Naruto's Fun-Loving Troublemaker: Lord Zetsu Is Invincible in the Shinobi World!

I saw Chapter 139, what should I say? The author is a woman and her writing style is very delicate. This is one of the rare things I've seen in Tomato that has a more delicate writing style, and the writing is so interesting. The story written in the first 100 chapters was relatively smooth, but then from 100 to 139 chapters, I felt that the writing was a bit too detailed. The subtle feelings between them may not be touching enough for me as a grown man, and I may not feel the joy of reading. I may just be a person who has fun. There is also a collection of good sentences. The gentle breeze swept through the pages of the book, scattering the sunlight that came through the window, and slowly blended into the willows.

The author's logic is clear and the plan is meticulous. The bond between each vest and Naruto character is fascinating and strong. The writing occasionally has a twist to tease Black Zetsu and it is interesting. I like the way of describing the emotional bond between the characters very much! ! It's very natural and calm, like a normal way for ordinary people to gain friendship. Although the fate of each vest is limited, their fate has ups and downs, and their emotions and characters are very passionate. I remember the character and characteristics of each vest, and although they died, they all died well! Every critical moment, I am very curious about the ending, and I will sigh at the author's writing style and the plot that captures people's psychology. It's a very, very good book! There is no such thing as Long Aotian and inexplicable group pets. As a fan novel, it is the most comfortable and natural for me to read! Very, very good! ! ! [Laughing][laughing][please update]

The writing, the details, the foreshadowing. The characterization in particular is fantastic. It is really a rare good book about Naruto in Tomato. I just hope that the data will get better and better by the time this book is finished. It's better to evaluate it seriously. Originally, I only evaluated it in order to get a five-star rating. First of all, don't think about the title when reading this book, because the author is growing and so are the characters. Let's first evaluate the protagonist Yilong Sang. A turning point that impressed me deeply was that Yilong's mentality changed from playing games to a real world with flesh and blood. From the beginning, he was just for points to the later, he really made choices for what he wanted. He really grew up a lot. Both Ichiha Uchiha and Yeryuu showed a sense of humanity towards Jiraiya. Being powerful did not make him completely lose his original intention. Although he was always as playful as a child, he would always take responsibility for what he did. This is a charismatic guy, both real and fake. Secondly, the characters in the novel are all flesh and blood. It is not limited to the character of the original work. I think everyone can see the huge changes caused by the actions of the protagonist. This is what I like very much, because the character should be so vivid, not like the big idiot Ye Long who only follows orders! What a ruthless plot machine! Everyone is growing up, only Hei Jue was created awa Secondly, the author's carefulness and novel ideas It will not make readers feel the same and show a ninja world as it should be. There are also a lot of detailed foreshadowings, mostly used to create characters, and to provide certain explanations for behaviors that are inconsistent with the original work. I won't say much about the writing style, because I am a bad reader and don't have much ink. I can only say that the writing techniques in many places are very good at arousing the readers' emotions. Speaking of which, I really think that this book should definitely get a higher score. It is absolutely okay to get a 9.0 Score, but I think a large part of the reason is because the title and cover, as well as the content at the beginning, dissuade some people. But to be honest, I don't think Leziren fits the protagonist. Because the portrayal of the protagonist, to me, is a smart, sharp, gentle, and funny guy. In other words, someone who can be regarded as a trustworthy partner. I dare to say that if it weren't for the danger and the capital to resurrect people, Yilong would never have let Warring States F4 die so hastily. If it weren't for his various invincible abilities, he would be the most solid and trustworthy support in the eyes of his students and peers. I can roughly imagine the final ending. Everyone was alive, some cried, some laughed, and some couldn't laugh or cry. Everyone is cherishing the peaceful time of living. (Self-fantasy) Switching scenes amidst everyone's laughter is a dialogue with the system Yilong looked at Konoha on the Hokage Rock, or the world that had been unified exclaimed that it was great. At this moment, a group of Otsutsuki's problems had been solved, and there was no problem with Black Zetsu. Therefore, it was basically a certainty that the Rakuten system would become a decoration. But don't forget it's a system. The system doesn't only have Naruto's props, so it shouldn't be too much to be able to go to other worlds, right~? So in the XXX world, I will be very hot as soon as I step on the horse!

It's not bad, the plot is acceptable, and it's enjoyable to watch. It's much better than the average Naruto fanfic, but the writing style needs to be improved.

At first I was attracted by the author's humorous ability to make trouble, but then I started to use CP with real feelings. Each vest has a different personality, but every pair of CP is a masterpiece! The most commendable thing is the description of Hei Jue. From the beginning, he was a tool man whose mentality was manipulated by wool harvesting, and turned into an intelligent creature with self, thoughts and emotions. The writing is very delicate. I like Tobirama the most! The master-disciple team goes to Oita! Tobirama-sensei is really full of security, whether it is spiritual guidance, tolerance, indulgence, or ninjutsu research and development, prediction, and knowing the truth, the feeling of being both a teacher and a friend is great. It's unbelievable that this is the author's first article, and the future is promising.

I have read at least 60 Naruto books, and I really like this one. First, there is no female protagonist (at least there is no one so far, and there is no ambiguity, and the character portrayal is really good [admiration]). Second, it is a bit refreshing, and it is really funny to see Kuro Zetsu being defeated. Third, Although there is a knife, I like this knife very much. The more I read it, the more I get attracted to it [Shy] The fourth one is pretending to eat a spotted heart. Black Zetsu's reaction is really funny, some are funny and some are refreshing. All in all, this article is really good, but can the author make sows more productive? [Grieved] This little article is not enough [crazy]

It's a very good article. I originally came in with the hope of reading a mindless and enjoyable article, but it completely subverted my understanding. None of the foreshadowing in the early stage was wasted. The characters in the later stages are getting more and more full, and the writing is very good and very smooth. I don't like to wait for slow updates, so I stayed up late to read it after it was finished. The whole state is like an old woman who has become an immortal: Wow! I'm done! It's really a treasure and a good article, NND, it's not enough to read. After reading it, I still feel unfinished. The stamina is too great, and the protagonist's waistcoat and knife are a bit uncomfortable, but he is also very happy. The main theme is that he is in pain and happy! Brothers, it would be a loss if you don't read it. This fanfic is so good! I hope the author can write more follow-up, it's a very good article! ! ! (Although the name is a bit outrageous, I am really happy!)

The writing is good, the plot is good, and it's to my liking.

I cried to death, Ye Long is really (wailing) I like Ye Long's character, that kind of emotionless weapon, but showing very few emotions in front of the person he cherishes. I don't know how to say it, but the design of Ye Long's vest is so successful. I think the design is very sensible, and I really like this kind of character who obeys orders without hesitation but maintains his obsession with certain things or people. Ye Long is simply one of the few and relatively good character vests in my heart. Especially some of the actions and words that echo the words in the previous plot, I can only say that the author is very good and remembers it very firmly. Anyway, when I write my self-recommendation in the note, I always forget the plot. Sometimes I forget the foreshadowing laid before and forget some characters. As a result, the plot and characters of my self-recommendation are always vague and the plot mainly focuses on a miserable one (I am so damned. JPG) So the author deserves to be praised, this must be praised, I like this (like) (Secretly, I also secretly set up a small window for myself to write on the notes. This is the cool persona!) Let me borrow a little bit from Ye Longjun's character here and quietly code a message in the memo (it's definitely not Ye Longjun himself). Again, this character is cool! ! [Love][Love][Anger]

I really love this kind of fun person. The last time I read a novel about time travelers and fun people doing things was the last time. It feels really good to have everything under control. Many plots are really completely unexpected and feel unexpected and reasonable. I also like the character of the protagonist, but mainly I think the plot is good.