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I love the way the five-person group gets along, everyone is such lovely people! ! However, Zhuo Zhuo only has a few years to live now, and there is no description about the Qingxiao Sect and the people who steal lives. I look forward to the follow-up (quietly, don't be sadistic [shy][shy][shy]). Come on, let more people like this book [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's been a long time since I've read a novel with such an elegant and comfortable writing style, but the front part is so comfortable and warm that I can't help but wonder if the author is planning a big plot [crying]

It's nice. How can I say this? The introduction and content of this book are very different. Don't read the introduction [face covering] I seem to see the shadow of Lin Du's book in the heroine of this book [laughs] They are all the same precocious and very leadership. I like it very much😍

The concise title and introduction of the book attracted me very much. The writing style is acceptable. The plot is not procrastinating. There are almost no flaws and poisonous points. It also makes people want to read. I hope there is no cp and the author will do well [sending heartfelt wishes]

They are good-looking. There is no need to be jealous if you like this kind of tone. They are young people who are full of relaxation and fun. They can be arrogant towards people they don't like, they can have chuunibyou from time to time without appearing weird, they can take care of their partners carefully but a little awkwardly, and they can work hard because of the righteousness in their hearts. The plot is too tight, and many places are not coherent. One second is a big battle, and the next second you are directly on the battlefield. There is no transition period, and there are some reverse sequences and interludes that will make people think that they have missed something. However, the character setting is really good and I like it, and the descriptions are okay.

It's good-looking and good-looking. There are almost no top-notch ones at present. The only two of them learned their lesson quickly. It's more of a group portrait, where everyone fights for the world together. Wow~woo~ It's a passionate group portrait that I chao like. I like (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ. It's just too little, please update it quickly, hurry up~(*￣3￣)╭♡❀The little flowers are hitting you, please update it (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)

Hehe, I have been reading books for five years and I don't write reviews easily. Although this book is being serialized, I really like this book! ! [Love] First of all, this Cultivation of Immortality is quite different from other Cultivation of Immortality. The understanding of Tao, principles, people and things are all very realistic. The part where casualties started to appear later made me feel very depressed and uncomfortable. However, there will always be people who sacrifice in war, and the feeling of helplessness makes people breathless. In addition, each character's personality and her/his ideas are very distinct. He/she/they are their own protagonists. At present, Wei Zhuo is an unpredictable person for me. She said that she is a dark person at heart, but I think no one can define herself, not even herself. She is very good! Looking forward to the next development! ! Come on! ! ! [Ask for more updates][Send heartfelt messages]

How should I put it, I was attracted by the title of the novel, and when I recall it now, there is nothing shocking or impressive about the plot. But it gave me a different kind of reality. The protagonist is not a good old person in the true sense. It is clear in the later chapters about ruthlessness and breakthrough. She also knows that she only has 10 years left but still works hard just to survive. It really touched me. What can I say, I look forward to the follow-up, and don't let it end unfinished! _(:3 ⌒ﾞ)_ First time writing a review.

It's a very interesting story. Wei Zhuo makes me feel like she knows the world without being worldly, and understands human nature without tainting people's hearts. Whether it is her actions or words, they are very subtle, hard-hearted and soft-hearted. She will never agree to something she can't do or promise, but she is not stingy about doing things or people who can help people get out of trouble. All in all, he is a very charming character. Even if he has no background, he can become the leader of a small group on his own. The author is also great. Thank you for writing such a great story for us. It is a pity that it is still serialized. If it is finished, I will enjoy reading it more happily. It is very hard to raise. PS: This book is a rare and excellent article about cultivating immortals in Tomato. If any readers who have not read this article see my book review, you can try it.

The whole book has a strong sense of logic, many plots are not found in other immortality books, and the subject matter is also very novel. The heroine is affectionate and righteous. Although I don't know what kind of Taoism he cultivates, the heroine and her friends are slowly growing up. Although they are strong, they are not outrageous. This book is very suitable for people who are bookish.

In my mind, he is really the top one in cultivating immortality. The author's writing style always makes me feel that it reveals a kind of sadness, and at the end, it means "be" [I almost cry]. Moreover, each character has written characteristics and distinct personality. The writing has the feeling of a group portrait, which makes me feel that it is different from other novels about cultivating immortality. It's different. A whole big world view, and a lot of foreshadowing that made me rack my brains (forgive me for my lack of IQ, I can't wrap my brain around many places, all thanks to the comment section [love]), really attracted me, and always made me want to know what the final ending is and what happens next. This Cultivation of Immortality is not the kind of novel where people can predict the next step, nor does it make people feel that Wei Zhuo has a particularly big golden finger as a time traveler. Author, please continue writing. I want to know how they will go through the bumpy road ahead, and how to solve the mystery of Wei Zhuo's hatred and longevity... Author, you said you would finish it, fill in the foreshadowing [crying], you can't break your promise [almost crying] [please update]

Looks good! For me, this book is a breath of fresh air among the female cultivating immortal novels. So few people have read it, so I really want to be seen by many people, and then experience with me the feeling of following serialized novels, hehe. [Laughing] Please ask the author for more updates! Can't get enough of it. [Sending Hearts]

It's good-looking, and generally the logic is very smooth. There are no flaws. It's just that there are too many foreshadowings and not enough layers. The whole story is a straight line, rather than vertical and horizontal. Sister Wei's performance in being shocked in a strange world is not enough. Come on, author! ! It's also very interesting to lay it down, but is there a male protagonist? Has he appeared?

Wow, I have caught up. My wife's writing style is very attractive to me. Generally speaking, there are a lot of foreshadowings, and it is not the kind that can be guessed at once. It is very interesting; the whole book is not the home of the protagonist, but more about the experiences and situations of a group of people or even more people. The image of Sister Wei writes about the complexity and contradiction of people. It is not about good and bad people to define a person. People, but how to make different choices, struggling and struggling to cope with the countdown of life. Although the story describes the growth of this group of protagonists by joking and laughing, I felt a sad feeling while reading it. I was afraid that I was in troubled times. The people I met in my memory really became memories, and I was afraid that I would never see each other again [crying]

This book has been pretty good recently, but the pace is a bit too fast for people to keep up with. Also, if you want to write some passionate scenes, you can do some emotional foreshadowing first, otherwise it might be a bit awkward. Some scenes would be better if they were more detailed. But overall this book is very good. I hope the author will work hard to update it (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

It looks good, please come on and update more! I really like Xiao Zhuo's character and handling style! Come on come on! At the same time, we are looking forward to the appearance of the male protagonist! [Love][love]

At present, the atmosphere of the whole book is very light. There are not many such immortal cultivators. Each character has a distinctive personality and is very attractive to me. Their personalities are very nice. It is not a loss to invest in it. ٩(●´৺`●)૭٩(●´৺`●)و

God, this book is really well written. I love reading fairy tales, but Wei Zhuo's character is too distinct. I love her selfishness before her rebirth. This is what everyone has. She has a short life and there is no need to be so selfless. But the most rare and valuable thing is her selfishness. Her changes can be seen clearly and she will change her own thoughts because of those experiences. She is not short of youth and frivolity, and she can also save the world. Five people walked into Wei Zhuo's heart under the subtle influence of time and life and death. Maybe it will change in the future, and the six people will no longer be the same as they are now, but so what, people should live in the present. What is the Way of Life? To be honest, it's quite sad to see Xu Yi like this. If one day his thoughts are exposed, how will his friends feel when they stand on the opposite side? But maybe those "old monsters" don't care about these emotions that fade away with time. The author's writing is really good, every node appears where it should appear, and the rhythm is compact and not procrastinating [crying]

This is a very special book about cultivating immortality. It is not only about spiritual cultivation on the road, but also about the darkness and injustice in the world. The protagonist has a rough life experience and encounters greater turbulence every time his life becomes dull. He is very distressed and helpless. The family feud has not been avenged, the spiritual practice is stagnant, and the problem of ruthless Taoism is like the sword of Damocles hanging above the head. It is not known when it will fall. The whole story seems to be shrouded in a fog. I'm an old bookworm. This is my first time writing a book review. I really saw a different path in cultivating immortality. The author's writing style is very good, but the updates are a bit slow (I'm going to condemn this [smile]). I hope this book can have a good ending (don't cheat! Please!) The more I look at it, I still feel that Wei Zhuo is very difficult. She already lives a hard life, and I saw more chaotic systems and human nature on Square Mountain. At first, I thought that as the protagonist, she would definitely be able to solve the problems she wanted to solve. However, she is only a young person, and her cultivation is not high. Each of her partners has their own unique abilities. The power of the family, the alienation from her master, and her confusion about the future will definitely make her suffer more and more. I am an ordinary person. I really can't think of any way out for Wei Zhuo. Her path is trapped in this square mountain. How can she get out? Can she still get out?

The character creation is very successful, each has its own personality and its own path. In addition, the world view of the whole book is also very large, and there are also foreshadowing and explanations. Two zero chapters dedicated to explanations are also mentioned. There will be more places to fill in the previous chapters. So far, the whole book is taking shape and has its own world. In the article, the common people's way and the ruthless way mentioned in the main line also have a lot of insights. Cang Sheng said: You can start from the perspective of the human race, you can start from the perspective of the monster race, or you can jump out of this boundary and look at the situation from this world; Qing Wu said: How should you define ruthlessness? Big right, big wrong, either ruthless or passionate, passionate and ruthless, or one step to the end... Sow cause and get result, cause and effect, two ways - difficult (madness). Finally, there is Wei Zhuo's "Look at mountains as mountains and see water as water". The plot has not developed yet, but I am looking forward to what kind of relief and sadness it will be when the time comes. This is not the right way to describe it, but it is still a strange way for people from this world to see the "water" of life.

The author is great. I really like this novel because the characters in it are very vivid, delicate and unique. They are in line with and close to the real life reality, making people really feel immersed in it and resonate with it. Moreover, there are three thousand avenues, and it is unknown whether they can follow their own path well. The "save the world" of Yi Cangsheng Dao = destroy the world. It is crazy, but it is forced. Humans and demons are all common people, which gives people a sense of helplessness. And Sister Wei, like duckweed, drifts with the tide, but she is burdened with too much. In fact, she can not be obsessed with the truth and "live well", but she is indeed living, but she has not been able to truly live well for herself. There are a lot of foreshadowings laid in the book, so I really hope that the author can continue reading. If you really give up, can you tell us so that we can let it go and give each other a chance to let go. I am tired of waiting. I wish the author can follow his own path in the future! ! ! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Big cheers for the author! I like the character of the protagonist very much, and I also like the author Da Da ~ [Shy] Can the author Da Da tell me if the heroine has CP? It's acceptable if you have CP, and it's acceptable if you don't have CP! Will there be abuse later? Are you senior sister Xu and senior brothers? (Please tell me the author... Otherwise I will feel very sad no matter how I read it...[Grieved])

I'm reluctant to read it, so I'll save it. It's really good to watch, and I can learn some principles about how to behave in the world. The stories Wei told them when he was eight years old are still worth pondering for me. Thank you Chen Pi, I understand. This book is different from the previous cultivation novels. I should say that it allowed me to see more intuitively how difficult it is to practice swordsmanship. I was used to watching other protagonists introduce qi into their bodies and so on, but this time I started practicing swordsmanship. It was unexpected and had an indescribable feeling, that is, "I still have to think carefully about whether I can practice swordsmanship in the world of cultivation in the future." All in all, it's really pretty.

A new type of cultivating immortality, it's quite cool, the heroine won't let herself be bullied The five-person group has a sense of mutual redemption. The people I met were all pretty and cute. The heroine should be gentle and gentle, and she should be ruthless But the spiritual roots are not reflected. For example, Shen has ice spiritual roots, so he can adjust the points in the formation. Wei is the root of thunder, so the sword can bring some thunder and lightning, right? 157 It won't be interesting from now on The author is not good at writing fight scenes The plot advancement is a bit stiff and far-fetched The identity of the rest of the protagonist group and the heroine have not been explored at all. I haven't seen much of the heroine practicing

This book is the most realistic of all the fairy tales I have read. The author's writing style is also very good. It made me feel the same way. I knew the truth but was unable to change it. I witnessed what happened and felt the helplessness, pain and tear. I understood that sometimes being smart is a kind of pain. This book is very well written. Keep up the good work, the author. I believe this book will definitely become a hit🔥!

It's really, really good-looking. The author's thinking is very quick and the clues are coherent. The literary talent is also very good. The use of flashbacks makes the plot ups and downs... I highly recommend it. You must watch it. I am really looking forward to the choice of the heroine. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's very interesting to watch. The friendship between the protagonists is also very good. It's a warm feeling and very desirable. I hope Wei Zaizai can solve her problem smoothly. I hope that the protagonists will all have no cp. I'm mainly afraid that the emotional line will affect the main plot. Moreover, this kind of friendship between teenagers is very good. It doesn't necessarily have to have an emotional line. Finally, I hope it won't be discontinued or unfinished.

Come on, author, it's really good, and the writing style is also very good. You can feel a touch of warmth between the lines!

It's very interesting. I hope my wife can continue writing in the future [crying]

It's really, really good to read. I can't get tired of it. It's much better than the current stories that are fast-paced and blessed with all kinds of luck. It feels like a fresh and refined story, and it's well written. I really like the five-person team and the atmosphere of friends between them, growing up together. It's also great to write about the atmosphere of Sister Wei sparring with her senior brothers and sisters! ! ! All in all, this book is really, really good! ! ! ! The only drawback is that it's serialized... I'll update it soon [crying] [crying]