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The protagonist and Xiaolong are so sweet - Al and I are getting close to each other, and Xiaolong also happens to have budding feelings for Al. I really want to eat it (of course, it's up to you to decide what to write) Can't get enough, really can't get enough! There will be an opportunity to add more updates, Fire Tongs Liu Ming My Merlin! ! Suddenly I want to watch All Al. Si Jiao, Xiaolong, and Harry the puppy are all so delicious. I want to see this All or group in the extras! !

Five-star praise! The main reason is that I want to see the relationship between Asmodeus and Draco 101. If that doesn't work, can we make a side story for Asmodeus and Draco? This is just a small wish of mine, and there is no moral kidnapping. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. The author's writing is so beautiful. If you add it, then I will thank the author greatly.

The plot is described in more detail, and the psychology of the characters is also clearly grasped. The feeling of Slytherin is very clear, and he has his own right and wrong. Dumbledore is indeed a master of holding water, but he is a bit less.

It's really good to watch. The character of the protagonist is good. I also like Xiaolong. The personal trainer's character design has not been broken so far. The plot is very novel. It's the first time I've seen someone traveling from the end of the world to HP. Come on! I love this book so much.

It looks good, I like it [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration], but the emotional connection with Sri Lanka is not very obvious [Crying] [Awkward laughter]

It's good to watch, but the sense of CP with Sijiao is a bit weak. Sometimes it feels like you're trying to force someone to hook up with you, and you fall in love all of a sudden. But the relationship with Xiaolong is also well written. When I didn't read the introduction at first, I thought he was the main palace. The friendship between the two of them really came naturally, and the protagonist's personality is very charming. I don't know how to describe this feeling, but I've stopped here. [Cover face]

I've finished reading it. How can I put it this way? The plot and writing are both great and in line with my XP. The writing is so good that even Dumbledore can understand the protagonist's mood, but the stamina is a bit too strong. I don't want to read the same type of writing for the time being [crying] I hope that the author will continue to stick to his dream and his own path, and scare others to death with his awesome writing style (By the way, author, you are the god of HP food circle! You are the best among my HP articles with emotional lines (maybe?) And this type of HP! The best among sour apples! Come on!) Holy Mother: I still like Dumbledore (quietly) Sorry, sorry, sorry [love] I suggest you don't read Deng Chui and Upright Blowing. I'm covered in bruises now. Merlin [laughing awkwardly] If you like fun, you can read it. The style of the article will be more morbid in the later period, but if you like Gryffindor and Family Generations and don't want to be hurt, don't read it. Don't read Deng Chui. Deng Duoduo is a little OOC, and it will be sad for a lifetime💔

Very nice! Very well written! Almost didn't see ooc! And the emotional line is slow but normal! Especially the emotional line of Sijiao! ! ! This is so much better than other Vince Cult's sudden and abnormal emotional lines! ! ! Come on, author! ! ! [Full]

The scoring criteria for college entrance examination essays are: Content item: 10 points, rich in content, true in emotion but deviating from the meaning of the question, unclear in the center Expression item: 17 points, rigorous structure and smooth expression Development item: 15 points, more profound, rich, literary and creative Total score 42 points The writing is very good. I personally like Sri Lanka and expressed my main cp. However, the obvious emotional change at the beginning of the article is Xiaolong. The sudden change of characters feels weird and there is no emotion. The most important thing is what should Xiaolong do😱 Ah - I'm really dying. If you want to switch to Sri Lanka, just switch. Why are you still abusing me? It's really not as good as Xiaolong, and I feel that the protagonist's ability is slightly suppressed.

It's so beautiful. Author, can you change the cp to Xiaolong? They really have a good relationship.

The author is very nice, but please. Let's replace cp with dragon. [Crying][crazy][crazy][loving][loving][loving]

The plot was very good and coherent at the beginning. Although the author said that he wrote it based on his feelings, it was really interesting. Although the plot was changed later, it was very interesting to watch. The author must believe in yourself, what you write is really beautiful.

Sure enough, Altumei is better... In the early stage, Sijiao had no feelings for Al at all. In the middle period, it suddenly felt a bit abrupt. Secondly, the author should also know that everyone thinks that Sijiao is equivalent to indirectly destroying Al's hope and hope of living. In fact, I think it's okay, because as the author said, Sijiao didn't mean it, he didn't know it at all. But what I care more about is that Sijiao heard Al tell him that Dumbledore concealed this matter from him and asked him to think about it carefully. In the end, I still chose to listen to Dumbledore😭 This fact is enough to make me feel stuck in my throat... The subsequent interactions. . It's actually not bad, but! Sometimes I even think that what Dumbledore said is right. Although in a sense, Sri Lanka did not do anything wrong, I still can't accept it... Fortunately, the text is free of CP. I still have some extra episodes left to watch, and I can't stand it anymore. My family, ah, it's really weird. I feel that Al is a bit OOC compared to the Al in the main text... But I still have to say that the Al written by the author really made me love him, especially when the pendulum broke! I really cried while reading it😢I cried until I was deprived of oxygen and wanted to die.😭The author's description really brought the writing into that paragraph. I dare to call it the pinnacle of this article. It's really In general, the author's writing is already very good, and the flaws do not hide the flaws. I hope the author can write more and better works. Of course, don't write so harshly next time😢It will really fall apart, thank you

It's beautiful, very beautiful. It's a novel for newcomers with great potential. It's just not as good as that one, but it's normal. Come on, newcomers, give it to the author.

It's really beautiful. It's this knife. Each one pierces my heart. Author, why do you write so cruelly? ! ! ! ! ! [Dark and twisted crawling] [Crazy roar] [Crazyly pulling out own hair]

Well written, the writing style is very delicate Do you know that the protagonist goes from a arrogant, arrogant, ambitious, hopeful, and proud young man to a callous and insensitive tool who only has hatred for his father? Maybe this is what the aggregation system is like. Potter still loves the wrong person The like-minded Malfoy finally stood on the opposite side. The notebook that accompanied him was eventually burned by him. His most trusted teacher still gave him the most fatal blow Maybe you have forgotten that you once said goodbye to the person you left - one long night "I changed from wanton red to sickly white, from the wind of freedom to the iron of shackles."

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's so good to watch, it feels so good to watch, Draco is so cute, Harry is so cute too, an innocent little boy who doesn't understand his first love, hey hey hey [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss](¯¯crimin ), I am a pervert, I love knocking, and knocking anything will make me nutritionally balanced (I feel like Snape has very few emotional lines) Personally_(:з∠)_I always get hurt when I knock the protagonist secretly, and I attack a lot, I'm a pervert, so don't worry about me [laughter]

The front is very nice, Al is a born Slytherin, and he is also a child who lacks love very much. The only source of his love was his father's soul, but Dumbledore, who advocated the theory of love, shattered Al's love with his own hands. It really made me cry later. Al just wanted to resurrect his father and didn't want to join any party. Why couldn't he be allowed to do so? I obviously don't like watching torture, but I actually read the whole book. (ಥ_ಥ)

The plot is good, but the emotional line... The first part can be a bit hard to explain later, but the author's writing style is good, so I might consider reducing or not eliminating the emotional line. I feel that it would be great if the author writes a novel with a single protagonist and no cp (personal opinion, don't worry).

I must say that the book is very good, the writing is very good, and the changes to the original plot are also very good. But I think Al's pendulum shattering could be done in a gentler way. Because it's really too sharp. What I must say is that even though the author changed the script, he still performed normally. I even think it is extraordinary. The plot behind it is really good. It's really nice to focus on your career without CP. I love CP. I personally think that if it were not for the main line without CP, it might be the Sri Lankan religion chasing his wife in the crematorium. The writing is so good, I really love it, I love it so much. The stream of consciousness in the later episodes is really awesome. There are also some sentences in the article that I can't help but jot down, I love them. I really have nothing to fault about this book. In terms of my current reading of novels, it is considered an S+ level. Except the big knife in the middle is too painful (crying). Once again, it looks good, I love watching it, I love watching it!

It's super good-looking. Although I like to fight Draco and Asmodeus, I still have to respect Da Da's wishes and write a few extra chapters. Oh, by the way, Da Da's writing is very good. I like it very much.

It's really, really good-looking. This should be the best-looking of all the Harry Potter novels I've read. The protagonist is really in line with my psychological needs. But it's a pity that the author doesn't seem to want Xiaolong to be with the protagonist. What should I do? I'm really sad, but the other writing is very good and great. The author needs to work hard and update it! Love you~

The description of the character's psychological activities is wonderful and fitting. Each chapter will have the author's explanation (telling his own thoughts), but it will be very confusing to read. Even if the author clearly stated that the main plot is Sri Lanka, he will also write about Charmander's diary and Harry's plot. These emotional lines (also including different time periods) are interspersed in it. Even though the author has written down the time, overall it feels really confusing after reading it directly. Of course, readers can choose to skip it. I have to say that the author's writing style is very elegant. The description is very touching [sending my heart]

Really, the scene when I saw his gray hair really made me [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] The author wrote it very well, it was very interesting, and the protagonist has a special personality, but as you can imagine, I am on the wrong team, but I really look forward to Xiaolong being the shou. I will follow up with the review after it is finished or at other times. Come on, author

This book is really good. Friends who are short of books can read it, but if you can't accept that the CP in the introduction is Snape, but the CP in the first part of the main plot is written by Draco, please quit. I personally think it is not bad, but the first part of the main plot is a bit messy, so I have no other opinions. If the author will write this book, I hope you can listen to my opinion. Family members commented again, I love this book so much, okay? So cool! What can I say, it feels like Tom and Asmodeus are having a great time fighting each other! What kind of evil CP is this! But I really want to fight hard. Let's not talk about this first. The main thing is that Asmodeus is really sensible! I really love his character so much, I love him to death, okay? I'm going to start writing articles, please take your time and read!

When I saw the title "Mr. Prince is sighing again", I thought it was a light-hearted one. In fact, the tone is a bit heavy. Be mentally prepared for the abuse. It's okay. Also, there are so many extras, and there are many types. It feels like the author is writing a fanfic for this book. I really like some of the extras.

It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful. This book is like a roundworm in my stomach. Every point has stepped on my xp. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] I love the author so much [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

The character of the protagonist is deeply rooted in people's hearts, some changes in behavior and thoughts are handled well, there are many foreshadowings, and the logical thinking is clear and meticulous. The disadvantage is that the emotional line, especially the expression of family affection and love, is not detailed enough, the emotional changes are a bit abrupt, the ending is also a bit hasty, and some people's characters do not match the characters foreshadowed by the author.

Hey, it seems that I have finished talking in the review. Here in the book review, I wish you a happy future with your next novel. This book is also very well written. It's finished now. I believe there will be people who only read the ending. Good luck to the author😘

It looks good. The character of the main character really poked me [Blow kiss] But the development of the emotional line is a bit slow. It would be better if the author wrote more about the small interactions with Sri Lanka [Sending my heart] [Please update] No matter what the author's final choice is, I will always support him [sending my heart] [sending my heart]