The System Will Give Me Immortality. I Need to Get Married and Have Children First.

To be honest, I didn't feel much at the beginning, and the plot felt average, but after reading the book, I felt that this book was still good, a little too high, and the author updated it quickly, so it was not enough to read. [Like][Like][Like] Too sloppy...

Harem flow, very good, I finished watching it in one go There is no five stars in the front and one star in the back. The back really disgusts me to death. Are the front and back written by the same author? [Smile]

Although it is an immortal flow, unlike other immortal flows, this one is more harem-oriented. The male protagonist in the front is a bit scumbag to some of the female protagonists, but they don't know that the male protagonist is immortal. They are looking forward to the Shura field in the back. Moreover, the protagonist's upgrade speed is too slow. It took more than 300 years to refine the third level of Qi. And there are some elements of Mötley Crüe in it. There is indeed a monster on the cover who is probably one of the female protagonists. She has been with the male protagonist for 20 years. There are some pitfalls. It depends on how the author fills them in. Just hope it doesn't end badly

Author, what do you say about this book? No evaluation is actually my best evaluation of this book, because except for some unclear details, the rest of this book is really perfect. Not only can you see what you want to see, it also reflects reality. Of course, this is the front, and I don't know what will happen next. If I read it later, including if the author is not unfinished, I will repeat it again. This book actually describes an ordinary person. His mentality is of a high level and a high moral level. He will not be like the so-called immortal, either stuck in one place or in a mess. What the author writes is more in line with a character who has been highly trained and cultivated, that is, the psychological quality of the protagonist is relatively strong and has a relatively high moral concept. Then he came to this world without knowing anything. He has his own ideas and will not be controlled by anyone. If he is different from other longevity lines, it is the concept of the world of mortals and the concept of the secular world. I can't explain this, but if you can read it, you will understand. The previous dozens of chapters are all about getting rid of the secular world, but being in the secular world. The author describes it very well. It just so happens that at that point, I hope you don't care about my comments, but read it seriously. Well, I retract my preface, and I became more and more worried later on. It has a first-class plot, a high-level protagonist, superb descriptions and low-level moral values. If you watch it with your brain or morality, don't tell me that the moral high ground is you. I dare to be more normal. The first part of this book is okay, but forget about the second part. It's really hard to say. The author has written five or six books. I don't know how the other books are. Anyway, this is my evaluation of this book. I find that when you write about immortality, do you always leave a gap? I feel that the author wanted to describe a vagabond who has entered the mortal world for eternity. The result is not a vagabond, but more like the Spanish advocating in the 17th and 18th centuries that men have various relationships with women before marriage and become a stable and reliable husband after marriage. In fact, from a certain evaluation, his writing is very good, but it cannot be seen according to our secular values. However, in some special chapters, he is not a scumbag. What was said in the comment area is too much. It is purely because he has lived here for such a long time and has never understood a correct moral value. He has no system, unlike others, but... I still say the same thing, read it for yourself. If the later readers come, I suggest Don't check the comments, it's best to read them yourself, because the author's writing is really good, but don't look at the values ​​according to our ancient traditional values. In another direction, I personally suggest using the values ​​of Spain in the 17th and 18th centuries, which are very consistent with our current values.

This is a harem-type longevity novel, and the protagonist is very lucky. If the harem of Changshengliu is a harem of scumbag men who run away as soon as they get married, Erxing will give it to you. If the protagonist doesn't have the aura of a protagonist, his scalp will be numb for a long time, and it will be annoying to watch. It is really good to write it as a scumbag who likes to abandon his wife and children.

It's nice to watch, but there are more than 100 million knives. I really want to see all the heroines get together in the finale, even if they are yandere, it doesn't matter [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

I hope I don't let down those female protagonists in the future. I almost got mad to death.

It's very beautiful, but I don't know what to do with these harems later.

It is much better to read than other immortals. Those books that look dry and boring are not many good books. It is very well written, but it is a pity that few people read it. It is not as invincible as those that slowly develop. What about cutting mountains and rivers with one sword and creating the world, and then meeting some demon king and immortal emperor after tens of thousands of years? Chun Chun, this book is really good, very suitable for reading, and raising

The heroine is on the cover and it makes me laugh so hard hahaha [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] Suddenly it feels good

The author gives you a five-star review. How should I put it? Is it a Shura field in the later stage of opening so many harems? If so, ten accounts receive five-star installment reviews.

I read more than a hundred. Scumbag fantasy documentary? Just have a harem, and run away when you're done. Maybe we'll get to know each other later. But I think it might be the kind of recognition in the finale. You can take a look if you like. I don't need to say anything about the protagonist, I just know it after watching it

It's really nice, but the main character's plug-in skills cool down a little long. In the later stages, things started to get a bit unfinished, and I started to breed horses.

I don't expect high-quality online novels, but after reading these few days, it is indeed a good article for me to relax in my spare time after dinner. I hope the author will write it according to the original style and plot concept and it will become my summer resort in this hot summer.

The book is very good, I like it very much. Worth recommending. The book is overall good. I can't see the framework yet, and the world view is grand.

The male protagonist is too afraid of death, but it is reasonable. I feel like the fortune teller is a bit cruel, so let's take care of it for a while. I hope that every heroine and heroine will have a happy ending. Forget about the knife in the middle, but the ending must be sweet. This is my only request, the author [crying]

4 Stars. It's the mainstream version of immortality and multiple women that I like. It's chapter 54 now. There's a white fox wife (the shortcoming is that it's not nine tails [admiration]), a white tentacle wife (this is very suitable for perverted readers [laughing and crying]), a family eldest lady's wife who tells fortunes [admiration] (the background is a bit big, the bodyguard visually guessed that she is a god), and a fierce young woman who cheated in marriage and gave birth to a child (to be honest, I deducted one star because of this, cheating in marriage is still alive) The child, the man who returned home brutally killed the daughter, the adulterer [vomit] [vomit]) To be honest, if I accepted this female ghost, I would give it up. She is really a poisonous person. If you can arrange a normal widow, why should you arrange a bullshit plot of cheating in marriage and giving birth to a child, being killed by her husband, and turning into a ghost to seek revenge? One is a woman who wants to cure her mother (this woman is a ghost, and the master is what I call a ghost). The Golden Egg Monk from the Immortal Cultivation Family (also has a ghost body, and the master is also the evil ghost I said). Apart from the evil young woman who cheated on her husband, which I am not sure about, I am definitely going to take her (because it is the mainstream with multiple women). There are three more that I am not sure about. One is the daughter of a confidante (this is a single spiritual root). One is from childhood (this woman's spiritual root is not mentioned, but she has a golden egg for more than 100 years, so it should be good). The other is In what city did the woman join a gang to trap pigs' feet (the woman's Lingen constitution is not sure yet, the author has not said yet, saying she is a mutated soul). There is another one from the Shura sect that has not happened yet (I just heard about it in the book) and there is also Li Gui's sister (I haven't seen it yet, I heard it in the book). I will follow up on the follow-up review, but Li Gui's background has not been dealt with well, he cheated and gave birth to a child in marriage, and my man came back to see one 4 A 5-year-old child calls himself uncle. Who wouldn't break down if he killed the child and the adulterer (tortured to death). In the end, the adulterer turns into a ghost and asks pig's feet for revenge. (I personally feel that the author forced a plot to advance the plot. It's nothing. It's just that the background of the story was not handled well. Maybe the author wants to write a modern fairy. This is bullshit)

This book is also known as "The Cultivation Manual for Scumbags" and "The Secrets My Tentacle Girl and I Have to Tell"

It's still a very good book. If you don't substitute the perspective of reality into the protagonist's perspective, you will find that the protagonist is a person who wants to live. There is no problem with this. After all, this is the world of immortality. Immortality is everyone's pursuit, but the protagonist is already there. There is no way you can tell me that you will live forever and hide in the mountains and forests for the rest of your life without contacting people [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

It's okay, at least I can watch it. It would be easy to get a score of 9 if the male protagonist doesn't scumbag the emotional scenes and doesn't abuse him. Readers should be able to write whatever they like. Life is not very satisfying to begin with, so reading a novel would be meaningless if it didn't make you happy. Several times I felt that the author had changed people. The protagonist was first a gentleman and then a mutant horse after birth [laughter]

It is well written about a protagonist who is greedy for life, afraid of death, revolts when he sees sex, and thinks that he will do anything to survive as his ultimate goal. Gou, an ordinary person who learns that he can live forever, and the plot of the motherland who indulges his own desires, and the pros and cons of human nature, are well written. I have read many types of immortality novels, and this is the one that recently allowed me to read the latest chapter from the first chapter in one breath. It is undeniable that this protagonist is selfish, but in fact he is also a powerful "ordinary person" who has not yet changed his mentality. Presumably his mentality will change in the future, and then he will be tortured by the Shura Field. I look forward to whether the author's writing style can create a sufficient ending, but I think the souls of the people must be able to resonate with each other. It is hard to say that it is cliché, so I hope your life can allow you to find your own fun in your own time [learned]

It feels good that the male protagonist is so salty but super strong. The story of always wanting to be a lazy person but having constant adventures is very interesting. In addition, the battle scenes are particularly exciting! Boating! Drive! Take a plane! At present, I have seen the female protagonists in Chapter 190 and they are all wowed. The male protagonist has been staying away from the female protagonists because of his longevity. He is very helpless and curious about how to open a harem? Without a harem, it will definitely not work for the male protagonist to be a salty fish. The cool thing is that the male protagonist wants to be a salty fish, but his strength does not allow it [laughing evilly] He is also related to the female protagonists in various ways. I look forward to the author's follow-up performance.

It involves a bit of Cthulhu. As an immortal novel, I think it's okay. It's a bit toxic during the period, so you can let it go. I think the relationship is handled well. It's immortal, but the author hasn't yet explained why those women feel dependent. It feels good

It's pretty good. I'm currently following it. I thought it was a finished book, but it turns out it's still being updated. It's quite good. There are more than 160 pictures. It's worth getting into. He's cool, but he's not invincible. He only has one strongest buff, which is immortality. It's given to him by a system. After that, he ran away, and then his talent was extremely poor. As a result, after more than 160 cards, he is still in the foundation building stage. However, the protagonist has unlimited lifespan and has also obtained some skills about lifespan, which is to lose lifespan, and then gain damage, seals, and temporarily improve his cultivation level. It's still the same, it's pretty good, very beautiful, but sometimes the author likes to use kavin, like now [pouts]

Not bad, but the pressure on the protagonist is too harsh. It takes a hundred or two hundred years to level up twice. Also, the main plot is not clear, and the protagonist does not want to practice cultivation. He just hangs around, which is unreasonable. Cultivating is the most important thing after immortality. It's really too slow. The time span can be large, but the level is lower than everyone else. I feel that writing like this is easy to collapse.

The cry of a bookworm. This book is very immersive. Every plot is so natural. Everything will fall into place. It explains the profound things in a simple way and gradually unfolds the fascinating story. By the way, I would like to remind you to update [love][love][love] Tang Dao is extremely famous. Since you didn't describe the origin of Tang Dao. It shows that this Tang Dao is the Tang Dao that readers know. Used by Tang Dynasty cavalry. It's quite disgusting to write Tang Dao in Xiu Xian. Good thing you didn't do Tai Chi. Baguazhang is written in. Nondescript. In addition. When Li Changsheng was on the second level of Qi Refining and the Household Sect was wiped out, he wasn't killed by a look from the old monster who transformed into a god? Surrounded by powerful enemies. The old monster Yuanying can kill him with just one look.

This book is not a cool novel, and even the main character is one of the most miserable time travellers. However, this is a novel that truly tells a story, without any formulaic formula. It describes a bizarre and majestic alternative world of immortality cultivation through plain and straightforward language. It is natural that this book has a low rating because it does not meet the three formulas of a cool novel, but it is precisely this that attracts me, so I recommend it.

Overall, this is a good novel. Except for the fact that the male protagonist has a scumbag character, it makes me uncomfortable to read it. Maybe the author is planning it? Looking forward to the follow-up development to see if it can come back to normal. After all, there is still a tentacle monster wife and evil god line that has not been unfolded. Everything else is pretty good, the writing is fluent, and the plot is pretty good. Please keep updating.

In this book, the author overtly and covertly satirizes the dark sides of some people and society. It is very real, but I am afraid that it will suddenly disappear one day.

It's pretty cool, but I thought of a bug. If the protagonist packs some yellow spring water, Shouyuan Zhenhuo will become invincible [smile]