Huashan: Lao Yue Died at the Beginning

It's a bit interesting, five-star praise!

It's nice to watch, and it's really funny in places. As for the previous comments about dog licking and the like. Doesn't exist. If you can't beat it, you'll be scared; if you can beat it, you'll stand up. Note: The cheats in this book are auxiliary. System writing is not directly invincible. The upper limit is high but relatively slow. But it's enough

It's rare to see someone traveling through the heavens with his wife! I like this kind of pairing that lasts a lifetime and never gives up separation even if the world changes. Some readers may not like this lighter, more prosaic content. I think the male protagonist takes his wife to ascend together and practice together. Very valuable! From weak to strong, the male protagonist is always accompanied by the female protagonist. The female protagonist is not a vase, her presence is always there! The two support each other and accompany each other through the world, revealing warmth in the ordinary! Come on, author!

It's very good-looking. It's very different from other films in the universe. Although it's a single female protagonist, there's nothing sinister about it. It's just like a normal couple in daily life. It's very good-looking!

After reading some, the layout of the protagonist is a bit difficult in terms of strength and resourcefulness. It is better to train Linghu Chong and roar at the critical moment, "Chong'er save me." What do you think? [Laughs evilly]

The rating is low. I find it very interesting. It is one of the rare good books among tomato novels.

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Single heroine! ! ! It's very well written, keep it up! ! !

I read this book again after more than a year, and I am still too angry to read it. Check in again and think of it as a memory. After all, I read this book in the first place and felt uncomfortable everywhere, so I wrote two other books about Shooting the Condor Swordsman. Of course, the writing is not good. I just wrote the story in my heart to lighten my mood. This book can be regarded as a guiding light, but it has to be reversed, and there are too many mistakes. Statement that the negative review is not malicious (still five points)—— I just want to give you a little suggestion: If you can avoid abuse, try not to abuse me. It's not good to hold back.

Although there are some flaws in all aspects, the overall plot is okay, neither long nor short, Xiaoao, Shendiao, Fengyun, Zhuxian, what is the next world? I think we can come up with a myth to show off, establish the Huashan Immortal Sect, or continue to seek Taoism and cover the sky.

Every time a reading is completed, it represents the completion of the author's mental journey. During this period, the author shares his interpretation and journey. For readers, completion is just two words, but I think for the author, the end of suffering is painful detachment. So no matter what kind of ending each time I encounter, I, as a reader, would like to thank the author Author, you have worked hard to write for me. Although the purpose is the ultimate interest, what I have always wanted to say is that with the legitimate interest of your efforts, you should take it for granted and don't have to feel guilty. You can take the interest and write well. Come on, the Internet world full of books is grateful to you for being a person who has always loved writing. Thank you to the author for your great contribution.

Here, I would like to warmly praise this novel that I have read recently. With its unique perspective, vivid writing and exciting plot, this book took me into a fairy world full of fantasy and adventure. The story of the novel is fascinating, like a colorful picture. From the protagonist's origin to his journey to immortality, every detail has been carefully crafted, which is amazing. The plots in the novel are so intertwined that it is hard to put it down. I am often attracted by the ups and downs of the plot in the book, and I devote myself to this fantasy world without sleep or food. The novel also excels in character development. The protagonist's growth process is intertwined with the fate of many characters. Each character has its own unique personality and story, which is unforgettable. The author vividly displays the emotions and growth of the characters through delicate brushwork, which made me deeply resonate with these characters. In terms of writing style, the author uses rich imagination to vividly depict the fantasy elements of the fairy world. From the magnificent fairyland to the sinister demonic realm, every scene is unforgettable. At the same time, the author's ability to control language is also very good, his writing is fluent, and it is intoxicating to read. Overall, this novel is a masterpiece worth reading. It not only brings readers a visual and spiritual feast, but also excels in plot, characters and language, making people intoxicated. I highly recommend this novel and believe it will become a shining jewel on your bookshelf. Finally, I would like to give the novel a five-star rating and look forward to the author continuing to bring us more surprises in future works. This novel will undoubtedly become a milestone in Xianxia novels, bringing readers more exciting stories and profound insights.

Very tasty. There are many highlights. It doesn't blindly follow the original plot, and the innovative parts are reasonable. There are trade-offs when collecting skills, and you are not practicing the original skills, but perfecting your own way with the help of the system. What's especially popular is that there are no women everywhere, the couple work hand in hand, advance and retreat together, and travel to all realms. The only drawback is that the protagonist is not invincible, or is not invincible for a long time, which is a bit frustrating.

I have read Chapter 90 (Volume 2, Chapter 22). The first world is Swordsman. There are several chapter beginnings: each has a few hundred words of synopsis. The second world is The Legend of the Condor Heroes. It is not recommended to watch it. It is recommended to watch the next world directly (or skip to watch)...

You have forgotten cause and effect. It is good to have destiny. You are not from this world, and you are not involved in cause and effect. But Dongfang Bubai has cause and effect with you. His cause and effect must be yours. You can't hide even if you want to. You should learn from Li Changgeng. How did he kill people? If you have a grudge and sneak around, you must kill Cang Hui and don't let others see you. Cut off anyone who might harm you.

How can you not look for potatoes and corn when traveling through time travel? How to move the cold jade bed out of the ancient tomb.

It's really good. I'd like to see another one of the same type. Can anyone recommend it? It takes a couple to travel together. In fact, when I read martial arts novels, I like to read them all without cp. I can accept a single cp but I can't accept more than two cp. I am emotionally sensitive and I am used to being involved in the emotions of the protagonist and supporting characters when reading novels. Whenever I meet a martial arts girl, I click the cross button. In my opinion, it is an erotic novel. How can a beautiful woman in the martial arts world, who is sassy, ​​beautiful and has a free heart, commit to a man with other women? That kind of inclusion of women's articles simply devalues ​​the intelligence and self-esteem of beautiful women. [Thinking] Okay, I won't talk about it anymore. If anyone reads my comments and has good novels, please recommend them.

To be honest, the writing was pretty good, but there were still some holes left unfilled, and it even ended with an open ending that was almost unfinished, which is a bit of a pity. However, as the author said, the four worlds represent the four stages of life. The protagonist's life is complete, and the book naturally ends. But I think, who can say clearly about life? The future is yet to be known, so leaving this ending... Is acceptable.

I personally like this book very much. In fact, I could continue writing it later. It's a pity that it's finished. What attracted me the most was the single female protagonist. I hate harem stories the most in novels. The relationship between the couple in this novel feels very comfortable.

How should I put it? I read a lot of cool articles. Occasionally I read this kind of fresh and fresh articles for a change. There are a lot of flaws, but I don't think the flaws cover up the flaws. It's pretty good. At least the laughs and flaws are pretty good. I thought Xiao Longnu was very funny in Zhu Xian.

It's still very interesting and quite new. I've always watched Yue Buqun's fanfiction before. In fact, if many film and television dramas are written from another perspective and another character, it feels more interesting than writing from the perspective of the main supporting role or the protagonist. You will find that the world is different, such as the world of martial arts, and gangs like street gangsters can also become bigger and stronger.

The protagonist is a homebody and gentle, and being the leader of Huashan is like rushing to the market, and it feels a bit like marrying into another family. This book is generally good.

The author's article is very exciting and powerful. Why don't you write a new book? I look forward to you writing better works [Blow kiss]

Yes, the writing is quite good, the plot is compact, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The only flaw is that the system Lotus Platform has not been upgraded to the highest level. In fact, some worlds can be opened in the future, which is a bit eunuch, but the content of the book still looks good and worth reading.

This is the most beautiful world-traveling book I have ever read.

The poor protagonist feels okay again after touching the dog's head.

The writing is very good. Will the author stop writing after Zhu Xian World? Is this book finished? I don't think it has been updated for several days. It's actually good to finish the book like this. Of course, it would be better to continue writing.

It was very interesting to watch. Although I skipped some parts that I didn't like, I still finished reading it. After reading it, I felt that it was a bit lacking and not enough to read, so I had to find another article. It turns out that the score doesn't mean anything. Many of the books with a score of 9 or above couldn't finish reading a few chapters, but this score is not high, but I finished reading it.

The potential is huge. I hope I can write from the bottom world of martial arts to the prehistoric world.

The author's writing style is so sophisticated that it's a pity that he stopped right after Killing the Immortal Queen.