Traveling Through the Dark Zone, I Have Hundreds of Millions of Side Jobs, but That's Not Too Much.

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you [laughing evilly]

The book is really good, but there are a few points I want to mention. This is the book. For me, the character traits are not detailed enough. Although it looks good at first glance, it is very successful. But they all seem to look the same, pretty much the same. There is also the protagonist comparing the enemy to a big black mouse on the battlefield. Don't forget that this is a battlefield. Officials don't joke during battles. The tense and bloody atmosphere of this battlefield is not well created, but it looks a bit joyful. There are also some minor technical and nomenclature issues during combat. The description of some areas during combat is not very good, that is to say, it is somewhat lacking and not tough enough, but it is innocuous. Otherwise, the main Dark Zone fanfic will now become a hard-core military novel about the Dark Zone. The last thing is the update speed. It's very slow. [Smile] Author, if you don't look at what you are doing, other authors have updated 4 chapters for me. When I looked at it, hehe, including the ones I had previously, there were 9 chapters!

If the book is good, then the data is good (it's good for him and me [smile][smile][smile])

Bombs are being dropped, rush into the room and grab the author. Code it for me!

Yes, the only drawback is that there are too few words, and the group is very happy [laughs evilly]

As for the book, I will keep updating it if someone reads it. Praise for light and peace. Welcome to Carmona, also known as the dark zone world, I hope you can get what you want here.

Today is July 19th. Including today, you have not updated for three days.

It feels okay. I really like playing in the dark zone. The author has a good attitude. If you are bored, you can give it a try. I just like it. I have no position and no ratings (dog head to save my life)

It looks good [smile] It would be even better if Aja becomes a woman [snicker] [smile] [smile] [smile] (Does the author understand [smile])

Yes, it is much better than the dark zone novels I have read before. The characters are very vivid, and there are various self-made items. The system helps at critical moments.

Excellent writing and tight logic

👌🏻👍

It's so beautiful, I can't describe it

I think it's pretty well written, but the number of words is a bit short, and the protagonist doesn't eat or drink water. Or am I missing something [exploring] [what] [thinking]. If I really missed it, I can change it to five stars [face covering] [laughing] Sorry, I really missed it [covering face] [making faces]

Another dark zone masterpiece after "Dark Zone Breakout: I Became the Boss of a Boy Group"

Like children and love to eat Delicious, very delicious, children love it very much

Come on [Like] [Like] [Like] But the first chapter of the group account was not found [face covering]

Very exciting, very beautiful

Come on, I'm optimistic about you

Highly recommend giving it a try, excellent dark zone text

I love the author so much. The abbreviation is Hoshino so much.

Very good, but the updates are too slow. I hope there will be two pages a day [thinking][thinking][thinking][shy][shy]

Most of them are rectified based on the dark area, and they can also be written.

The author is too big and too short [laughter] This is a pretty good book, so when will I appear?

Very good character style, strong combat plot and realistic plot

Great, I passed my role

It's pretty good. I personally play in the dark zone. The author's attitude is okay.

It's okay. Although the score is relatively low, it still looks pretty good.

The only dark zone book currently that suits my taste

The author is really good. He also explains readers' questions and problems, and the writing is also very good. [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]