She is a jade spirit, and he refined her to hide his love. However, as soon as this forbidden relationship emerged, fate separated the two of them. They both fell into the mortal world, and they wondered whether it was love or evil. The Bana flower symbolizes love between life and death, lovers who will never meet again. And is their fate the same?
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The word "Jue" in Fang Jue's name itself means beautiful jade. True and Xuanbi, the name alone has a sense of destiny.
Although there were some twists and turns at the beginning, overall it felt very sweet.
Both of them feel lonely, but they are like finding whales on the same frequency as themselves in the deep sea. They are attached to each other and keep each other warm.
But since the character Hua Luo appeared, it really is!
Heart attack! !
She doesn't do anything about people's affairs at all. I'm convinced!
I just hope that the ending will be good, and please don't abuse me. 555, I really can't stand it at all.
I wish I could sprinkle a little more sugar, I just love seeing them posting together, please, please! !
After reading it, I would like to say a few words, this is a sweet and sad story about the reincarnation of a fairy.
The first few chapters are so sweet. The love between gods and wives is so sweet, but when they come to the mortal world, they turn to the path of abuse. The heroine's experience is not ordinary. The author has greatly created the relationship between two best friends, especially Lin Wenxue and Luo Yi in the human world. This is too touching, really sad.
I think the author's chapters in the human world are better than those in the divine world. How can I put it? The divine world feels like it's not enough, and there's still a little bit left behind. What is the basis for the deep relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist? In the divine world, the two of them don't seem to have experienced anything together? To strengthen feelings.
Haha, in the human world chapter, because we descended to the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, there may be a small problem here. Can love poems be written in modern style, haha, or should they be written like the Book of Songs and Chuci! I'm not nitpicking, just a small suggestion.
The author needs to control the rhythm of the storyline appropriately. For example, the plot after Lu Buwei's son intervened can be written slower. The author's writing style is online, very fresh, and he has certain skills in controlling words. He is definitely not a novice.
I don't know if Lu Buwei's son will steal the heroine's bride in the future as the storyline goes. It would be even more cruel if that were the case.
Big cheers for the author! Be nice to the heroine, it's not easy for women [cover face][cover face][cover face]
After reading the whole book, my biggest impression is that the author's writing style is very good, the large-scale description of the environment is very beautiful, the vocabulary is gorgeous, and the pictures in the book seem to jump before my eyes.
The story of Immortal World is very bland. The first three golden chapters are well controlled and can attract readers, but not much. The love between the male and female protagonists develops very quickly. The story of Immortal World is all about love and love. After that, the male and female protagonists enter the mortal world and begin to go through trials and tribulations. Up to this point, it is a routine and there is no problem. Only after going through trials and tribulations can their relationship become stronger. This is understandable.
I can see that the author really wants to write a good story. I actually have a lot of affection for the first heroine. I can't meet a pure person in reality, so I can only rely on books.
But he was too cruel to the heroine after he came down to earth, right? Wandering around, spending the night in a broken temple, not eating enough and sleeping well, it made me feel bad to see it. I really hope that the heroine can live a better life and have a good ending with the hero.
It has a comic-like narrative style. The changes in each scene are very abrupt, but the writing style is very delicate. When each scene appears, the delicate description can make people feel the three-dimensional picture of the scene. It is simply great!
However, the problem probably arises here!
Readers who like delicate writing styles may not be able to put it down, and may even feel that good writing should have such writing style. However, readers who are interested in plot will probably feel indifferent when they see such writing!
And I am a plot-loving reader!
In fact, from the beginning to the present, I watched it without any emotional fluctuations, because the plot did not have the ups and downs I wanted, or there was no sense of conflict at all!
In fact, a sense of conflict can arise at the beginning. For example, the appearance of a godly admirer, such as Hua Luo Diancha, etc., Can bring about a sense of conflict in the plot. I was expecting this from the beginning, but it turned out not to be the case!
It seems that there is no good and evil here, no intrigues, and no conflicts of interest. Everyone's conflicts are superficial, alas!
But there is one thing that the author has kept consistent, and that is Xuan Bi's innocent heart, or it can be explained as being ignorant of the world. I think this is very good, and it will not make people suddenly act out!
It took me two days to read it, so I'll briefly talk about it. This book is a combination of sweetness and sadism, which first develops and then suppresses. As of the latest chapter, I feel that the fate of the female characters that appear is quite tragic, which is heartbreaking. In the first part of the heaven chapter, the female protagonist and the male protagonist are in love very sweetly. The female protagonist is a love brain, and the male protagonist is also very protective. The love plot is sweet enough, but the fantasy flavor of the fairy tale is not enough. There is not much emphasis on the gods or the struggle plot in the sky. The overall rhythm is relatively light, and the slight climax is when the male protagonist is thrown into a well and reincarnated. In the latter part of the mortal world, the heroine's life is too miserable, too pitiful, and too simple. If my guess is correct, Qiyu is the reincarnation of the male protagonist. The heroine only wants to find her Goddess, which is fine, but if she has no life experience and is deceived in various ways, the readers are also very helpless. Strictly speaking, after reading the mortal chapter, the male characters currently appearing are all annoying, and they don't seem to be very friendly to women, including Lu, Su and Qi. I don't know whether the author deliberately set it up or lacked certain experience. As for Qiyu, his infatuation for Lin Wenxue was not seen at all in the early stage. Instead, he seemed to feel the same about Miss Mo and Lin Wenxue. After Lin died, Qiyu's change was not immediately apparent. The heroine was beaten too hard by Lu. Really, the plot was too sad. The author's setting of bestie love in this book is very touching. For example, the heroine and Hua Luo are in the sky, and Lin Wenxue and Luo Yi are on the ground. However, when the mortal heroine asked Hua Luo for help, the latter actually refused, leaving her speechless. And Luo Yi committed suicide (it is currently unclear whether it was suicide or homicide), which actually made people see her friendship for Lin. The author's writing style is relatively clear, and the logical transition of the plot can be strengthened. For example, if the mortal chapter is so sadistic, should there be a reversal, where the heroine puts herself to death and survives, and begins to rise up to take revenge on those who have hurt her. This way, the rhythm will be up, and readers will not be so worried when reading, otherwise they will feel uncomfortable every time the heroine is beaten.
The author's writing is really good! Xuanbi really jumped out of the page.
It is an ignorant and pure jade spirit. She may think that she is a bit clumsy. Even if she is bitten by poison, she just feels uncomfortable. Hua Luo asked her to take her to see the natal jade, and she actually took her to see it!
I was really angry and funny when I saw this.
Why is this silly kid Xuan Bi so pure and innocent, without any scheming at all? ?
But in fact, when I think about it carefully, I feel that this is her.
It is precisely because of her simplicity, purity, and lack of defense against others that she is more in line with her status as a jade spirit.
She should be crystal clear, and her true heart should be visible at a glance.
I am very much looking forward to the follow-up development. The author tells the story at a very good pace, giving people a eloquent feeling. I hope to finish reading this story.
The setting and concept are very good. Xuan Bi went from being ignorant to knowing the warmth and warmth of people's hearts. She always foolishly believes in everyone. This needs to be changed.
The author wrote the story of Xuan Bi being bullied in the human world in such detail that it made me want to stand up for her, but she was abused too many times. Please let Xuan Bi fight back once!
I don't understand Qi Yu a little now. He seems to be very contradictory. He wants to help her but also hurts her. Unlike Lu Wei, who is simply bad, I still hope that Qi Yu is a good person.
I can feel Xuan Bi's helplessness and pain. She did all this to find Fang Jue, but she can also find her own value. No matter what, she is a jade spirit. In addition to not having to eat, she can also bring some other skills.
Because my expectations were very high at the beginning, now that I'm reading it I really want to make the whole story structure a little more complete, and I'm already looking forward to the rest of the plot.
When Shuhuang saw this book, he originally read it with the intention of giving it a try, but found that it was very interesting, and the more he read, the more he became addicted to it. [Like] [Like] [Like] This is not a purely refreshing article, on the contrary, it is a bit sadistic. It's a breath of fresh air among tomatoes, haha. The heroine is miserable and pitiful in the early stage, and the hero and heroine are not allowed to fall in love... I hope the ending is good. The storyline is interesting and very interesting! The author's writing style is good, delicate and smooth, and the characters are created in a three-dimensional way, especially the heroine, which is very heart-wrenching. The sadistic yet sweet feeling is also well written. [Sending Hearts]
After reading it, there are few books that are so touching and full of contradictions.
The style of ancient sayings + fairy tales, but the heroine has a spoiled wife style, weak, ignorant of the world, naive, an accessory of the male protagonist, and cannot be separated from the male protagonist.
In the fairy world, the male protagonist Fang Jue protects her, so she can maintain her innocence, and her love for the male protagonist is actually understandable here.
But after falling into the human world, the heroine's character is incompatible with the human world. Why is she also a jade spirit? She needs some self-protection strength, right?
As a result, I was saved by Qi Yu countless times, and the heroine didn't appreciate it. She turned around and continued to trap her, being abused and hurt in various ways, and then Qi Yu continued to save her.
Many of the supporting characters are like tool men, and their viciousness is only on the surface, highlighting the pity and misery of the heroine. The Warring States period itself is chaotic, and human hearts can be made more complex, which will make it more realistic.
Writing is not an easy task, but the author has the courage to try and is already much better than the rest of us. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
Five stars go first, then talk about it. The concept of the novel is good, but I think the author has areas that can be improved. For example, when Xuan Bi came to the world, her actions were too weak. Even if she was looking for Fang Jue, she would not necessarily be looking for him only in this area.
I've followed the entire book, and it's a little more mundane than I expected.
What attracted me to read this book in the first place was that the heroine's true identity is jade.
Jade is the beauty of stone. Jade is a spiritual thing. Obtain it, nourish it, love it, and trust it. Over time, jade becomes moist because of people, and people become loyal because of jade.
The portrayal of the female protagonist only met half of my expectations for her. Her love for the male protagonist is as pure as jade, as clear as a flaw. When she was an immortal, she was well protected by the male protagonist.
But when it is in the human world, it seems a bit miserable. Jade is a treasure, and if no one cares for it, it will accumulate dust or even be damaged.
There must be many readers who feel as frustrated as I did reading it, right? Fortunately, the heroine has people around her who are willing to help her. I hope there will be a twist like the cool novel in the future. In short, I will always look forward to a big book.
The author's writing style is very good, the description is also very good, the setting is also very rich, there are many characters, and it can be seen that the book is thoughtfully conceived.
But although I personally can understand that the heroine is a piece of jade, born from nothingness, and cannot be said to be an educated person, I still feel a little stupid.
Especially after arriving in the human world, I feel that everything I do is dictated by others. I am either locked up or thrown out, followed, framed, or imprisoned.
It's a bit too abusive to the heroine, and she can't resist at all, or can't come up with any strategies to reverse the situation. She lacks subjective initiative, which makes people feel a little suffocated.
In addition, he is the human incarnation of the male protagonist. He is too passionate and wants to get married to another woman. When I was in heaven, I was quite good. He was a God who was single-minded and uncontaminated by the world.
What's a bit confusing is that after the heroine comes to the human world, the other two characters in the heaven seem to have no role?
Hua Luo probably has something to do with that cat, and he should still be spying on the heroine. But the hero's good friend, the one who threatened to kill the heroine, has not yet appeared.
I hope that the follow-up can change the image of the male protagonist in my heart and make the female protagonist more capable, otherwise it will be too frustrating!
God was moved by Yu Ling. This is because Xuan Biyu must have entered the mortal world for a reason. If the jade is contaminated with evil spirits and becomes his calamity, it is also the fruit of his sowing. The deaths of Lin Wenxue and Luo Yi were really too hasty, as if they ended as soon as they debuted. Lu Ziming is really bad! Who is Qiyu? Xuan Bi's infatuation was eventually crushed into mud.
The plot is beautiful and full of ups and downs. From the surprise of the first meeting to the excitement of getting along, they are pure and sincere. They are originally nothing, so there is no dust. The pure jade spirit encounters all kinds of things in the mortal world but still remains kind. The main theme of the article is clear, the heroine's sadness is repeated constantly, I feel sorry for her persistence but want to see her perfection. There are three thousand prosperous things in the world, but it is better to have a quiet moment of happiness. I really like this article.
When I first heard it, I didn't know what it meant, but when I heard it again, I became the person in the song. The uncarved jade spirit Xuanbi met Fang Jue, a casual and elegant person, pure and pure, who didn't understand love but was full of sexual desire, a gentle and jade-like immortal who kept his rules and rules, but could not avoid his heartbeat. From the moment they met, they... The road ahead is long and full of thorns. During the period before falling in love, every day was simple and happy. Love parted, resentment met, and we couldn't get what we wanted. The status was the gap, and our hearts felt like rivers. They finally understood but walked further and further away. The feeling of powerlessness that wanted to hold tight but could only push away was screaming. It really pokes me!
Comment after watching it, it looks great!
The plot is slow-moving and mediocre, but it makes people look forward to it. [Send heart][Send heart]
In addition, the author's writing style is also very good, the description is very delicate, the heroine is well portrayed, the description of the environment and the connection between the plot are quite smooth, and it reads smoothly.
Overall, this book is worth reading.
The author's writing style is very delicate, the characters are depicted in a three-dimensional way, and the plot is rich and coherent. It is worth reading. Come on, author! Five stars!
The two people who were secretly in love were not allowed to have real sympathy. I hope they can be together in the mortal world.
Yu Ling is really pure and beautiful. Is she voice-controlled? I like the voice of God.
The jade spirit that was so stunning at the beginning was finally stained with dust. I really want to see the jade spirit turn black. Maybe it is the inevitable disaster that she must go through when she comes here.
I haven't seen enough of Fang Jue and Xuan Bi getting along with each other in the previous chapters, so here comes Hua Ling. Humph, is Hua Ling jealous? Not for sabotage?
Lu Ziming's image of a playboy is vivid on the page. However, given his family background, it is not easy to get many women, so he has to play tricks on others.
Is Qiyu the Fang Jue Xuanbi is looking for? If so, he doesn't remember Xuan Bi either.
Did Luo Yi commit suicide? After all, she wanted to avenge Lin Wenxue, so dying like this was a foreshadowing?
I don't know where love started, but it goes deeper and deeper. Do all the unforgettable memories in the world need to go through many hardships to prove it? Alas!
Every time I see Xuan Bi being deceived, I feel so angry. Why does she not have a long memory? But when I think about it, she is just a Yuling, and my heart suddenly feels much more balanced.
Things like feelings are out of control once they sprout. It is up to you to decide whether it is love or evil. No one can be sure until the last moment. The writing is quite real.
Fate is a twister, and all kinds of things in this world really made me cry. [Cry][cry]
Why did Hua Ling frame Xuan Bi in various ways? Is this foreshadowing by the author?
Author, please promise me, please? Let's not write half of it and then stop writing it. We will keep the beginning and the end, and keep updating! ! !
The word "Jue" in Fang Jue's name itself means beautiful jade. True and Xuanbi, the name alone has a sense of destiny. Although there were some twists and turns at the beginning, overall it felt very sweet. Both of them feel lonely, but they are like finding whales on the same frequency as themselves in the deep sea. They are attached to each other and keep each other warm. But since the character Hua Luo appeared, it really is! Heart attack! ! She doesn't do anything about people's affairs at all. I'm convinced! I just hope that the ending will be good, and please don't abuse me. 555, I really can't stand it at all. I wish I could sprinkle a little more sugar, I just love seeing them posting together, please, please! !
After reading it, I would like to say a few words, this is a sweet and sad story about the reincarnation of a fairy. The first few chapters are so sweet. The love between gods and wives is so sweet, but when they come to the mortal world, they turn to the path of abuse. The heroine's experience is not ordinary. The author has greatly created the relationship between two best friends, especially Lin Wenxue and Luo Yi in the human world. This is too touching, really sad. I think the author's chapters in the human world are better than those in the divine world. How can I put it? The divine world feels like it's not enough, and there's still a little bit left behind. What is the basis for the deep relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist? In the divine world, the two of them don't seem to have experienced anything together? To strengthen feelings. Haha, in the human world chapter, because we descended to the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, there may be a small problem here. Can love poems be written in modern style, haha, or should they be written like the Book of Songs and Chuci! I'm not nitpicking, just a small suggestion. The author needs to control the rhythm of the storyline appropriately. For example, the plot after Lu Buwei's son intervened can be written slower. The author's writing style is online, very fresh, and he has certain skills in controlling words. He is definitely not a novice. I don't know if Lu Buwei's son will steal the heroine's bride in the future as the storyline goes. It would be even more cruel if that were the case. Big cheers for the author! Be nice to the heroine, it's not easy for women [cover face][cover face][cover face]
After reading the whole book, my biggest impression is that the author's writing style is very good, the large-scale description of the environment is very beautiful, the vocabulary is gorgeous, and the pictures in the book seem to jump before my eyes. The story of Immortal World is very bland. The first three golden chapters are well controlled and can attract readers, but not much. The love between the male and female protagonists develops very quickly. The story of Immortal World is all about love and love. After that, the male and female protagonists enter the mortal world and begin to go through trials and tribulations. Up to this point, it is a routine and there is no problem. Only after going through trials and tribulations can their relationship become stronger. This is understandable. I can see that the author really wants to write a good story. I actually have a lot of affection for the first heroine. I can't meet a pure person in reality, so I can only rely on books. But he was too cruel to the heroine after he came down to earth, right? Wandering around, spending the night in a broken temple, not eating enough and sleeping well, it made me feel bad to see it. I really hope that the heroine can live a better life and have a good ending with the hero.
It has a comic-like narrative style. The changes in each scene are very abrupt, but the writing style is very delicate. When each scene appears, the delicate description can make people feel the three-dimensional picture of the scene. It is simply great! However, the problem probably arises here! Readers who like delicate writing styles may not be able to put it down, and may even feel that good writing should have such writing style. However, readers who are interested in plot will probably feel indifferent when they see such writing! And I am a plot-loving reader! In fact, from the beginning to the present, I watched it without any emotional fluctuations, because the plot did not have the ups and downs I wanted, or there was no sense of conflict at all! In fact, a sense of conflict can arise at the beginning. For example, the appearance of a godly admirer, such as Hua Luo Diancha, etc., Can bring about a sense of conflict in the plot. I was expecting this from the beginning, but it turned out not to be the case! It seems that there is no good and evil here, no intrigues, and no conflicts of interest. Everyone's conflicts are superficial, alas! But there is one thing that the author has kept consistent, and that is Xuan Bi's innocent heart, or it can be explained as being ignorant of the world. I think this is very good, and it will not make people suddenly act out!
It took me two days to read it, so I'll briefly talk about it. This book is a combination of sweetness and sadism, which first develops and then suppresses. As of the latest chapter, I feel that the fate of the female characters that appear is quite tragic, which is heartbreaking. In the first part of the heaven chapter, the female protagonist and the male protagonist are in love very sweetly. The female protagonist is a love brain, and the male protagonist is also very protective. The love plot is sweet enough, but the fantasy flavor of the fairy tale is not enough. There is not much emphasis on the gods or the struggle plot in the sky. The overall rhythm is relatively light, and the slight climax is when the male protagonist is thrown into a well and reincarnated. In the latter part of the mortal world, the heroine's life is too miserable, too pitiful, and too simple. If my guess is correct, Qiyu is the reincarnation of the male protagonist. The heroine only wants to find her Goddess, which is fine, but if she has no life experience and is deceived in various ways, the readers are also very helpless. Strictly speaking, after reading the mortal chapter, the male characters currently appearing are all annoying, and they don't seem to be very friendly to women, including Lu, Su and Qi. I don't know whether the author deliberately set it up or lacked certain experience. As for Qiyu, his infatuation for Lin Wenxue was not seen at all in the early stage. Instead, he seemed to feel the same about Miss Mo and Lin Wenxue. After Lin died, Qiyu's change was not immediately apparent. The heroine was beaten too hard by Lu. Really, the plot was too sad. The author's setting of bestie love in this book is very touching. For example, the heroine and Hua Luo are in the sky, and Lin Wenxue and Luo Yi are on the ground. However, when the mortal heroine asked Hua Luo for help, the latter actually refused, leaving her speechless. And Luo Yi committed suicide (it is currently unclear whether it was suicide or homicide), which actually made people see her friendship for Lin. The author's writing style is relatively clear, and the logical transition of the plot can be strengthened. For example, if the mortal chapter is so sadistic, should there be a reversal, where the heroine puts herself to death and survives, and begins to rise up to take revenge on those who have hurt her. This way, the rhythm will be up, and readers will not be so worried when reading, otherwise they will feel uncomfortable every time the heroine is beaten.
The author's writing is really good! Xuanbi really jumped out of the page. It is an ignorant and pure jade spirit. She may think that she is a bit clumsy. Even if she is bitten by poison, she just feels uncomfortable. Hua Luo asked her to take her to see the natal jade, and she actually took her to see it! I was really angry and funny when I saw this. Why is this silly kid Xuan Bi so pure and innocent, without any scheming at all? ? But in fact, when I think about it carefully, I feel that this is her. It is precisely because of her simplicity, purity, and lack of defense against others that she is more in line with her status as a jade spirit. She should be crystal clear, and her true heart should be visible at a glance. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up development. The author tells the story at a very good pace, giving people a eloquent feeling. I hope to finish reading this story.
The setting and concept are very good. Xuan Bi went from being ignorant to knowing the warmth and warmth of people's hearts. She always foolishly believes in everyone. This needs to be changed. The author wrote the story of Xuan Bi being bullied in the human world in such detail that it made me want to stand up for her, but she was abused too many times. Please let Xuan Bi fight back once! I don't understand Qi Yu a little now. He seems to be very contradictory. He wants to help her but also hurts her. Unlike Lu Wei, who is simply bad, I still hope that Qi Yu is a good person. I can feel Xuan Bi's helplessness and pain. She did all this to find Fang Jue, but she can also find her own value. No matter what, she is a jade spirit. In addition to not having to eat, she can also bring some other skills. Because my expectations were very high at the beginning, now that I'm reading it I really want to make the whole story structure a little more complete, and I'm already looking forward to the rest of the plot.
When Shuhuang saw this book, he originally read it with the intention of giving it a try, but found that it was very interesting, and the more he read, the more he became addicted to it. [Like] [Like] [Like] This is not a purely refreshing article, on the contrary, it is a bit sadistic. It's a breath of fresh air among tomatoes, haha. The heroine is miserable and pitiful in the early stage, and the hero and heroine are not allowed to fall in love... I hope the ending is good. The storyline is interesting and very interesting! The author's writing style is good, delicate and smooth, and the characters are created in a three-dimensional way, especially the heroine, which is very heart-wrenching. The sadistic yet sweet feeling is also well written. [Sending Hearts]
After reading it, there are few books that are so touching and full of contradictions. The style of ancient sayings + fairy tales, but the heroine has a spoiled wife style, weak, ignorant of the world, naive, an accessory of the male protagonist, and cannot be separated from the male protagonist. In the fairy world, the male protagonist Fang Jue protects her, so she can maintain her innocence, and her love for the male protagonist is actually understandable here. But after falling into the human world, the heroine's character is incompatible with the human world. Why is she also a jade spirit? She needs some self-protection strength, right? As a result, I was saved by Qi Yu countless times, and the heroine didn't appreciate it. She turned around and continued to trap her, being abused and hurt in various ways, and then Qi Yu continued to save her. Many of the supporting characters are like tool men, and their viciousness is only on the surface, highlighting the pity and misery of the heroine. The Warring States period itself is chaotic, and human hearts can be made more complex, which will make it more realistic. Writing is not an easy task, but the author has the courage to try and is already much better than the rest of us. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
Five stars go first, then talk about it. The concept of the novel is good, but I think the author has areas that can be improved. For example, when Xuan Bi came to the world, her actions were too weak. Even if she was looking for Fang Jue, she would not necessarily be looking for him only in this area.
I've followed the entire book, and it's a little more mundane than I expected. What attracted me to read this book in the first place was that the heroine's true identity is jade. Jade is the beauty of stone. Jade is a spiritual thing. Obtain it, nourish it, love it, and trust it. Over time, jade becomes moist because of people, and people become loyal because of jade. The portrayal of the female protagonist only met half of my expectations for her. Her love for the male protagonist is as pure as jade, as clear as a flaw. When she was an immortal, she was well protected by the male protagonist. But when it is in the human world, it seems a bit miserable. Jade is a treasure, and if no one cares for it, it will accumulate dust or even be damaged. There must be many readers who feel as frustrated as I did reading it, right? Fortunately, the heroine has people around her who are willing to help her. I hope there will be a twist like the cool novel in the future. In short, I will always look forward to a big book.
The author's writing style is very good, the description is also very good, the setting is also very rich, there are many characters, and it can be seen that the book is thoughtfully conceived. But although I personally can understand that the heroine is a piece of jade, born from nothingness, and cannot be said to be an educated person, I still feel a little stupid. Especially after arriving in the human world, I feel that everything I do is dictated by others. I am either locked up or thrown out, followed, framed, or imprisoned. It's a bit too abusive to the heroine, and she can't resist at all, or can't come up with any strategies to reverse the situation. She lacks subjective initiative, which makes people feel a little suffocated. In addition, he is the human incarnation of the male protagonist. He is too passionate and wants to get married to another woman. When I was in heaven, I was quite good. He was a God who was single-minded and uncontaminated by the world. What's a bit confusing is that after the heroine comes to the human world, the other two characters in the heaven seem to have no role? Hua Luo probably has something to do with that cat, and he should still be spying on the heroine. But the hero's good friend, the one who threatened to kill the heroine, has not yet appeared. I hope that the follow-up can change the image of the male protagonist in my heart and make the female protagonist more capable, otherwise it will be too frustrating!
God was moved by Yu Ling. This is because Xuan Biyu must have entered the mortal world for a reason. If the jade is contaminated with evil spirits and becomes his calamity, it is also the fruit of his sowing. The deaths of Lin Wenxue and Luo Yi were really too hasty, as if they ended as soon as they debuted. Lu Ziming is really bad! Who is Qiyu? Xuan Bi's infatuation was eventually crushed into mud.
The plot is beautiful and full of ups and downs. From the surprise of the first meeting to the excitement of getting along, they are pure and sincere. They are originally nothing, so there is no dust. The pure jade spirit encounters all kinds of things in the mortal world but still remains kind. The main theme of the article is clear, the heroine's sadness is repeated constantly, I feel sorry for her persistence but want to see her perfection. There are three thousand prosperous things in the world, but it is better to have a quiet moment of happiness. I really like this article.
When I first heard it, I didn't know what it meant, but when I heard it again, I became the person in the song. The uncarved jade spirit Xuanbi met Fang Jue, a casual and elegant person, pure and pure, who didn't understand love but was full of sexual desire, a gentle and jade-like immortal who kept his rules and rules, but could not avoid his heartbeat. From the moment they met, they... The road ahead is long and full of thorns. During the period before falling in love, every day was simple and happy. Love parted, resentment met, and we couldn't get what we wanted. The status was the gap, and our hearts felt like rivers. They finally understood but walked further and further away. The feeling of powerlessness that wanted to hold tight but could only push away was screaming. It really pokes me!
Comment after watching it, it looks great! The plot is slow-moving and mediocre, but it makes people look forward to it. [Send heart][Send heart] In addition, the author's writing style is also very good, the description is very delicate, the heroine is well portrayed, the description of the environment and the connection between the plot are quite smooth, and it reads smoothly. Overall, this book is worth reading.
The author's writing style is very delicate, the characters are depicted in a three-dimensional way, and the plot is rich and coherent. It is worth reading. Come on, author! Five stars!
The two people who were secretly in love were not allowed to have real sympathy. I hope they can be together in the mortal world.
Yu Ling is really pure and beautiful. Is she voice-controlled? I like the voice of God.
The jade spirit that was so stunning at the beginning was finally stained with dust. I really want to see the jade spirit turn black. Maybe it is the inevitable disaster that she must go through when she comes here.
I haven't seen enough of Fang Jue and Xuan Bi getting along with each other in the previous chapters, so here comes Hua Ling. Humph, is Hua Ling jealous? Not for sabotage?
Lu Ziming's image of a playboy is vivid on the page. However, given his family background, it is not easy to get many women, so he has to play tricks on others.
Is Qiyu the Fang Jue Xuanbi is looking for? If so, he doesn't remember Xuan Bi either.
Did Luo Yi commit suicide? After all, she wanted to avenge Lin Wenxue, so dying like this was a foreshadowing?
I don't know where love started, but it goes deeper and deeper. Do all the unforgettable memories in the world need to go through many hardships to prove it? Alas!
Every time I see Xuan Bi being deceived, I feel so angry. Why does she not have a long memory? But when I think about it, she is just a Yuling, and my heart suddenly feels much more balanced.
Things like feelings are out of control once they sprout. It is up to you to decide whether it is love or evil. No one can be sure until the last moment. The writing is quite real.
Fate is a twister, and all kinds of things in this world really made me cry. [Cry][cry]
Why did Hua Ling frame Xuan Bi in various ways? Is this foreshadowing by the author?
Author, please promise me, please? Let's not write half of it and then stop writing it. We will keep the beginning and the end, and keep updating! ! !