Vast as the Azure Heavens

The word "Jue" in Fang Jue's name itself means beautiful jade. True and Xuanbi, the name alone has a sense of destiny. Although there were some twists and turns at the beginning, overall it felt very sweet. Both of them feel lonely, but they are like finding whales on the same frequency as themselves in the deep sea. They are attached to each other and keep each other warm. But since the character Hua Luo appeared, it really is! Heart attack!! She doesn't do anything about people's affairs at all. I'm convinced! I just hope that the ending will be good, and please don't abuse me. 555, I really can't stand it at all. I wish I could sprinkle a little more sugar, I just love seeing them posting together, please, please!!

After reading the whole book, my biggest impression is that the author's writing style is very good, the large-scale description of the environment is very beautiful, the vocabulary is gorgeous, and the pictures in the book seem to jump before my eyes. The story of Immortal World is very bland. The first three golden chapters are well controlled and can attract readers, but not much. The love between the male and female protagonists develops very quickly. The story of Immortal World is all about love and love. After that, the male and female protagonists enter the mortal world and begin to go through trials and tribulations. Up to this point, it is a routine and there is no problem. Only after going through trials and tribulations can their relationship become stronger. This is understandable. I can see that the author really wants to write a good story. I actually have a lot of affection for the first heroine. I can't meet a pure person in reality, so I can only rely on books. But he was too cruel to the heroine after he came down to earth, right? Wandering around, spending the night in a broken temple, not eating enough and sleeping well, it made me feel bad to see it. I really hope that the heroine can live a better life and have a good ending with the hero.

It has a comic-like narrative style. The changes in each scene are very abrupt, but the writing style is very delicate. When each scene appears, the delicate description can make people feel the three-dimensional picture of the scene. It is simply great! However, the problem probably arises here! Readers who like delicate writing styles may not be able to put it down, and may even feel that good writing should have such writing style. However, readers who are interested in plot will probably feel indifferent when they see such writing! And I am a plot-loving reader! In fact, from the beginning to the present, I watched it without any emotional fluctuations, because the plot did not have the ups and downs I wanted, or there was no sense of conflict at all! In fact, a sense of conflict can arise at the beginning. For example, the appearance of a godly admirer, such as Hua Luo Diancha, etc., Can bring about a sense of conflict in the plot. I was expecting this from the beginning, but it turned out not to be the case! It seems that there is no good and evil here, no intrigues, and no conflicts of interest. Everyone's conflicts are superficial, alas! But there is one thing that the author has kept consistent, and that is Xuan Bi's innocent heart, or it can be explained as being ignorant of the world. I think this is very good, and it will not make people suddenly act out!

It took me two days to read it, so I'll briefly talk about it. This book is a combination of sweetness and sadism, which first develops and then suppresses. As of the latest chapter, I feel that the fate of the female characters that appear is quite tragic, which is heartbreaking. In the first part of the heaven chapter, the female protagonist and the male protagonist are in love very sweetly. The female protagonist is a love brain, and the male protagonist is also very protective. The love plot is sweet enough, but the fantasy flavor of the fairy tale is not enough. There is not much emphasis on the gods or the struggle plot in the sky. The overall rhythm is relatively light, and the slight climax is when the male protagonist is thrown into a well and reincarnated. In the latter part of the mortal world, the heroine's life is too miserable, too pitiful, and too simple. If my guess is correct, Qiyu is the reincarnation of the male protagonist. The heroine only wants to find her Goddess, which is fine, but if she has no life experience and is deceived in various ways, the readers are also very helpless. Strictly speaking, after reading the mortal chapter, the male characters currently appearing are all annoying, and they don't seem to be very friendly to women, including Lu, Su and Qi. I don't know whether the author deliberately set it up or lacked certain experience. As for Qiyu, his infatuation for Lin Wenxue was not seen at all in the early stage. Instead, he seemed to feel the same about Miss Mo and Lin Wenxue. After Lin died, Qiyu's change was not immediately apparent. The heroine was beaten too hard by Lu. Really, the plot was too sad. The author's setting of bestie love in this book is very touching. For example, the heroine and Hua Luo are in the sky, and Lin Wenxue and Luo Yi are on the ground. However, when the mortal heroine asked Hua Luo for help, the latter actually refused, leaving her speechless. And Luo Yi committed suicide (it is currently unclear whether it was suicide or homicide), which actually made people see her friendship for Lin. The author's writing style is relatively clear, and the logical transition of the plot can be strengthened. For example, if the mortal chapter is so sadistic, should there be a reversal, where the heroine puts herself to death and survives, and begins to rise up to take revenge on those who have hurt her. This way, the rhythm will be up, and readers will not be so worried when reading, otherwise they will feel uncomfortable every time the heroine is beaten.

After reading it, I would like to say a few words, this is a sweet and sad story about the reincarnation of a fairy. The first few chapters are so sweet. The love between gods and wives is so sweet, but when they come to the mortal world, they turn to the path of abuse. The heroine's experience is not ordinary. The author has greatly created the relationship between two best friends, especially Lin Wenxue and Luo Yi in the human world. This is too touching, really sad. I think the author's chapters in the human world are better than those in the divine world. How can I put it? The divine world feels like it's not enough, and there's still a little bit left behind. What is the basis for the deep relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist? In the divine world, the two of them don't seem to have experienced anything together? To strengthen feelings. Haha, in the human world chapter, because we descended to the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, there may be a small problem here. Can love poems be written in modern style, haha, or should they be written like the Book of Songs and Chuci! I'm not nitpicking, just a small suggestion. The author needs to control the rhythm of the storyline appropriately. For example, the plot after Lu Buwei's son intervened can be written slower. The author's writing style is online, very fresh, and he has certain skills in controlling words. He is definitely not a novice. I don't know if Lu Buwei's son will steal the heroine's bride in the future as the storyline goes. It would be even more cruel if that were the case. Big cheers for the author! Be nice to the heroine, it's not easy for women 🤦🤦🤦

The author's writing is really good! Xuanbi really jumped out of the page. It is an ignorant and pure jade spirit. She may think that she is a bit clumsy. Even if she is bitten by poison, she just feels uncomfortable. Hua Luo asked her to take her to see the natal jade, and she actually took her to see it! I was really angry and funny when I saw this. Why is this silly kid Xuan Bi so pure and innocent, without any scheming at all?? But in fact, when I think about it carefully, I feel that this is her. It is precisely because of her simplicity, purity, and lack of defense against others that she is more in line with her status as a jade spirit. She should be crystal clear, and her true heart should be visible at a glance. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up development. The author tells the story at a very good pace, giving people a eloquent feeling. I hope to finish reading this story.

When Shuhuang saw this book, he originally read it with the intention of giving it a try, but found that it was very interesting, and the more he read, the more he became addicted to it. 👍 👍 👍 This is not a purely refreshing article, on the contrary, it is a bit sadistic. It's a breath of fresh air among tomatoes, haha. The heroine is miserable and pitiful in the early stage, and the hero and heroine are not allowed to fall in love... I hope the ending is good. The storyline is interesting and very interesting! The author's writing style is good, delicate and smooth, and the characters are created in a three-dimensional way, especially the heroine, which is very heart-wrenching. The sadistic yet sweet feeling is also well written. 💕

The setting and concept are very good. Xuan Bi went from being ignorant to knowing the warmth and warmth of people's hearts. She always foolishly believes in everyone. This needs to be changed. The author wrote the story of Xuan Bi being bullied in the human world in such detail that it made me want to stand up for her, but she was abused too many times. Please let Xuan Bi fight back once! I don't understand Qi Yu a little now. He seems to be very contradictory. He wants to help her but also hurts her. Unlike Lu Wei, who is simply bad, I still hope that Qi Yu is a good person. I can feel Xuan Bi's helplessness and pain. She did all this to find Fang Jue, but she can also find her own value. No matter what, she is a jade spirit. In addition to not having to eat, she can also bring some other skills. Because my expectations were very high at the beginning, now that I'm reading it I really want to make the whole story structure a little more complete, and I'm already looking forward to the rest of the plot.

After reading it, there are few books that are so touching and full of contradictions. The style of ancient sayings + fairy tales, but the heroine has a spoiled wife style, weak, ignorant of the world, naive, an accessory of the male protagonist, and cannot be separated from the male protagonist. In the fairy world, the male protagonist Fang Jue protects her, so she can maintain her innocence, and her love for the male protagonist is actually understandable here. But after falling into the human world, the heroine's character is incompatible with the human world. Why is she also a jade spirit? She needs some self-protection strength, right? As a result, I was saved by Qi Yu countless times, and the heroine didn't appreciate it. She turned around and continued to trap her, being abused and hurt in various ways, and then Qi Yu continued to save her. Many of the supporting characters are like tool men, and their viciousness is only on the surface, highlighting the pity and misery of the heroine. The Warring States period itself is chaotic, and human hearts can be made more complex, which will make it more realistic. Writing is not an easy task, but the author has the courage to try and is already much better than the rest of us. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I've followed the entire book, and it's a little more mundane than I expected. What attracted me to read this book in the first place was that the heroine's true identity is jade. Jade is the beauty of stone. Jade is a spiritual thing. Obtain it, nourish it, love it, and trust it. Over time, jade becomes moist because of people, and people become loyal because of jade. The portrayal of the female protagonist only met half of my expectations for her. Her love for the male protagonist is as pure as jade, as clear as a flaw. When she was an immortal, she was well protected by the male protagonist. But when it is in the human world, it seems a bit miserable. Jade is a treasure, and if no one cares for it, it will accumulate dust or even be damaged. There must be many readers who feel as frustrated as I did reading it, right? Fortunately, the heroine has people around her who are willing to help her. I hope there will be a twist like the cool novel in the future. In short, I will always look forward to a big book.