Becoming an Ordinary High School Student in the Anime World

There are too many stitches, the rhythm is messy, many events are not related, and it looks inexplicable. I don't understand what the protagonist is doing in the end, and the protagonist's setting looks very powerful, but the actual performance is too poor. New authors should not stitch too much because they can't grasp the rhythm.

Are you waiting to rush to the set? Change the scene after a few chapters

To be honest, I didn't understand much of the content. At the beginning, the protagonist made me feel invincible. But later on, when you wrote it, I felt that he was good at fw. The theme was good. At that time, your writing was too confusing and had no priority [awkward laugh]. Give 4 stars for encouragement.

It's so messy and disgusting. It looks like the main character is omnipotent, but actually he's flying around.

It's okay, but like Chapter 6, people like me who haven't read the original work don't understand it very well.

Very wonderful book

Beautiful, 💐🍁🍡🍱🍅🍚☕

Is the author a newbie?

Very nice.