Fall of Immortal Territory

Very good, it should be at least 9.8 Points, no exaggeration at all! I just don't know if the updates will be fast or not. This is a hundred thousand times better than rubbish time travel stories. I didn't miss a single word. It's great. It's an absolutely original work. Tomato's editor should highly recommend it.

This book deserves a rating of 9.999. Not straightforward or obscure, but full of human feelings and temperament. It will make you cry, laugh, and read his book like a dream. The other books, even if they are made into TV series, are not as good as it.

I'm very fond of reading books. The writing style in the early part of this book reads like a fantasy novel routine. The writing style and detailed descriptions in the later part of the book, which is about to leave the town, are no worse than the book with a score of 9.1 Or 9.2. I have filled in all the holes, and the more I read and write, the better I get. It is comparable to Mao Ni's books, but really, it is too short. I think the author has published a total of 3 books, and they have just started writing. With everyone's support, this book will be possible.

I gave it 5 stars because not many people read it, but the quality of the book should not be so low in popularity. By Tomato standards, this book has a low rating. I have read Chapter 574 so far, which is average. Counting the foreshadowing, 2/3 of the plot can be read carefully. It can be expected that there will be an explosion later in the book, and it is worth looking forward to. There is a lot of foreshadowing in the book, especially in the early stages. Skipping these plots won't affect the reading experience, but it won't work if you don't write them. (It's a matter of opinion) The advantage of the book is that the main character practices very slowly, and there are enough words to describe the process. Although the details are not particularly detailed, fortunately it is not holding your breath in the water. The shortcomings are obvious. I am not very good at writing characters, so it seems like there are too many characters. There are nearly 600 chapters, and too many words are spent on setting up the plot and the male protagonist. The plots of the heroines (supporting characters) are too thin and incoherent. At present, the two candidates for the main heroine have become a vase. Liu Xue and Liu Xue really didn't write well, so they were not as impressed as Wolf and Fox. Wolf Ancestor Fox can write well but it was offline for too long. I can feel that Fengying paid great attention to his writing, but I am a little worried that the author will not be able to grasp it later. In the context of tomato hydrology everywhere, long articles with plot support can still be read. As long as the rating doesn't change, just support it. I'll treat this comment like a fart later.

The author does write it very well. I think it is good in terms of plot, character portrayal and emotional lines. Moreover, the author updates very quickly. I highly approve of it. One of the scenes that frustrated me was when Pig Trotter beat Xiang Ke. In order for Kang Hui to advance to Foundation Establishment, he almost killed Pig Trotter. And I remember that in a certain chapter, Pig Trotter said he wanted to kill Kang Hui. I wondered if this was a foreshadowing to push Pig Trotter and Liu to become enemies. Anyway, I felt aggrieved. Kang Hui had to be killed! ! ! ! And come on!

In fact, I feel that the author writes martial arts very well. To be honest, the fighting writing is at least better than that of Beacon Fire, with a sense of magic. Why not just open another martial arts route, such as a martial arts immortal who can cycle through the sky 129,600 times with one breath and 840 million acupuncture points in the body.

[Fei Shuangwen + Protagonist Madonna + Multiple Female Characters + Ancient Routines] Timeline - fictional, similar to the ancient Yu to Xia Dynasty. Protagonist - no time travel, no system Powers - humans, demons, ancients, Yin gods, ancient gods, and the will of the stars. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The first echelon of Tomatoes, the plot design is good, the characters are full-bodied, it is not a purely cool novel, but the protagonist is still the protagonist, he has a chance and a backer, and the marriage is good, which is enviable. It was a bit sadistic in the later period. All the major sects were dispatched in the battle to exterminate the plague, and a lot of fellow sects died. The so-called masters of the sects didn't know where they died! Since entering the fairy city, I have been abused in various ways. After coming out, people around me have died one after another. Now a Taoist companion has also died. I don't know what the author is thinking! Isn't it said that the next generation of the sect will be the leader? Does Mahayana survive the tribulation without leaving any means to save one's life? Master uses the imperial edict to avoid disaster, how is it different from death? Isn't it the totem of Daxia? That's it? As the elite of the sect, the senior sister died on the spot, so she was not taken seriously by the sect? Along the way, they were basically working alone. Although the three brothers obviously never spent time together, they were worse than dogs who were abused every time they went out together! There is also the setting in the article. It was obviously top-notch in the previous life, but in the end, there was no strong back-up force at all! Just a broken pot and a sky demon pine soul still want to seize the body! It was only thanks to his great power that he survived several times! What is the purpose of such a protagonist? Cruel? After reading novels for more than 20 years, this protagonist is the most miserable. Relatives and friends have died, classmates have died, teachers have died, Taoist companions have died, and I have also died several times. There is really no one else!

The overall writing is full of ups and downs. The author's writing skills are in the first echelon in Tomato. The content is also very interesting. I hope the author will keep updating. Come on.

After reading more than 300 chapters, let me evaluate it first. There are four stars. The writing is good, not a brainless novel. However, the character creation of the male protagonist is actually a bit unreasonable. He has just come out of a small place and has seen a lot of the warmth and coldness of the world due to his tragic childhood. It is normal to be wary. However, when getting along with Xue Chuwu and others, it is very problematic to make him feel on pins and needles from time to time. On the other hand, spoilers are really unnecessary and will affect the reading, leaving some suspense. Over chapter 380, this spoiler says that the master will not be the heroine, and I don't think it is necessary. Since I don't want to use a knife, and it's a tomato, I just need to keep it reasonably in the future. The master confesses that he felt that he was worthy of him in his previous life, and it will not be natural for the male protagonist to grow up in the future. In Tomato, most readers are still very disgusted with leaking girls, just don't eat them and don't poop them. It's very interesting, good luck to the author.

I have read so many tomato novels, and I have also been reading immortality novels since I was young. This is the only book that makes me more and more fascinated as I read it. This book is not like most fairy tales, with a wonderful beginning, and then endless literature, and then fade away. I feel that the beginning of "Downgraded to the Human World" is not that exciting and attractive, but the further you read, the more fascinating it becomes, just like unfolding a picture scroll, it becomes richer and more brilliant, and the story becomes more and more complete and fascinating. Moreover, it has been updated for so long, the quantity is large and the quality is not declining, which is really rare.

It's a very good book. The language is concise, lively and interesting, the writing is brilliant, the scenarios are logical, and the characters are rich.

For me, this novel cannot be read in one sitting like some classic novels, but it will not be exhausted because the novel still has many attractive features. First of all, the background structure of the entire novel is okay. According to this rhythm, the early and middle stages should be fine. I hope the author can stabilize the rhythm in the later period and not collapse at the end like most good novels... Secondly, there are no big problems with the logic background of the entire novel. There are not so many idiots, and it is not a brainless system or sign-in flow. The setting is basically reasonable and the logic is coherent. This is better than 95% of Tomato novels. One more important thing, it's interesting. The writing style does not have the stagnant or childish feeling that many online articles have, and the integration of various Internet memes is not too abrupt. There are many laughs and it is relatively normal. There are also some elevated thoughts and opinions (collectively referred to as entrained private goods), and the overall spirit is uplifting. The general background narration is peaceful, which is very good. It seems that this is the author's first novel, and it is already very good. The author's university major is most likely liberal arts, probably in the literature, history, and philosophy. The novel itself is naturally not worthy of full marks, but when placed on the internet and on Tomato, 10 points is not an exaggeration.

Although it has some flaws, it is really a good book worth recommending. It is one of the few novels I have seen on Tomato that I can read patiently without skipping chapters. The score is low, 9.6+ In absolute terms.

It is a rare good book. Every character is full of flesh and bones, and the world view and values are relatively positive. There is no absolute good or evil, only different positions. It is not a cool novel, not an invincible novel. I personally feel that it has surpassed 95% of the same type of novels on the platform. The only flaw is that the plot is flawed. The feeling of fate is too obvious, so that many plot kills are too abrupt, compared to Ruxue Chuwu's death, such as Lu Que's first death, was too blunt, just for the sake of dying. In addition, a lot of life plots were written to create the character's image, but the main plot that drives the whole book is relatively small, which is good or bad. There are many pitfalls to fill in in the new book. Let's see if Xu Yan can continue Lu Que's destiny to support the second book. It is even too slow [smile]

To be honest, I feel more deeply. The author's writing is very good. The plot is very good. I was moved. The characters' personalities are all written out. Unlike other novels, the heroine is like a puppet without any personality. The plot is also very touching. To be honest, I almost cried in some paragraphs. The first part is really boring, but the more you learn later, the better. Now the progress is getting faster and faster. Should the author finish this book soon? I feel that 2400 and 500 pictures should be almost finished. It is a good book.

Yes, he is skilled in writing skills and can also use various foreshadowings and ambushes.

The writing is so good and humorous. The protagonist's setting is: Lao Liujia is decisive in killing, which may be better described as extremely ruthless. After this book ferments for a period of time, it is likely to become the face of Tomato fantasy novels!

Excellent works are rare. Everyone wants everything to go well, but if it doesn't go as planned, there is no need to rely on it. It is ideal to have insight into all things and observe people's hearts. Individuals interpret it from their own standpoint. Even if people have objective rationality that transcends individuals, it is difficult to be perfect in everything. Just try your best. Defects are life. Transcendence is only for a moment, while being trapped is eternity. When you don't want to get rid of it anymore, you are mature when you accept it.

The writing is very good, and the story design is good at the beginning, but it seems a bit ordinary later on. It doesn't feel as majestic and majestic, but more like a trickle-down story of life and immortality. I'm not patient enough to read it, so please give it a good review.

It's very good. If you calm down and read it, you will find that it is a very thoughtful novel. The content is worthy of careful reading. The rhythm of the plot is indeed a bit slow, but it can be supplemented by some interesting daily life. Most of the characters can portray a unique image. Overall, it is a very good slow-burn immortality novel, which is suitable for reading slowly.

The writing is good, the story is interesting and suspenseful. After reading the end of the book, I still feel that it is almost boring. The ending of the battle seems a bit sloppy and it is not fully explained. I always feel a little regretful. The expected ending is that Lu Que is resurrected, can see Xue Chuwu and Wu Ying reincarnate and grow up with them, and then regain his memory and start over, and be able to interact with several people. The heroine spends more time with her master and friends, including her juniors, and her children transition in groups, and then she takes her relatives and friends to ascend together and enter the next stage. There are also three gods, but there is no fight. There is a lot of suspense. I don't know whether the author will start the next journey. This is the perfect ending in my opinion, so many regrets...

The description of the feeling of pleasure after depression is very powerful, and the boy's character is the wolf master in the world, but why are there so few people commenting on it? This book shouldn't only have an 8.0 Rating, it should be about the same between 9.1 And 9.4

I have read hundreds of chapters, and the more I read, the better it gets. Although there are some minor flaws, overall the plot and writing are top-notch. It's just that the protagonist Goldfinger was a bit outrageous in the early stages. Later, I still like the author's writing and art online.

I have read Chapter 46 and now I think this book is a rare fantasy work with multiple female protagonists. It is very good. In the early stage, there was a plot where the sidekick (who was dead) kidnapped the heroine, and the quilt was rolled up and the heroine was carried on her body. Someone might mind. It was suddenly poisoned. Those who didn't know it thought someone else had written it. It's an exaggeration.

The pyrotechnics of Cultivation to Immortality is different from other copies of Cultivation to Immortality. I feel that this book will have more depictions of daily life. There are some small flaws but not many. It is very suitable to read. It is a rare good book on Tomato.

I am amazed at the author's profound writing skills, and especially appreciate the delicate and fresh and natural description of details. The language description is extremely subtle, as if it were displayed on the screen. It provides a pleasing enjoyment between reading and listening. Give it five stars and add likes! Like!

I really like this book, the author's writing is very good. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is also very well-shaped. It has a bit of a sword-like feel, but the author also wrote it in his own style. Looks good, loves to watch, loves to watch.

After reading more than 500 chapters, I summed up the advantages: the writing is delicate and humorous. It's not an invincible novel. It takes more than 400 chapters to slowly grind out monsters and increase your combat power before reaching the golden elixir. There are foreshadowings and foreshadowings. The protagonist's relationship is a bit dull, but the supporting characters have flesh-and-blood personalities. Disadvantages: The author may want to keep readers who like spoilers, but I don't. Although there are a lot of minor flaws, the flaws do not hide the good points. I feel a little sorry that it does not have a happy ending. I barely managed to finish it by skipping reading. The author likes to harvest tears and vividly show the sadness of the swordsman, or "the journey of thousands of miles is long, and the people are different after ten years of gathering and separation." He wrote about birth, old age, illness and death in three parts. He wrote Wu Ying, Yu Xiaoyu, Xue Chuwu, Du Qingqing, Lin Yueheng, Nangong Yueli... They can't escape the cycle of vicissitudes of life, and Tai Ni Ma makes people feel like a knife. In order to hide her clumsiness and spend decades in jail, Miss He Ruoruo stayed in the Lu family for most of her life. She spent less time with Liu Li, Feng Ying, Yun Jinyan, and Su Xuan, and was extremely sad to see her separated more often. At the end of the article, everything that needs to be explained is explained, but life is not easy. After all, I don't like to end with regrets.

A difficult book to review The author's writing skills are good and his emotions are well mobilized. The fighting scenes are first-rate. In terms of plot, the structure of the whole story is clear and the realm is clear. The combat power is not broken. But why don't you want to give high marks? This author has a problem. He likes to write spoilers at the end of chapters, which makes me angry. Since you are not a brainless writer of this book, the readers use their own brains and then withdraw the foreshadowing later. This is the cool point for you to give the readers. What did you spoil for me? I'm not saying that I don't understand that the current online writing environment is terrible. Many people can't calm down to read an article with a complicated structure. But for those who are really attracted to you and want to read it, you are a kind of contempt and insult to the readers. It is not an exaggeration at all. You treat all readers as fools. Do you think you have brought yourself into Yu Jinchun? Several times I saw spoilers and wanted to abandon the article, but in the end I picked up the energy and finished reading. Of course, I am also willing to leave a comment, which shows that I still like this book very much. I hope that the author's future works will go well, and that you can maintain your original intention and maintain your current level.