Sanling*****

This book is so good because I wrote it myself. If I don't praise myself, I'm afraid not many people will be willing to praise me!

There are only 2 books about this software that I am addicted to, one is Liuding Kamikaze, and the other is this book. It is really good, with reasonable structure, clear logic, slow learning, and the writing style has some imperfections, which is very good. Five-star praise, support the author

After reading Chapter 75, the character development is still very reasonable. He did not show off because he told his parents that he had a book in his head when he was a child, and he was beaten twice by the goddess to exorcise evil spirits. He cut off the common customs because his family's love for him became less and less, and he became a tool for the family to make money. The letter goes from love to money, and his understanding of the cruel and unscrupulous world of cultivation was learned by the calculations of the palace thieves and the national master! As the environment changes, the characters gradually grow and improve, and the logic is reasonable! The fights between 74 and 75 are a bit long, with spells and magic weapons being spelled out. Maybe the third fight of Qi training is because you don't have much fighting experience yet, so it's not ideal! The next step is to see how the update speed is. If it can stabilize 7,8,000 or 10,000 words, it is still very good! If you are like those who updated 2000 today and have the mentality of purely playing by yourself, no matter how good the writing is, you will not be able to catch up.

It is a slow-paced book about cultivating immortality, and you can feel that the author has written a protagonist who is a small character but has great execution ability. The protagonist will also make some funny mistakes, but just like an international thief relies on his gorgeous skills to open a safe, a rustic and silly thief relies on a sledgehammer. A young cultivator who has no one to teach him, who is not stupid and rustic at first sight? The supporting characters in key positions in the book also have high IQ and EQ, such as the boss. In many novels, the character of the leader is so stupid that he is speechless. The setting of ancient cultivation techniques and modern immortal cultivation techniques in the book is also very good. There are shadows of mortals, read it with a normal heart, and experience the story of the protagonist's struggle to become an immortal without time travel or cheating.

Very well written, keep it up!

I've read a few chapters, they're pretty good.

I was attracted by the beginning of the article, and then I kept reading all the time. It's a really good article. Thank you for the author. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's so beautiful, but it's too short. I can compete with ordinary people in the front.

It is a good book worth reading, it is innovative and logical.

The author is quite awesome! Very well written! Support! Will keep paying attention! Niu Niu Niu!

Good, one of the rare good articles nowadays

It's okay, why is the rating so low! Many books are better than a certain point! Do people nowadays like cool writing?

Not much to say, it's nice to read, and the author's writing style is also good, but be careful not to overexaggerate. Control the level damage value.

This is the article about cultivating immortality, the article about cultivating immortality, the article about cultivating immortality.

Getting prettier and prettier

The front is a little bit toxic, but the story is still logical.

It looks good, but the channel is missing, so no one commented.

Although it is a bit verbose, I cannot say that the writing style is good. I can only say that the writing style is better than verbosity [Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool]

It's wonderful, worth watching, at least it's good so far

The writing is good, and the characterization is very delicate. Especially the author is not good at writing. I highly recommend it. Don't let yourself pass up a good book because of a few bad reviews. [Eat melon][eat melon]

A rare series of excellent mortal novels about cultivating immortality that you can read

The structure is reasonable and the characters are well-defined, which is very good.

It feels pretty good-looking

Not bad, no brainless plot

A nice book

It's very good. I hope this book can continue to be written.

The writing style is good and the description is detailed. It is a rare good book by an old author. Brother, the author, please keep writing and look forward to you [Thinking] [Like]