HP: The Dark Lord's Daily Life

The protagonist and Xiao Long are so sweet - Al and I are getting close to each other, and Xiao Long also happens to have budding feelings for Al. I really want to eat it (of course, it's up to you to decide what to write) Can't get enough, really can't get enough! There will be an opportunity to add more updates, Fire Tongs Liu Ming My Merlin! ! Suddenly I want to watch All Al. Si Jiao, Xiaolong, and Harry the puppy are all so delicious. I want to see this All or group in the extras! !

Five-star praise! The main reason is that I want to see the relationship between Asmodeus and Draco 101. If that doesn't work, can we make a side story for Asmodeus and Draco? This is just a small wish of mine, and there is no moral kidnapping. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. The author's writing is so beautiful. If you add it, then I will thank the author greatly.

The plot is described in more detail, and the psychology of the characters is also clearly grasped. The feeling of Slytherin is very clear, and he has his own right and wrong. Dumbledore is indeed a master of holding water, but he is a bit less.

It's really good to watch. The character of the protagonist is good. I also like Xiaolong. The personal trainer's character design has not been broken so far. The plot is very novel. It's the first time I've seen someone traveling from the end of the world to HP. Come on! I love this book so much.

I've finished reading it. How can I put it this way? The plot and writing are both awesome and in line with my XP. The writing is so good that even Dumbledore can understand the protagonist's mood, but the stamina is a bit too strong. I don't want to read the same type of writing for the time being [crying] I hope that the author will continue to stick to his dream and his own path, and scare others to death with his awesome writing style (By the way, author, you are the god of the hp circle! You are the best among my hp articles with emotional lines (maybe?) And this type of hp! The best among custard apples! Come on!) Holy Mother: I still like Dumbledore (quietly) Sorry, sorry, sorry [love] I suggest you don't read Deng Chui and Upright Blowing. I'm covered in bruises now. Merlin [laughing awkwardly] If you like fun, you can read it. The style of the article will be more morbid in the later period, but if you like Gryffindor and the Progeny and don't want to be hurt, don't read it. Don't read Deng Chui. Deng Duoduo is a little OOC, which is sad for a lifetime💔

It's good to watch, but the sense of CP with Sijiao is a bit weak. Sometimes it feels like you're trying to force someone to hook up with you, and you fall in love all of a sudden. But the relationship with Xiaolong is also well written. When I didn't read the introduction at first, I thought he was the main palace. The friendship between the two of them really came naturally, and the protagonist's personality is very charming. I don't know how to describe this feeling, but I've stopped here. [Cover face]

It looks good, I like it [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration], but the emotional connection with Sri Lanka is not very obvious [Crying] [Awkward laughter]

Very nice! Very well written! Almost didn't see ooc! And the emotional line is slow but normal! Especially the emotional line of Sijiao! ! ! This is so much better than other Vince Cult's sudden and abnormal emotional lines! ! ! Come on, author! ! ! [Full]

The scoring criteria for college entrance examination essays are: Content item: 10 points, rich in content, true in emotion but deviating from the meaning of the question, unclear in the center Expression item: 17 points, rigorous structure and smooth expression Development item: 15 points, more profound, rich, literary and creative Total score 42 points The writing is very good. I personally like Sri Lanka and expressed my main cp. However, the obvious emotional change at the beginning of the article is Xiaolong. The sudden change of characters feels weird and there is no emotion. The most important thing is what should Xiaolong do😱

It's so beautiful. Author, can you change the cp to Xiaolong? They really have a good relationship.