Arknights: I Am a Large Group of Young Gods

This fanfic is really good, and it is one of the few in Tomato. His writing style, characterization, etc., I don't need to say much about the advantages in these aspects. You can find them naturally if you read more, so I want to express some of my other opinions here. This book has a high degree of restoration of the characters in the original work. The little rabbit, kitten, and white rabbit all have the feel of the original work. Some of the private settings are not a big problem, but I want to say that this book is too unfair to Kelsey. Author, why do you want to focus all those scenes on her? Kelsey is not such a character. The author is a chef, which can be basically seen. I also know that most of you chefs dislike Kelsey. I don't want to say anything about this. I can only say that everyone will see it how they see it. The attitude towards a character is not so easy to change, and I don't ask those Kai to be evil. But this book already shows signs of discrediting Kelsey. Let me explain in advance that I am not saying that the author deliberately smeared her, but that the scenes arranged by the author will definitely make many people dislike Kelsey. In this book, Kelsey chooses to use emotion and suffering to bind Kaya in order not to have any ill will towards the world when she becomes a truly mature Sea God in the future. This is understandable in my opinion, because her sincerity will not be devalued because of these. But for Kelsey in this book, I can hardly see her sincerity towards Kaya. She is more of a purposeful use. This is wrong, not Kelsey. Kelsey is actually emotional, but the length of time makes her unable to express herself well, the heavy responsibility makes her unable to care about others, and the tragic years have made her become the "omnipotent" person she is today. "The longer you live, the more stories you have and the more painful your scars are." Every time I think of this, I feel so sad that I can't speak. Is it possible for ordinary people to bear the pain of living alone on this earth for eternity? Most people would go crazy in this situation. But she is so sensible that it makes people feel heartbroken. She is also a human being, so why won't she get hurt? It's just that she understands that there is no point in showing vulnerability here. She must maintain the image of Lord Kelsey who is "all-knowing and all-powerful". Kelsey in the original work, I have no way of knowing how she survived these hardships, but I know that she was tired, really tired, and even wanted to give up. Everything she did was no longer for responsibility. She would not behave like in this book. In her heart, those doctors Amiya and the others are far above their responsibilities. The real her would not use these righteous reasons to force Kaya to do anything, let alone use the excuse of "for this land" to hypnotize herself, self-righteously standing on a safe moral high ground. She is a lone pioneer. "How lonely is your glory?" She doesn't need to flaunt anything, she doesn't need to defend anything, she just protects us as we move forward alone. Author, you can't treat her like this just for the plot. At least, no [Doctor] is qualified to slander her brilliance.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. In addition, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your Brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system and many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

The update speed makes me want to advise you to take a rest. The writing is very good (no matter what aspect it is). By the way, don't squeeze out all the inspiration in Chapter 14. Pay more attention to rest (I don't care about you, huh, I'm just fishing for sustainability) [scroll] [scroll] [scroll]

Well, this is a really good book that I read about Arknights. I also like the plot. Personally, when I read Arknights novels, I don't really like the female characters who all have a crush on the male protagonist. Although this one is also a female, this is one of the few books that I seriously follow. I hope the author will not stop updating.

The author's update speed is faster than other authors, and Kaya is also very cute!

This is the best book I've read on Arknights

I'm writing a review again. Overall, the book is pretty good. The plot and writing are the worst among Ark's second-generation novels, ranking T1. Considering the uneven quality of Ark's novels, there's no chance it can reach T0. Kaya's image is very plump, and she wants to be held in her arms and loved. Zhou's description of suffering is also adequate, capturing the essence of tearing beautiful things into pieces and contrasting to highlight suffering. But there are still some problems exposed: 1. It can be seen that the author wants to write original supporting characters with fuller images and enrich the plot, but it seems that he is a little unable to grasp it. To be honest, some of the dialogues are a bit awkward. Now it's okay to follow the original plot, but later on it will be very good to follow the Agor plot and add new characters. 2. The update is unstable. This update will be interrupted every week. I still like your previous appearance of the humanoid Haiji Jiji. Please restore it.

Five stars! Absolutely five stars! There are seven or eight updates a day, which is the most on my bookshelf. Although there are some typos sometimes, they are harmless. Author! I love you! !

So far, it seems to be a pretty good Ark fanfic. Tomato can also be ranked in the top few. All aspects are well connected. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. Come on, author! (If you are a little selfish, why don't you let Lapu show up? I feel like she should get along well with the protagonist and Didi)

Among the Tomato Arknights fandom, this is a must-try book. It is updated quickly and has guaranteed quality. It is a good product that is hard to find in Tomato.

This is a rare and complete fanfic, but I didn't feel very comfortable watching the plot. After all, I felt there were too many regrets, and the protagonist suffered too many injuries. How could you let the little angel get hurt?

It's so beautiful and the plot is also very good 66666, the author is very generous with eight chapters a day. I don't want to do anything about it in the future. I just keep updating three chapters a day.

Very good, I finally met the same kind on this land (twisted crawling) 😍😍My lord [adoration] [adoration] [love] [love] [love] (crawling with tentacles) [licking screen] [licking screen] [licking screen] Please feel free to spur me on [licking screen] [licking screen] [licking screen] [licking screen] [licking screen]

It's beautiful. The author Hai Hei is very productive. It's really super pretty!

I have read this book in Tomato Ark. It is the best book. Compared with the Origin Stone Worm, the pacing of the Origin Stone Worm is too fast, which makes me feel uncomfortable. The writing of Qi Yan's book is a bit too confusing. If I rank it, this one should be the first, Qi Yan second, and the Origin Stone Worm third. At the same time, the author is also very careful in writing. There are a lot of personal settings in it. Unlike most Ark novels that follow the main line, there are personal original plots and some personal original main lines. The various plots are well laid out and well connected, and there are not too many abrupt plots. , It makes people want to read it. The protagonist written by the author has also made many people like it. The writing is simple and easy to understand, and the relationship between people is also thought-provoking. I almost finished reading this book without skipping a beat. Now I am waiting for the author to update it. I just ask Skadi for your support! ! !

Very good book, love comes from the crowd This is the first time I see an author who is as productive as Haiji. [Score](The author was stared at

The plot is very well written and the characters are well controlled. I personally think it is better than the one written next door by Blood Warrior. Why is the author's update frequency slowing down?

This is 5381, inspiring to bring you more realistic book reviews (spoiler alert) Rating: 5.0 Yes, 5.0, This is the first perfect score I have given. I have been chasing this book for almost a year, and I think I can give such a score. This book is the second fan fiction I have read (the first was White-Haired Dog Qi Yan), and to a certain extent it has improved my criteria for judging fan fiction: fan fiction must be different from the official novel. After all, the same plot, no matter how exciting it is, will become boring if you watch it too much. This book is very well done. Although it relies on the image of Haiji, the author greatly enriches the image of Haiji. Here you can see a richer variety of marine descendants (the big hand of evolution has exerted its force) and more mysterious marine giants. In my opinion, this book is more like a DLC for Arknights. In addition, this book is also a relatively common revenge plot. This kind of plot is cliché, but it works. From ancient Greek mythology to today's online articles and novels, it can be said that they have endured for a long time. The problem with this kind of plot is that the more depressing it is at the beginning, the more satisfying the revenge will be later on. It just so happens that the author is very good at torturing the protagonist. Yes, you will see the protagonist who was abused for 693 chapters, but don't be angry. When you get revenge later, you will feel that the wait is worth it. In addition, the author cleverly puts the protagonist on the line of life and death, which can arouse the readers' sense of urgency and give them a deeper sense of involvement. You can also see a lot of interesting things in this book: what choice should you make when your mother-killing enemy takes great care of you to atone for his sins; how to live after the revenge is over; how to choose between becoming a monster-like person and a human-like monster, Kaya doesn't know, I don't know, the author may know, but we are all thinking. Next are some small reminders: We jokingly call this book the autobiography of Box (the author), because the author's health condition is really worrying, and the update time is not stable. There are times when there is no update for a month in a row (it is recommended to add the author to the book group)

I believe that I will be able to catch up on the plot I want to watch during this summer vacation. At the high-yield point, it's a bit underwhelming.

Ahem, let me make an objective evaluation. The content of the book is substantial, the characters are well-developed, and the plot is exciting, but that is not the point! ! ! ! The key point is the author's update speed, which is like a reborn parent! ! ! ! Ahhhhhh! ! ! ! ! Big thanks to the author! Let me see the miracle of 9 updates a day! ! ! ! [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart]

Personally, I like Kaya's dull character. As for the plot, I feel it's a little more daily at the moment, but it's really good. (Aren't the fans of Arknights and Honkai Impact 3 just for watching daily life?) There aren't many knives, it's just torture. The most important thing is that the author updates quickly, with at least four chapters a day (but I personally recommend that the author take a few days off, or update less slowly, and pay more attention to rest)

It's a very good book. I love reading it. There aren't many books about large groups by Porridge. At least this is the best one I've ever read. The author should save his manuscript on the hour and publish two or three chapters a day. If the inspiration is not enough later, he can use it as a hidden source of energy [laughter]

So far, it is a very good story. It does not involve time travel or character destruction. It has the boat flavor of the original story and some interesting jokes. It is very good. The author updates it very quickly. It is very worth following!

Yes, the meticulous description adds a touch of mystery to the article. The vast sea is written more vividly, and the transformation of the creatures on the seabed from enemies to guardians makes me excited. Very recommended

The writing is very good, the protagonist and Skadi and other characters are very detailed and perfect, especially the portrayal of the protagonist Kaya. This is the best Ark fanfic I have ever seen. I want to download the full text and print it into a physical book. I hope the author can write more daily plots between Kaya, Skadi and other operators, as well as Kaya and Skadi posts, long live the sisters, long live the author, a magical book. It is so well written that I couldn't stop reading it until midnight.

The quality is high, the heroine is cute, the author is productive, five stars.

It has been confirmed that the author has joined the large group, updating seven or eight times a day, praising Hai Hei and praising our Lord. I tried my best to find one that suits my taste, but I can't send it.

There are three reasons why I gave it five stars. First: It looks good and the writing style is very natural. Second: The author is so prolific, updating 5 to 10 chapters a day... I'm a little worried that the author will die suddenly. Third: Kaya is so cute! ! ! Something has happened now, the update speed is much slower [crying]

This book is so enjoyable to read. The author is a treasure who updates six times a day. Typos and other errors do not affect the viewing experience at all. There are so many updates and there are no weak points in the plot. In short, I feel better after reading it.

All I can say is that I highly recommend it! In the early stage, 24 years ago, I started reading this book with only fifty or sixty chapters. I thought the plot was a bit dry. But today, twenty-six years later, I restarted this book and started reading this book with more than 1,000 chapters. I actually finished it in one week. Even an old bookworm like me who has read more than 1,000 books is fascinated by this book. It contains gold. Don't say too much, it must be five stars. Those who say Kelsey is OOC, I don't know much about it to be precise, but Kelsey is also more worried about the suffering of this continent. If you want to refute it, you can refute it, but the gold content of this book is very high. It is really a pity that there is no 9.7 Or above. Brothers, for an old bookworm like me, no I won't read it if it fits the plot, I won't read it if it has flaws in description, I won't read it if the tone of the book is incoherent, and I won't read it if the plot flow is abnormal. I'm very picky. I picked twenty or thirty books, but they may not all have what I want to read. But this book made me laugh out loud today. It can be seen that the gold content of this book is very high, not to mention the OOC stuff, the plot Good, easy to get immersed in, I laugh when it's funny, I'm silent when the knife is passionate, if you like it, then read it fiercely, if you don't like it, then you can only find another book. To be honest, I have read more than 1,000 books, maybe 1,600 books, and I think this one is very good. This book is the first five-star review I have given, and the first five-star review among so many books. To be precise, I have read 1,743 books. It can be said that I am a bit wet inside, but at least I have more than 1,400 books and have read them all carefully.