Traveling Through the Ninja World: I Am Here to Be the Taoist Ancestor

Author, do you know why your rating is low? Haha, it's because you did too much YY and analysis. I fell asleep while listening to the novel today, but when I woke up, the plot didn't advance much [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Sometimes a chapter is just one or two sentences said by the characters, and the rest is unnecessary to read. I guess many people skipped to read it [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] I hope the author will not YY and analyze himself, and push the plot well. I still think it is quite interesting, come on. . .

The subject matter is great, the structure is rich, and the system is perfect. The description of the system is perfect. The mastery of abilities and power levels is okay, but sitting there in the first person is too much. If you write it in parentheses, it feels good to me, but if you stuff it in, it's uncomfortable. The rhythm level is enough, but I don't like your way of expression. It feels like someone is trespassing in the comment area. Be more pure and less yy.

My personal evaluation of this novel is pretty good. I feel that the character of the protagonist is very stable, the personality is still maintained, and the combat power has basically not collapsed. I feel that the combat power of Naruto novels is still prone to problems. The level of combat power does not match, the gap is too large, or the super model will greatly affect the perception. I believe that the creation of this kind of story must not only be consistent with the original work (you can have a lot of your own creations, but it must fit the content of the novel), but also consider the combat power. Overly dramatic descriptions of combat power can easily arouse readers' disgust. I have read a lot of Naruto novels, and the narrative level of this book is quite good. I give it a five-star rating and urge an update. [Smile]

I thought there were eight magical skills, but it turned out that I didn't even use the Golden Light Curse. I kept using ninjutsu. How could I be able to defeat one person!

I don't know why many fan authors have inherent malice towards Naruto, and even some readers feel that Naruto is nothing without the Nine-Tails, but Naruto's own chakra is 100 times that of Kakashi, an elite Jonin, and this does not count the Yang Nine-Tails chakra. According to statistics, Naruto's tactical literacy or combat IQ is also very high. 80% Of the famous tactics in Naruto are from Naruto. As long as Naruto is not over the top, he is the master of tactics in Naruto. Looking at Naruto, except for fighting Sasuke at the end of the early stage and looking for Sasuke at the beginning of Shippuden Apart from saving Gaara, Naruto rarely gets involved in battles. Whether he is fighting Haku and Zabuza in the early stage, or Neji and Gaara in the Chunin Exam, or fighting Nagato, Obito, Madara, and Kaguya in the back, Naruto is always able to hide his calm heart of looking for a fighter in the hot-blooded appearance. In these battles, Naruto has shown superb performance. The tactical ability that can be called "ninja combat". If Naruto didn't have the Kyuubi, he would be an extremely powerful ninja relying only on his own tactical qualities, chakra volume and perfect senjutsu. In contrast, if Sasuke didn't have the Sharingan, emmmm, I don't think he would survive long enough to compete with Naruto, so I still can't compare.

Overall, this is the most comfortable Naruto book on Tomato, but two chapters a day is a bit too little.

A very good book

The characterization is great, but there are too few updates, and it is not enough to make it exciting. Please write the protagonist as much as possible. The supporting characters can just have a scene. It is not necessary to write dozens of pictures specifically to describe it, right?

The plot is exciting and the logic is reasonable. I look forward to other books by the author. Good looking, non-toxic

Very good, the writing is very nonsensical. Very interesting. There is a kind of movie that I am watching, Stephen Chow. But there is no such joy and sorrow. There is only one kind of fun.

The writing is very good and the details are well polished. I am afraid that the combat power will collapse. I hope the update will be faster... Quick update, gift sent! The plot is too protracted, and the word count is not that good.

It's so well written, so good. To be honest, I have read this novel many times but was put off by the title, but listening to the book randomly prevented me from missing it. Looking at it so far, I would like to call it one of the top novels of Naruto. A follow-up review: The back part is a bit bland, so I'll skip what needs to be skipped. The quality is still excellent. Second review: Please revise the review. Later, I talked about Shimura Danzo traveling through the parallel world through Dragon Vein to develop Konoha, and then got the protagonist's script and other stuff and showed it to me. It was disgusting. Who wants to read that? . . I searched for a long time and wanted to skip it, but I couldn't tell which chapter to return to the original world. . . We don't know whether the Chunin Exams mentioned later or Nagato's attack on Konoha is the original world or the parallel world. We can't tell, and we don't want to tell. Really, who cares what kind of parallel world develops. . . Don't care, okay. We talked a lot about the changes brought about by Danzo traveling through the parallel world. What, the protagonist becomes Danzo? Like Danzo, are you sure to let Uchiha go? How could he let Uchiha go if he was the kind of person who was selfish and would be killed at the slightest sign of being out of control? Are you sure you didn't just kill the Uchiha and then equip your ANBU with a pair of Sharingan? In the original work, the person who can steal the Shisui Sharingan from his subordinate, and let Yakushi Nonou and Yakushi Kabuto fight each other can be so wise. Are you sure he is not a traveler from another world who has watched Naruto? What's even more disgusting is that the protagonist's wife from the original world, Tsunade, has become an adult here. . . No, is this purely disgusting to write? I didn't understand it, so I gave up. The front part is pretty good, but the back part is a bit bland. I just felt that the writing was a little better. Here comes a story about Danzo's life as the Dragon King traveling through a parallel world. . . . . . To be honest, I wanted to give it two stars, but the beginning of the previous You Qi was really good. You can't let one rat excrement negate the whole pot of porridge, so I give it four stars.

Overall, it's pretty good, but I feel like the author hasn't read Naruto, so he's only read Naruto novels or explanations... Also, what is written is a large section of the author's personal understanding... A lot of explanations... I don't know all the details😖... I went through several chapters and added a lot of analysis and explanations by the author. I finally thought that the fight was about to begin, and the next chapter will directly reveal the results, without any process...

The author's idea is very good. It combines Ninjutsu and Taoism, which is a relatively novel way of writing.

This one is okay, I'm currently updating it, the style is relatively relaxed, but there are too many repeated explanations, and it's a bit suspicious of the word "water"

The writing is very good, not immature, and the characters are stable. It doesn't feel like a second-grade elementary school student. The characterization and rhythm are also very comfortable to watch. Much better than those mindless cheating Naruto stories

It's okay, just don't mind if you're a little bit poisonous

Not bad! Can be used to kill time

The idea is good and the novel in Naruto is well written.

The rating of 6.8 Is too low. This work can definitely be called a masterpiece.

Suddenly I thought of one thing, is it possible for Wood Release to be the ultimate Yang Release? It uses a large amount of life energy to promote rapid growth of trees to reach the level of Wood Release (I have no personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

Si Guoyi, I'm waiting for the next thousand years

I declare that you, the author, are the third generation of Aquaman (ಡωಡ)

The book is very interesting, but I don't know why no one is reading it

Gently wake up the sleeping soul, the author should stop sleeping and get up to code [smile]

I don't know many details about Naruto, it's so miserable (┳◇┳)

I still like the plot of this novel very much, but it's too late at this time. The protagonist can't grow up, and I don't know how long it will take to see his explosive performance.

To be honest, I can actually see some brainless Naruto stories here.

It looks good. I like this kind of slow-paced, unsystematic, and non-random resurrection of people. Although I couldn't understand the preacher at all.

Looks good, I don't understand but I'm shocked