Douluo Dalu: The Seven Heroes of Spirit Hall

Let me give myself a book review. I think other people can have more than a hundred book reviews with 30,000 to 50,000 words. I don't know why there are so few of me [face covering]. From my own point of view, I really like the setting of Douluo Dalu, but the original work of Douluo Dalu hardly describes many of the parts I like. This book can be regarded as a dream come true for me. I talked to my friend about my thoughts, and he said that my slow-paced writing method will definitely be a niche. But originally, I used the act of "writing novels" instead of "reading novels", just to tell a story that I can understand. If it is not a niche, to be honest, I don't think it is something I need to consider. My only requirement for this book is to be "reasonable". I don't allow any mentally retarded person to appear in my book (as much as possible), so I am often slapped in the face by the characters I imagined in my mind when conceiving the plot, causing the plot to not progress. From this point of view, I have worked very hard. If there are still people who think that any character is not very intelligent, then it is my own problem [face covering]. If possible, I hope to write a less fast-food story through this worldview that I like very much. Thank you for your support.

Why is there no one? Because it looks good

This book is really impressive on Tomato

Man, this book is really good, since I downloaded Tomato. I have the patience to finish this, the only Douluo fanfic I have ever read (in order to write a positive review for this book, I logged in specially) I really like the path that the protagonist will take in the future, and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. I hope that there will be a larger world view in the future, because I think the previous part is very exciting, so I hope that he will have an ending that is more worthy of the beginning to complete the story. And I hope no eunuchs will beg for help. I have read a few Douluo fics before and I think they are excellent and I like them, but they are only a few, but I think this book can be included among them. I don't know if the main character in this book will have CP. It's okay but I hope it won't be a harem. I think people who can't even control their lower body can't achieve great things. But if it is a harem and my words have offended me, I'd like to say that I'm really sorry. I hope this work can be seen by more people, come on, the author, keep writing, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!

How can I not share such a beautiful book with you? It's so beautiful. You'll be fascinated by it once you take a look. It'll explode if you look at it more. If you get closer, you'll melt. Ao Baby, it's so beautiful, but it's too short. If it's not good, look for me.

The writing is very good so far, but I feel that it should focus more on the description of each of the Seven Heroes and each other, because the description of the 12 zodiac followers is even more than the description of the Seven Heroes. Of course, this is just a small problem, because I prefer the title of the book! But in general, in other aspects, the plot advancement and detailed description of this book are very novel and in place. As a person who has read many Douluo fan books, I sincerely recommend this book. It is a very good fan novel. I sincerely hope that the author can continue writing.

Nice! Nice! We can't let books like this happen! Stop updating! Come on, author! [Code hold]

The setting of this book is very good, and so is the content. Go next door and continue writing. I have the copyright. If you decide, let us know.

Okay, why didn't I recommend it? [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua] Letting the protagonist eat some grass jelly has no side effects. It can also promote evolution, improve soul power and foundation, and push the protagonist forward. It still can't beat the crowd and can only be said to be one of the top ones for the time being.

The writing is quite good, but I don't know why I wasn't allowed to write it? Very much looking forward to the author's next work.