The Yin Soldiers Borrowed the Way, Strangers Avoided It, I Repaired the Talisman

After killing the first BOSS, he was quite strong and had obviously become an immortal. Why didn't he use the skills to explode? We also met Taoist priests who exorcised corpses and guarded ghosts. Qingyangzi said that the protagonist of immortality also said that it would not be a world of cultivation, right? Don't you feel confused? [What] But the book is actually pretty good, but it has a lot of minor flaws.

The plot is not bad, but there are many flaws in the handling of details. For example, the reason why the protagonist stays in the city is not obvious enough. If it is to upgrade, it is obviously unwise to risk his life. If it is driven by a sense of justice, there are no characters or plot explanations that are far-fetched. But overall it's pretty good and I hope the author gets better and better.

The author is a newcomer, but this work is too new. The character, characters, and environment feel like they were written in a diary when I was in elementary school, but the diaries are all colored by the weather. The author should study more and write less every day to enrich the content. Don't give points to newcomers, come on!

I think the writing is okay. Each character has his or her own characteristics. The storyline and the multiple graphics are much better than other authors. It would be better if the talisman paper can describe the appearance and the special effects of the spells. It doesn't matter how many words there are ㅍ_ㅍ, but it should be incisive and not written in a flowing way. The pace should not be too fast, which will lead to incomprehension [OK]

It's pretty good. Although it's a bit toxic, it's still okay and acceptable. The various characters and fighting scenes are also very good. The rating of this book shouldn't be so low. I like the weird genre very much. The author writes it very well.

Clear thinking, wonderful story, worthy of praise

The author writes very well. I hope it will be updated soon. I especially like this type of writing.

It's very well written, but I don't know why the rating is so low?

There are a lot of pitfalls, but it's still pretty good. Mainly, I like Pig's Foot's character.

The author should be a novice. Although the plot content of the book has many pitfalls, the overall outline is smooth and it is already very good.

Author, your writing is very good, engaging and interesting. If you don't update it, people will run away.

Sharp! Better written!

Well written, please write quickly

Thank you for your hard work coding, please take a rest. [Laughing]

It's pretty, nothing bad.

It's cool, but I can't sleep a little bit

Not bad, worth a look

I like it very much, it's wonderful I like it very much, very good

I finished reading it in one sitting, it's great

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Wonderful and refreshing, but short.

It's well written, but too short. Although there are three chapters a day, each chapter is too few [laughter]

What a great book. I haven't seen such a good book for a long time. It's just that there are too few chapters.

Not bad! Interesting and worth a look

The plot has ups and downs, but the protagonist has a weak IQ, but he always realizes

The novel is still well written, and it is still readable to a certain extent.

A good book, keep it up.

It's a very nice book, keep up the good work, the author

It's really good, I can't stop watching it

A good book, not tiring to read