Xingtie: Mr. Yang, I Think There Are Some Misunderstandings

It is one of the few books that I am willing to read more. The characters are not OOC, and the jokes and jokes are not dense but just right. Especially the part about persecuting Lao Yang, absolutely! And it can be seen that the author simply wrote it because he liked it, and he wrote it very carefully, unlike the large number of fans who just want to make a living and can't even figure out the world view and characters. In short, don't be a pigeon.

I finished them all in one day. Although he is Otto's counterpart, the smell is too strong and I like it so much. As an Otto cook, I went crazy and ate it. Although he is not Otto, he has that taste. I praise Vey Apokalis. I originally just wanted to watch the persecution of the old man. Yang looked at the interaction, but the status of this book in my heart directly surpassed it. I have said that I am not Otto. This book must be praised highly. Also, although I like Seele very, very much, and I am willing to sacrifice my life for Seele, it is such a pity that what I like is that Fulai does not have a surname! ! ! Quack, quack, quack, so even if Otto is in the same position, the single heroine changed from Kallen to Seele, I watched it with gusto, and I must give it a thumbs up. Now that the madness is over, let us praise the author, Vey Apokalis, and Seele, and we will provide an objective evaluation later. To judge objectively, this is the Otto fanfic that best fits Otto's character so far. The other fanfics are just named Otto, but have no Otto flavor at all. But because of this, this book may have a crazy plot, plus some dark things, plus some characters that are difficult to comment on, plus descriptions that are difficult to comment on, and some things that are difficult to comment on. This is difficult to comment on, so we need to understand the Ba of Honkai Impact III. Billen experimented. If you can't accept this, I don't recommend watching it here. Before watching it again, you have to understand Honkai Impact 3 a little bit, otherwise it will be like the Riddler in some places. Another point is that the author may be relatively weak, and some people may find it comfortable to read. For example, the section about Li Xue, I like it very much. It feels like reading poetry, but for some people, it is very dull and useless content. There is a lot of this kind of content. In general The advantage is that the character of Otto's homologue is very restored, and the words are very gorgeous. Sometimes it is very emotional when I read it. Of course, the shortcomings are also obvious. Because it is a homologue of Otto, it is still very restored, so there are some very difficult points to evaluate. For this difficulty, you can look at the life experience of Honkai Sankiana, and the Babylon laboratory where the first Herrscher of the Sky was born. The other one is that it is relatively watery and verbose. Generally speaking, It's a lot more fun. Anyway, I enjoyed watching it. On the other hand, it's relatively slow to warm up because it's an Otto peer. Objectively speaking, I have abandoned my love for Otto. It should be four stars. It's still worth watching. But for the third time, if you can't accept Otto's peer, there are some things that are very difficult to evaluate. There are also some things that are difficult to evaluate. This is the most important. If you can't accept it, then withdraw it. The Riddler and Hydrology are not worth mentioning in front of such difficult-to-evaluate things.

This book really writes the image of Otto. It can be said that it is one of the few excellent works in Honkai fan fiction that I have read.

Very nice! As a cook, I am very satisfied with Vey's description in this book! And it updates quickly! Highly recommended! ! ! I'll collect a dozen or so chapters first, it's really good. I'll collect them and read them with my roommates next week [laughs]

Looks great, come on, it perfectly matches my fantasy of this kind of character. Come on, it perfectly fits my fantasy of this kind of character.

Let me start by saying that in the early stages, Belloberg's plot is fast. It can be seen that the author is not yet proficient in processing skills at this time, but there is no problem. Then the author has a good grasp of Otto, who is evil but not despicable, and self-interested but not selfish. And there is nothing out of the ordinary about each character, that is, there is no OOC. Respect the characters and settings and show the character's personality as much as possible within the limited plot, etc. Later, you will find that it is getting more and more exciting not just because the plot is about to reach a climax, but because the author is making rapid progress () Ahem, it's a bit presumptuous to say this. I looked at it before and after and compared it, and found out. Ah? Is it that big? I mean plot and handling. To be honest, this alone is a guarantee of quality, because he really writes the characters with all his heart. The author has subtle differences when writing about Otto. This is good, because the author wants to express a possibility (Apocalis whose wife did not die). And it was a lot of fun. I looked at the classic Green Lily Lady in the back, good, good, bathhouse hero in the front and Green Lily Lady in the back. It can only be said that the author really understands Otto. But I haven't seen it yet. I'll come back later to make additional comments.

I have read it, the child liked it very much, tasted it, and found it delicious, but there is a shortcoming, that is, the author should mix No. 24 Concrete, otherwise, it will cause the atmosphere to burn, summon the Serbian frost giant to use the super lollipop, the lightning whirlwind made my brain spin, resulting in a lack of carbon monoxide, which indirectly caused the ancient modified man to trigger ten layers of blood rage, and then threatened me and gave me a five-star rating @

As expected of a homologue of Otto, it's quite savory. But I just saw the end of Beloberg. I felt a little regretful not to take Seele with me. I was afraid that Seele's role would be less in the future. Looking at the chapter names, I felt that Seele's role was indeed less. So has anyone who has watched the latter part come to answer? (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ

The main plot of this book is really good, but sometimes some plot may have been deleted? Things that were not mentioned at all in the front are directly dealt with in the back. In short, as long as this book can be written more smoothly, many more people will read it. Mainly because there are not many people who play both Beng San and Ben Tie [laughing]

Among all the articles about bishops on the Internet, they are considered to be the best ones. There is not much to say. The character and plot settings are not broken at all. The only shortcoming is that there are too few posts about Xier. And... Lord Wei Yi, I am your dog mouth tooth! Ahhhhhhhh! ! ! Lord Vey! ! ! Suck, suck, suck (licking at the speed of light) (wagging tail) (rolling around) (biting with other dogs) (biting won) (circling proudly around Mr. Vey wagging his tail)

Great (^0^)/, this is what I want to watch. Each character is really well portrayed. The plot is driven by the protagonist's strategy. When I saw Luofu, he turned into a happy messenger. To be honest, I couldn't accept it. But looking back, I can only say that it was my eyesight. I feel that every character is really drawn to life. But I feel a very awkward feeling. I can't tell where it is, but the character of the protagonist really hit me perfectly. I can only say that it is Otto but not Otto. It seems to have a touch of humanity. I can only say that if the author changed the title of the book and changed the cover, the book would not be like this.

This book is undoubtedly very well written. Although I haven't read it for a long time, I still deeply felt the charm of this book. He wrote Otto's calculations just like the original work. When I was emotionally aroused by the protagonist, he made a backhand operation. He said he was acting just now. It's a half-truth. But I'm looking forward to what the protagonist will do next. When you hate a character, it often proves that the character has a soul. The protagonist is a villain, and he knows he is a villain. That's all I can say. My highest rating. The main character is Otto.

I think this is the book I expected. Maybe it is not as colorful a world as I imagined, and maybe the character of the protagonist is not in line with the best fantasy in my heart, but here is everyone's mediocre and great ideals and pursuits, and here is the bishop who makes people's dreams come true when they are desperate and helpless. There is the suffering called life, the brilliance called hope, the wailing called despair, the possibility of choice, and the glory of human nature. "Praise" Praise, praise, praise the one named Destiny, praise the despair he brings to us, praise the dawn he brings to us, praise the hope he brings to us. Praise, praise, praise the one who leads the destiny, praise the Lord of crime and punishment who brings us chaos and confusion, praise the Lord of crime and punishment who brings us order and clarity, praise the Lord of crime and punishment who brings us dawn and choice. Praise, praise, praise to the Lord of Sin who leads the House of Destiny. Praise, praise, praise the Lord of sin who opened up the path called sin. Sing to Him, sing to Him for bringing us the story of despair. Remember Him and the miracle He brings to us called choice. Praise Him for bringing us the story called perfection. We come from reality, we witness strange stories, we record their greatness, we sing their glory, come and offer everything, offer our souls, offer our bodies, offer our wills, just for the Lord of Sin and Punishment, just to let the world remember the glory of the Lord, just to let the world know the name of the Lord, Vey Apokalis. I suddenly feel that I am suitable to be a devout missionary~

One glance at Ding Zhen, a top-notch iron-bending second creation. When I first read the title, I thought I needed to know a lot about Beng 3 before I could watch it comfortably. As a result, even I, who didn't understand Beng 3 at all at the beginning, enjoyed watching it. Not much to say, whether a novel is good or bad should be read and evaluated by you yourself. (If I have to comment, Xi'er is very cute, hey, hey, my heroic little Xi'er) I'm just here to remind those who don't know Beng San. Not understanding it will not affect reading at all. I came back to read the review and found that what I said was not very good. If you really don't understand Beng San at all, you should search for the conflict between Lao Yang and Otto. If you don't understand this, Lao Yang's part will probably be quite confusing. After all, I was like that at that time. It's okay if I don't understand other things.

The best fanfic I've seen on Tomato so far, it's like Otto climbed out of a coffin and wrote it

It is a very worth-reading Bengtie fanfic and even an Otto fanfic. While the plot advances steadily, the daily life and the background of the characters are also perfectly connected. It perfectly creates the image of Otto Apokalis as a devil in a sacred cloak in my mind. There is nothing to say about the character creation. It can even be said that Bengsan's character creation itself is extremely complete. , And while I love those characters, I also love Wujiwu and everyone portrayed in this book. I hope the author can follow this rhythm and write better and better! ! !

The author describes it very well There is also If the author is confused about the future plot or characters, it is recommended to read some of Nietzsche's literary works. Many of the characters in Sanbengzi's family are based on Nietzsche's literature.

The writing is very good. Sometimes crazy writing will be very enjoyable for those who like to read excellent writing. Of course, there is a point. I prefer lyricism and the plot. I feel very good so far. The protagonist is very good and a very kind protagonist. At least he is very kind at the moment.

Now that I see it, I feel invincible. This *Xianzhou expletive* is so good-looking. This is the truth about Otto. The writing is also very good. Some of the clips are paired with the BGM of Honkai Impact III. It feels like it can be watched as a new plot! Only for Yaliluo

It's actually okay. . . . I'm a little crazy, but I like it like this. But if you want to see the love line, forget it. The love line is a bit short, but it's not a big problem [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

This book is really super good. Among the many Bengtie novels I have read, this book is considered the best. The characters the author depicts are also very full and the emotions are on point. Especially the protagonist is full of bishop flavor. He is very old.

It's not bad. The characterization of the characters is quite good. I personally like this kind of exaggerated sentences, but there is one shortcoming. There is not much portrayal of Xi'er in the article. The male protagonist regards Xi'er as his only belief. There are many descriptions of the male protagonist's feelings in the article. Maybe Xi'er's description of the male protagonist's feelings is very little. Although there is no OOC, the character is not particularly full. I think this book should not just stop at the image of Xi'er. In terms of the image described by Lao Mi, since the emotional portrayal is very important, the characters of both parties should be fully portrayed. On the other hand, the image of Eleanor is very three-dimensional, and the portrayal is better than that of the heroine Xier. It can be seen that it is not that the author's writing power is insufficient, but it is not distributed well. Of course, the author also said that this is his first book, and it is quite good at this level. It is very stylish. I hope I can write better and better.

It's well written, it feels like Otto Bento, even heavier, and I feel like the author understands psychology quite a bit. Author, can I make a request of you as a reader? Of course, a valuable gift must be worthy of valuable literary skills. I believe you, the author, will think about it. Request: Can you write about Beng Beng? After all, there are too few articles in which the savior is the heroine, and the author's writing style is also very good, so this is my lifelong request! ! ! Thanks

It's so good. It took me two days to read all the chapters so far. Forgive me for not being good at words. I don't know what words to use to describe this book and my feelings about reading it. I can only say that this book tastes so right!

The Otto flavor is really strong, and every time I watch it, the corners of my mouth are as bright as the sun. By the way, when I stab Xi'er, I want to see Pinoconi's blood flowing into a river! You no longer have Xi'er, but you still have me, my friend.

It's so good-looking, and the characters don't have OOC, especially Otto. I can even use this Otto to infer Mihara Otto's character. If you don't like the characters in the plot, you can skip it, and it won't affect you.

It's a rare masterpiece, but it's a bit evil to bring trouble to Lao Yang, but it's really funny. But I hope there will be more interaction with Xi'er, and I want to see a show of affection.

Overall, it's pretty good. I highly recommend it. Otto has a strong flavor. It's a masterpiece in terms of Otto.

It's quite a restoration of Alto. The update speed can be slowed down, but the quality in the later stage must be ensured, otherwise it will be meaningless like a running story. There are good and bad reviews. After the book is written, there may be trolls to set the pace. There is no need to affect your mood. Come on.

It is a very good book. Although it is a fan novel, it very much restores the character and characteristics of the characters in the original work. It also writes its own style while writing the original work. It is very good-looking but there are too few chapters. Author, why don't you update ten chapters a day? One chapter in one day is enough for anyone to read?