Reborn: The Return of a Concubine-Born Daughter to the Immortal Path

I read the first few chapters (a little complicated inside [shocked]), read the introduction again and it was more complicated [shocked], and then looked at the tag (ancient romance) First of all, I feel that the heroine is quite good, and the character she created is okay, but she is too absolute. She only thinks about how she was before rebirth, and does not realize why she is like this (I feel a bit awkward) 😳 Rebirth does not change IQ (of course 😳 does not mean that he is not good, it is just a bit too "I can't describe"); but I read the introduction, she is not included She has been living (fighting) at home for so long 🤔, 🤔, right, the introduction also expresses it... They have lived in the house for so long, I don't believe she will trust those people in her family before she is reborn (it may be that the other party hides it well), the most basic thing should be understanding, and you should be careful in everything... The label is a bit in line with the protagonist's glance 🤔 In the end, the author's writing is also very good 👍 ❤️. Although I didn't give you ✩✩✩✩✩, your writing is good 😳. It's just about the character issue (I personally think it's a bit awkward). I hope you can The more I write, the better, and I keep persevering 😳 (after all, writing a novel requires perseverance 😳, but I can't do it. I just wrote the first few chapters and outline, and then it was ruined, so that my classmates wanted to pinch me 🤦) So , you have to work hard ❤️, hold on, so I can continue to look forward to your next post 😘

Hey hey hey, super pretty. The heroine has a great character, she doesn't care about anything, she is kind-hearted but not like a virgin; she is decisive but not arbitrary, and she is never stingy with people who are kind to her. Will she take Master Rufeng as her teacher in the future? Can the author give some spoilers? [Blows a kiss] I hope there won't be a male protagonist!

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It's very well written. Like it. The writing and plot are all online.

A very beautiful work 👍 👍 👍 I don't know why the rating is so low [What] [What] [What] Especially recommended to book lovers 👍 👍 👍 It's worth reading 👍 👍 👍 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

I hope the author will be kinder to the heroine and not let those villains really bully her! I really admire the heroine's attitude of being independent and not having to be apprenticed to a teacher! Obviously, she has good opportunities and talents, but there is no benefit at all from becoming a master. The heroine can quickly catch up with those Nascent Soul elders, so why should she be humble to a master who is not as good as her! This is great!

Personally, I have always felt that the four arts are very important. Since there is an alchemy formation in space, I would learn them all. This way I can use the formations to rest and defend with the talismans. After learning the elixirs, I am not afraid of poisons.

Pei Yun gradually strengthened himself, became independent and self-reliant, and his emotional lines were also expressed very naturally, and he was decisively praised. The heroine Pei Yun's path to immortality, experience and promotion is written in a realistic and natural way. I also really like the heroine's independent and self-reliant character. The relationship between Pei Yun and Luo Rufeng also goes naturally. The heroine is not a love-minded person. I like the setting of the novel, which focuses on self-cultivation and self-improvement, supplemented by the emotional line. I hope the author will continue to work hard, update more, and stick to it until the end! Come on^0^~

The writing of this book is fluent and logical. Although there is not much description of emotions, it is well written. The author's writing level and layout ability are good. The writing is excellent 👍. It is considered to be the best writing among fantasy cultivators.

The writing is good and the organization is very clear. Come on, the author, come on, come on, come on.