Bilan: This Command Is as Powerful as 100 Million Points

First of all, I would like to apologize to the readers. The author accidentally transferred from the ivory tower to a social worker, and this class B lasted until about 11 o'clock in the evening. Basically, he dragged his tired body through the middle of the night to update the content for the next day. There was really no way. I have the energy to post two updates a day, and I might risk my life to write two more, but I can only post one at a time, and I have to save manuscripts for the perfect attendance (4,000 words/day) after reaching 100,000 words. After all, I still want to get the perfect attendance reward, otherwise I won't write it. If the publishing time is either in the morning or in the middle of the night, it can be used for morning reading or falling asleep. Finally, no matter what the data of this book is, your comments, reminders, and gifts are the biggest motivation for me to persist. Thank you for your support! (Ps, especially comments, whether it is a paragraph review or a book review, interaction is the best way to make the author feel no longer alone)

It's not bad. For me, an old blue player, at first I thought I was logging into the large account directly. The Rubik's Cube and supplies were to summon the ship girl, but it turned out that I was still building it. It just seemed that I was building a sunk ship girl, but I was building a sunk ship girl. I didn't know the commander. This was a trap. He should be almost the protagonist. The built ship girl was sunk and her level was cleared, but she has a commander in her memory. She doesn't know the protagonist, which is a bit of a trap. Instead, she becomes a new commander. This is a trap, and there is a ring. In Azur Lane, this is equivalent to a bond. Even if the commander is wherever the commander is, the ship girl who gave the ring should feel it, right? The author does not have it here. There is also the picture of where it was built before. Langley said at the beginning that the protagonist was picked up. It is equivalent to comparing it with Kaga Akagi at the beginning. It should be that the timeline is different. This is another world copied by the Siren, and the protagonist was thrown into another world by the Siren. During the decisive battle, Kuo was sucked into this world by the gap in space and was picked up by Langley. However, when building Haima, it was another pitfall, because Haima has memory but does not recognize the protagonist. This is a pit. Also, when the protagonist has not traveled through time, Langley said that the memory will be cleared. Is this equivalent to a memory explosion, and then formatting it again? Until the main system takes over, which is the protagonist. Anyway, it was a bit confusing to watch. The protagonist is not that commander, but he is a bit like that commander. The protagonist has traveled through time and occupied a physical body, but his soul has changed, but the ship girl doesn't recognize him anymore. Pitfalls, remember to fill them in. Also updates are too slow.

Not bad, but the beginning section made me a little confused. At first I thought it was a reflux or a tuba [smile] [OK] My mother gave birth to it. I saw the plot in the following chapters was choppy and I was confused.

Buying and selling KANSEN, do you think of Azur Lane as a ship C or something like that? There is a terrible setting like META in Azur Lane. Of course, if you say you don't recognize the official setting, just pretend I didn't say it.

I love playing Granblue (a newbie), and I also like to watch Granblue themes. I have read many similar ones. The author's performance is already very good. He did not use his feet to outline the Disney castle. The literary and artistic expressions are also good. The seriousness of the story line makes it worth savoring for a newbie like me. The character creation is okay [full], but I couldn't stand it in the middle (currently viewed 125). That chapter really burned my brain, it was too confusing. , And the review said that I was able to repair it last year! [Angry] (I have never written an online novel, and I don't know the author's physiological activities). I won't say anything messy, just make up for it with my brain. The main reason is that even after reading three chapters, I feel "short of weight", which makes my brain cells that I think are not good enough are worse [get it]. At present, I think this is the biggest problem, I hope it can be corrected, thank you (not forcing) [face covering]

Come on, author (I'm also reading doge for today's exam)

The writing is quite good, but the description of the protagonist in the early stage is not satisfactory enough, and it seems that the protagonist is a bit reckless. However, this is not a bad point, it is just a problem with the writing style. There is a lot of progress in the future, and I am still looking forward to the follow-up. Water, water, water, water, the sea is full of water.

No, why are big wards everywhere? ! !

The rating dropped from 7.1 To 7.0. I think I need to make some changes [cool] [laughing] Ah, the ratings are back, but when I read the book reviews, there were so many curse words [laughing and crying] [face covering]

I already liked the author, so you can read this book with confidence

It's well written. Just keep writing. Don't worry about others. But can you make the characters more fleshed out? Some characters' personalities are slightly different from those in the game. Just don't stop updating. (Anyway, eating knives and eating is much sweeter when I play Mi Huhuo. I want to relax here [eat melon])

The author feels that women's clothing, otherwise I will not stand idly by when 218 people in the group attack you [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

I would like to call this book the strongest [Adoration]

Come on, come on, come on

So far it's not bad, good luck to the author!

Come on, author, this is one of the more novel Ship B stories I've ever read, and I'm really looking forward to the plot that follows.

The author is right, the front is indeed a bit poisonous and I can't handle the back, but the author is very sincere and does not deceive people.

Come on, author, it's so beautiful

Come on author, don't want eunuchs

The main character next door is sad, what do you say? Joy? But it's pretty good-looking, so please give it a thumbs up, the author

Is there a human heroine?

It's considered high-quality food and grass.

All I can say is that I was right about this novel, and I will give it a 5-star review this time. I will give it next time, but it will only be in installments [laughing]

Author, hurry up and dress up as a woman. Don't force us to mobilize 219 people in the group to attack you. There are also 277 people from the group next door.

Very nice. . . . The author just doesn't want to be a eunuch After chapter 130, don't read it, it's all broken.

Good book, good luck to the author

Okay, come on, okay

A diploma is not enough, but I think this book is very interesting

Pretty good. That's right, I won't comment.

Come on, author! I don't know what will happen if the ship girl really recognizes him as their commander and not a similar leaf. I'm really looking forward to it.