs on the inside. I like to see many hairs. Please update soon (🥺)

It's a very nice article, but the word "yah" is used a bit too much, and it's inappropriate in many places. It sounds strange to me as a book reader, especially men who always use "yah". It shouldn't have any effect on my sisters who read books.

The plot is very good, and the characters are very colorful, but the writing style is slightly lacking, and the description of details is a bit lacking. I suggest that the author can provide more descriptions of the appearance, details, actions, and scenes of the characters.

Very sweet and beautiful, recommended, leave a footprint

It's so beautiful. After rebirth, I love you desperately. Especially the couple of sub-CPs. They are so well written.